Journey to the West, Starting with the Catfish Transformation and Seventy-Two Transformations

When a modern person encounters a dilemma, he only has one chance to transform. Why can't Bai Ze, Xuanwu, and Dragon Phoenix transform into a catfish?

The writing is very good, but it has nothing to do with Journey to the West. It's 63 chapters and it's still about the lowest ninth-level warrior. It would take a thousand chapters to become a small heavenly soldier. It's also about Journey to the West. Please change the title of the book quickly.

The writing is strong, but the plot is a bit too cliched. I couldn't read it anymore after reaching chapter 45. Since the main plot is to find monkey hair to kill monsters to gain aura, then just follow this development, and then join the force to become a bounty hunter, following the cheesy routine of the Yakuza style. It is difficult to come up with new ideas if you have a good outline and use dark blue dots and other old-fashioned wisdom.

The advantage is that the plot is very smooth, the characters are clearly created, there is no obvious plot to reduce intelligence, and there is no messy text. It is already better than 90% of the authors. The shortcomings lie in some details. One is that the dialogue between the characters does not match the identity and personality of the characters. The small characters speak in a formal manner, while the characters with status are very vulgar... The second is the behavior of the characters. The protagonist who claims to be "cautious" suddenly shows off his carelessness, does secret things without avoiding others, and does not consider his own situation. The supporting characters do some bad things unscrupulously, and then they are bumped into by the protagonist... Several supporting characters from the good camp have not known each other for a day, but they are talking to each other in a shallow and profound way... In addition, wherever the protagonist arrives, There are not many ordinary people here. Every supporting character with a name has a small plot. There are so many sleeping dragons and phoenixes in a small county... Improve the details, make the behavior logic fit the characters, and the look and feel can be improved to a higher level. Come on, you will be the next potato🤓

Is anyone still writing about Journey to the West now? And even if you write about Journey to the West, are you still writing about monsters?

It's really outrageous that the protagonist is bullied like this and still has such a good attitude towards two ordinary people. With such force, what kind of rich man can't be solved with a single blow? What's even more outrageous is that the rich man has a pile of belongings in front of you, but in the end, he gave you a handful. The rich man's wife just stole your pearls and didn't give you the certificate. The protagonist is really a holy mother.

The writing is very good, but so far it really has little to do with Journey to the West. The dragon corpse in Yingchoujian is the little white dragon. It is very well written and I will follow it.

I think it's well written 👍

I can't say the writing is good, I can only say it's barely readable. Of course, that excludes the character of the protagonist who always has to be forced into a desperate situation before killing people.

As soon as I came in and saw the main character's motto, I knew this was a good book

Provincial officials kill men decisively but do not kill women.

I like your subject matter very much, and what you wrote earlier is also good. It's just that the character Luo Caihuan really can't stand up to scrutiny. In the scene of the stubborn child, Zheng Tong pulled her waist, and she was still affectionate. Even Zheng Lang came out. She looked very much like a passerby. From this, it can be seen that her IQ is really not worthy of the heroine. Besides, the personality changes later on are too big. Looks good. And even if the male protagonist almost had something happen to her, wouldn't the male protagonist remember his relationship with Zheng Lang? Come on! I hope you can become a master and only express your own opinions and have friendly discussions.

The writing is good, but the system is flawed!

The protagonist doesn't do things smoothly at all, he's fickle, kills people without silence, and leaves his tail behind when doing things.

After reading more than 30 chapters, there is still a change. Isn't this trying to sell someone else's meat?