Earth Life Observation Diary

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Only science fiction and supernatural powers are Xianyu's comfort zone. What is cultivating immortality? Is that something you can write?

The first science fiction writer in my mind is Lao Yu.

If you can't write well, you can't write well. I'm going to talk about this and that. Is it so difficult to admit that I can only write the first few hundred thousand words of the opening chapter? I thought that those who were barely finished writing on the public account were not so forced at the end. The eunuchs were done.

The plot of the agent at the beginning was quite interesting, but from the beginning of the human game to the rebirth of the protagonist, it turned into an ordinary story about leveling up and fighting monsters, which was a huge disappointment.

What did you write after the resurrection? Was it written by one person?

There is an SB who changes his account to establish the government, and there is also a gambling dog who keeps pretending to be cool. He has said so many times that the novel group should not talk about this, but he just doesn't listen. Laoyu didn't kick out those SBs either. It turned out to be fun. I reported it many times and the group disappeared. I'm happy

As expected of you, I will never read your book again until it has less than 1.5 Million words!

Brother, what I want to see is the protagonist descending into the ordinary world, and then smashing everything against the state machine. After writing so many chapters, you are still playing in the mud with the stowaways and evil teachers, right? What you are writing now has nothing to do with advancing the main plot.

After reading the first chapter, an unknown life form appeared, and the person with the highest position on the scene had to go up to negotiate on his own and couldn't stand it anymore. Do you think it's glorious to not be afraid of death? There's nothing great about not being afraid of death. Many times your responsibilities are more important than your life! It's not the time to organize a death squad to charge. Senior officers take the lead. You don't think about how easy it is for you to get into trouble. Who are you going to blame for the subsequent mess? Isn't this harmful?

After resurrection, it's just a… wet… waste of time…

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

Generally speaking, what I wrote above feels a bit like a National Games game later, so forget it, and a backup resurrection later. What's the point? After resurrection, you will still be you, and it's better to let aliens copy an Earth next to you for fun, or make a few more copies to complete the experiment. What's the point of choosing an Earth for experiments? What is the significance of the protagonist choosing a project that is relatively peaceful for humans from all kinds of unreliable alien experiments? With the author's writing style, it is possible for aliens to copy 100 Earths and complete all the experiments at once. Originally, the alien was just a college student who came out to do experiments, and his abilities were limited. It made sense to pick one earth to be a scourge, but later on, the alien was said to be omnipotent and omnipotent. What is the meaning of this?

The reason why this book is not pleasing to the eye is that he has been weakened from a well-dressed boss to a little loser. Everyone is in the growth department, but this one is the other way around. . Of course, it is also possible that the author is pursuing something new and different.

It was a waste of my subscription. It was good before it was put on the shelves, but it turned into shit after that. To put it bluntly, if you want to write like this, don't mention the starting point limit. Just say that you can't write it.

After the resurrection, it was as if someone else had written it. The front and back were so divided that it didn't even resemble a novel.

After reading a few chapters after the resurrection, I can only say that I feel nothing.

What did I write after my resurrection? It's so bad.

The three-body two-way foil illustrates an undoubted truth for science fiction but is ignored by many people! If a person is bitten by a dog, he will be beaten to death with a stick, poisoned with a bone, or hit by a car. These are all two-way foils beyond the cognition of dogs. But the only thing I won't choose is to grind my teeth, keep my nails, and then bite with the dog. The idea is good, but Luo Ji is wrong.

Emm, it looked pretty good at first, but later on it felt too cruel, but when I think about it, this is the thinking of alien creatures who really don't regard earthlings as human beings. However, the latest plot is a bit unacceptable. The protagonist sacrifices himself to save all mankind and then is reborn in a new body more than ten years later.

After all, it's still...

I'm too lazy to complain. I won't read any books you write in the future.

Fishing, every opening is indeed very exciting and interesting. I was fascinated by it last night and I am not energetic today.

To be honest, the previous writing is quite good. But after the campus chapter, it was terrible, and then it got worse and worse.

The book really fell apart after the campus chapter. I actually liked the campus chapter. I thought it was well written. But later on, the protagonist revealed his identity and started looking for some key. It was completely boring.

Finished? I haven't had time to read it. Although I subscribed for 20 chapters, I will definitely give you 5 recommendation tickets every day. It's over.

Starting from chapter 75, there are two novels. After chapter 75, it starts with a light novel of daily life + manifestations of saints in front of people + no big main plot. I don't know what to do. The plan to move to the parallel world has also been abandoned?

Isn't it bad again, 😥

You can see it, but it's too old and a bit unsightly

The update is too slow