
Naruto: I'm Only Ten Years Old, What the Hell Is Lao Den Counterattacking?
火影:我才十岁,老登逆袭什么鬼
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- 193k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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Let's quickly change the timeline while we are only a few thousand words old. How could it be possible that the Third Hokage became the third Hokage in Konoha in 20 years? It's so exciting to write. Although it is said that Tobirama died early, he lived until the 37th year of Konoha, Tsunade became the Hokage around the age of 50, and she became the Hokage in the 63rd year of Konoha (Naruto Graduated in 1963 and took the Chunin Exam in the same year), so she was born in 13 years. Orochimaru and Jiraiya are the same age as her. Of course, you can write that she was born in 10 years, but this timeline has more bugs, but no matter what, it is impossible to have three generations in 20 years.
I remember the toad Fukasaku said that it took Jiraiya several years to learn the sage mode, so he said that Naruto was a genius when he learned the sage mode in just 3 months. Moreover, Jiraiya graduated first and then learned the psychic art from the third generation. He went to Mt. Myoboku to reverse channel the spirit. It is impossible to learn the sage mode so quickly. Refer to the young Jiraiya in the Naruto mobile game. He only knows a lot about throwing, psychic and some simple fire escape.
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Collecting them together makes them easier to delete. I wrote novels just to be an emperor, to assassinate others... I forgot about it in the middle, and then forgot about it later. In short, in order to ensure that the author is in a good mood, I will delete unpleasant comments. I will only keep negative comments that are normal in tone and related to the content of the novel.
When I entered the first chapter, I was given the image of a pure trash protagonist, which was very strange 🤔
What the hell? The author should figure out a persuasive timeline before talking about it.
Chapter 6 What the hell?
Jiraiya is a genin who takes the lead in practicing senjutsu. The basics of senjutsu are not satisfied with the amount of chakra. Also, Jiraiya, even in the later stage, can't condense the senjutsu chakra in the battle. You only have the interference of two shadow clones. You can transform a piece of senjutsu into a chicken feather. You have just been killed instantly. Shadow clones are more fragile.
Seeing Chapter 5, is this a substitute technique used as a space ninjutsu? Isn't it said that the substitute technique is just a deception?
Jiraiya knew Sage Mode when he was a child, right?
The rewards given by this system under normal circumstances are too poor. A loser will be granted proficiency in the fire system after defeating an Uchiha with a kaleidoscope?
Don't let the protagonist be Konoha's dog again
6. Jiraiya is already in sage mode when he is only a few years old.
There is nothing shameful about enduring cheating. It's just that the cheating methods are too poor and you will be eliminated. If you are eliminated in the exam or you are discovered in the task, you will fail.
Such a confident author, like it (Daggy)~
You will see a 12-year-old Jiraiya in the book. He can activate the Sage Mode alone, starting as an elite Jonin 🤓 A brief explanation: 1. I am not sure whether the 12-year-old Jiraiya will be able to activate the Sage Mode, but the original book has a very clear text until the middle and late stages when he fights Pain, which confirms that Jiraiya will not be able to activate the Sage Mode alone. 2. Join According to the author, Jiraiya entered Mt. Myoboku when he was 6 years old, so he will definitely know Sage Mode at the age of 12 (although I don't understand the logic). So the original book clearly mentions that the first prerequisite for Sage Mode is an extremely huge amount of chakra. Calculating the people who actually know it, the chakra of our minimum jounin level should be very low. Then taking into account the overall increase in ninja body phantom attack and defense in Sage Mode, it is no problem for elite jounin to just base it. 3. In fact, I have ignored countless unreasonable processes related to age, chakra, natural state of mind, etc., But the logic and facts still cannot be followed. To sum up, the first few chapters are very unfavorable 😅
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The author has great imagination, can I imitate the author's imagination🤤
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I'm convinced. Did I become a eunuch just after I subscribed?
The introduction alone has no less than 10 points.
Well (¯―¯٥), the rhythm is completely out of touch with the plot of Naruto, but it is like a fantasy martial arts written in Naruto's skin.