Naruto: Uzumaki Menma's Elusive Home

Your opening is a spoiler... The book I read has such an opening is so boomeranging, come on, I hope you can hold on 😂

Come on, there aren't many books about Menma. I hope it's more showy and less funny. After all, it's Menma.

Missy

When did the eldest daughter Hinata and the main world Hinata separate? They can't always have two souls to help Naruto and Menma give birth to children. That would be too poisonous. Menma's child appeared in the story of Sage of Six Paths!

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that it has a hammer in one place and a stick in the other.

The creativity is good and the plot is okay, but it feels like the same person is talking in different images all the time. The writing is too poor.

It's not fun to read, and there's no sense of immersion. It feels like I'm reading an outline. …I felt like I was reading a diary, simply recording everything that happened. In fact, the content and subject matter are quite good.

How should I put it, the author made a fatal [mistake]! The author's job is to write novels, more specifically, [telling stories]. As for what happens after the story is told, it has nothing to do with the author. It may be more [implicit] to say this. Let's put it bluntly: Author Xiao, just focus on telling the story. Why are you participating in the discussion? There are so many Naruto fans, do I need you, the author, to [explain] something? Do I need you to [define] right or wrong? The author should just tell stories and let readers discuss, argue, and argue... Do you have anything to do with the author? The result of the author's participation in the [debate] is... The readers who are refuted by the author will be very unhappy, and you will lose these readers; the readers who are approved by the author will not be grateful to the author, because these readers will feel that they are right and have something to do with your author. Whether you agree or not, readers don't care at all.

The idea is very good, and it makes people want to read it as soon as they see the title. The first few chapters are really good, but then there is a crushing fight, a little more explanation, and then it feels a bit bland to read. I immediately read the beginning, and there are so few Hinata scenes in the beginning. As I read it slowly, I hope there are more Hinata scenes.

The book is quite good, but it's a pity that the author has passed away and has stopped updating. I'm sweeping the grave\|/

I see that there are two Narutos in this world, but Hinata only has one and two souls. The shy Hinata likes Naruto, and the eldest Hinata likes Menma. How to tell the difference? Even if they look the same, Naruto and Menma are not the same person after all.

I suddenly discovered something. I remember Uchiha Madara said in the plot, a pair of eyes is stronger. Whether it is Obito's Kamui or Uchiha Madara's Rinne Tomb, you only have one left, but you have the conditions to upgrade to the Rinnegan without going blind, and Menma himself does not lack vitality. , The strength, there is only a complete nine-tails, according to Asura, the power of Indra Yin, at least it is the kind that can directly use Susanoo with three magatama as soon as the eye is opened, and it has become one eye, which is not so overwhelming in terms of combat power. Don't think that it is just one more eye, that is half the output and half the blue bar.

What is the second half of the introduction?