Girlfriend Refresh: A Goth Girl Appears from the Start

I saw it at 34 o'clock and now I've finished it. It's really well written. The writing of this spiritual girl is so brilliant. The author obviously has thought about this group, but the author restrained the excessive description and did not extend it to the reality of suffering. He retained the characteristics of the Internet article and kept it to the point. It seems that the author is a veteran from outside the country, and his writing is relatively mature. Although there are still some problems such as the rhythm, but it is probably the reason why the plot has not developed. In short, Shennong has read it and it is good to watch. Chen Yan, Chen Yan, it is hard to imagine that there is such a clean and self-sufficient spiritual girl in reality, even if it is just for the mentality of selling for a price. These groups reflect too many heavy things. In my heart, they are the same kind of people as the Wei, Jin and hippies, or even the same person. This person shows different appearances in different cultural backgrounds and social ecological niches. This character even reminds me of the thrill I felt when I first read the online article, which is the desire and vision for a better world. Unfortunately, I don't have Yanzi's naturally sensitive and successfully evolved intelligence. My sensitivity has turned into inferiority, pride, and arrogance. I hope everyone will have a good ending.

This is the first time I have seen someone describe the inner world and experiences of spiritual girls so accurately. Their views on love are very strange, they are both pure love and playfulness. Zhang Yan, who was rescued in this article, does not exist in reality. Perhaps they were hurt the most in love when they met a "good guy." They met a beautiful woman by mistake and then continued their own lives, a guilty good man and a girl with an unhappy family.,, "",,,

Apart from having a diploma, the protagonist feels unworthy of a spirited girl

Isn't this better than those Tokyo novels that just keep brushing aside, or the rebirth novels that are created from the same mold? There is no childhood sweetheart, no school belle, the plot is excellent, the collection ratio is 3:1 during the storage period of new books, and the quality of high-quality products is guaranteed 1. Blackmailed by the spirited girl. 2. Follow her to experience spiritual life. 3. The spirited girl dares to love and hate, and knows how to fight. While blackmailing her elder brother, she dresses up beautifully for the protagonist to see, and uses superb tricks to make the protagonist slowly accept her. 4. The rhythm of the plot feels very fast, novel and funny, but also very reasonable. In the end, the two did not get together. "Love your neighbor first, love yourself" as the ending of the first stage. 5. An interesting female ghost appears, corresponding to the second girlfriend agreement. 6. A bi-personality psychopath and a hidden yandere has stayed in the male protagonist's home.

This novel by the author is actually a forced transfer of Japanese literary conventions to China. But because of the acclimatization, localization feels weird. The spiritual girl actually corresponds to the hot Japanese girl. The story of picking up an amnesiac girl, a fat bald man, and a female imp, if you place these plots in the Japanese society in Japanese literature, they will feel very normal and there is no sense of violation at all. But it's a bit weird in China, which makes many plots unreasonable. There is also the character of the male protagonist. Isn't he just the classic "Asashi" male protagonist in Nikgaru harem novels? But from our perspective, we feel that the male protagonist's behavior is mentally retarded and immature. If these setting plots were placed in a Japanese novel, it would actually not be so awkward.

Anyone who can write and read this kind of article is a god. If nothing else, it is really rare to write about a spirited girl as the heroine in this context. Even the hot girls in the Tokyo novel are pure hot girls, but in fact, it is almost the same as this one. The heroine of this book has not been picked up so far. The patch is clever, so it is not a big advantage. It can only be a bit toxic but not too much, or I dare not really write about a spiritual girl.

It's still messy with constant cuts and tidbits. All I can see clearly is that the protagonist is a scumbag.

There is nothing wrong with the writing, but I feel that if the setting is in an island country, it would be more consistent. It always feels very abstract in the mainland Also at the beginning, if I can emphasize it again, the protagonist is not interested in the spiritual girl, but is interested in the first agreement. I want to read it. It's fun, so I obey that girl to pull me. This kind of sense will make people want to read more. Of course, the most important thing is the domestic spiritual girl. I can only say that there is a stereotype. Mainly because I have actually seen it, it is very abstract. If you can hope to change it to a foreign one.

How to say it? I feel that if the story is set in Japan, I will enjoy watching it more. Some of the plots are really outrageous.

It seems that the devil from outside the territory has come to the starting point to prove the truth.