Hong Kong Variety Show: I Want to Live Forever

This book is so painful to write! It gives people the feeling that they are pretending but not pretending well.

I pinned it and suddenly found that there were no updates. After research, I discovered that the author's previous books were very short, and the updates started to be intermittent again. I personally feel that this book is dangerous. To be honest, I really like the imagination and narrative style of this book. I hope the author will not be affected by those malicious comments? Come on!

The most feared thing in current fan fiction is eunuchs. The protagonist travels to the world of cultivating immortals, thinking about nothing but immortality and giving up on love and sex. Reject parents. From an ordinary person to a stone without emotions and desires, it is just a matter of time travel. The sense of fragmentation is extremely severe. When I read your profile, I don't think about anything but immortality. Personally, I think you practice a kind of fossil technique. Turn directly into a stone. Absolute immortality. Simple and efficient.

After reading more than ten chapters, it's so boring, as if the author wants to teach you to be a teacher. Why do you do this? Do this? Why? Nagging, nagging, oh, my brain hurts when I see a 2,000-word piece of sermon excluding the 1,500-word sermon. There is not much left. You are like this even if you don't put it on the shelves. Is it okay if you put it on the shelves?

Don't explain so much. A large paragraph in one chapter explains why the protagonist or supporting character does such a thing, what is the meaning of doing so, and what are the benefits. There is really no need to explain that much.

Actually, it's probably okay, but I'm shaking so much that I don't want to look at it.

If I want to say something, I'm afraid it will be too dirty, but if I don't say it, I'll feel too wronged. The author's novel is not good

The most stupid author is to constantly remind readers that you are just reading a novel, a made-up novel.

When writing a novel, write it well. Don't write a few sentences of plot and write a lot of inner secrets. If you want to write about the protagonist's egotism, you can implement it from action through creative contradictions, instead of letting a 12-year-old Le Huizhen see the egotistical tyranny hidden under the calm protagonist when she works in the newspaper office. There are at least seven or eight poisonous points in this paragraph. What do people think?

Brother, are you a little self-righteous? You wrote an undercover novel just after being expelled from school. Do you really not regard the police as a public servant? If someone tries to mess with you, your family will be ruined. And why do you think you can make money by writing novels? Really self-righteous

The creative introduction to this book is so well written, but the content is so different. I am extremely disappointed.

It's a pretty good setting, but it was ruined by the lengthy babble.

It's hard to describe the writing style, it's all extraordinary, although there isn't much, but it always emphasizes and repeats connections, no problem, just a few chapters are always about connections, connections, connections, connections, and then connections, connections, connections, connections, I'm a little speechless.

What are you writing about? Can a novel restructure the police force? Doesn't that mean the police force publicly admitted that they were wrong? Who does the protagonist think he is? And you always preach. I am watching Hong Kong TV Series just to see you preach? Who do you think you are, author?

As mentioned, I read a few chapters. The whole process is about popularizing movies and life principles, which is far-fetched and makes people laugh. The whole process is about what the protagonist thinks mentally and how the world should better revolve around him. The plot can be seen at a glance. "You know" I am allergic to these three words. When I was a child, I was tired of writing diaries.

I feel like a primary school student who wants to write a masterpiece

I don't dare to fight, I don't dare to do things, and I am procrastinating in doing things. Since I have to cultivate immortality, and I have already made money to support my family, I have to make my own decisions. Why can I just start a chapter with a sermon? Every decision must have a detailed mental journey to explain the causes and consequences. The novel is not an educational textbook and there is no need to go into so much detail. The storyline is compact and connects the previous and the following.

It's too long-winded. I'm explaining and explaining throughout the whole article. I read novels to entertain myself, not to learn. I'll withdraw.

Alas, I really don't know what you are writing about. How can there be so many psychological activities? Aren't you just looking for Fengqing to buy medicinal materials? When he gets it, he'll come to you. If he doesn't, you'll go to him. There are so many twists and turns. Your goal is to live forever, can't you just insert some stories in the middle? Write about the abilities brought about by immortality. Now we are starting to fight against this kind of strategy. What will you write in the later stage?

It's completely self-enjoying, with a lot of inner drama, and a feeling of indifference, but it's not that exciting. The author can be considered capable if he can write more than 200 chapters. Readers who can see it on the shelves and continue to subscribe are ruthless people. How boring, rich and painful it must be.

Why is this author so fond of preaching and private things? He is very egotistical and very powerful in reality. He has always been a class monitor since he was a child. If someone else becomes a class leader, he will find fault and pull him down. I also read that in the first chapter of a book, the protagonist traveled to Marvel and went to Stark to apply for a security guard job. Then Pepper interviewed him in person. You are the protagonist of the book, writing a novel and submitting it, and you have achieved an achievement on your first visit: the newspaper lady has taken a direct liking to you, and the newspaper boss's wife wants to marry you. You might as well rename the protagonist Zhao Ritian.

Tai Luo said, a small thing means a lot of thoughts in my heart 😴😴😴😴😴😴

Don't read it, please author. If you don't know how to write, you can use AI.

I'm too lazy to talk about you, because you won't change either. You will only follow the steps step by step and move yourself. You will probably refute what the readers know. Any work by a great writer is put on the altar by readers one after another, but you just ignore the readers' suggestions. . . . . Too lazy to tell you.

The start is all 💩, not even as good as AI

All the mistakes that can be made in Hong Kong TV shows have been made. If you are not an orphan, do others look at you or your family members? If you write a novel within a novel, this is a Hong Kong variety show, not a Hong Kong entertainment show. After more than ten chapters, Momojiji still can't get started with cultivation, and it's very general. Others only care about fighting and killing, not the sophistication of people. Don't pretend that the protagonist you wrote is very strategizing, but in the eyes of readers, he is just a clown. Why, defeating the entire world with the power of one person is the correct way to write Hong Kong Wu/Xian

Although there are a lot of ink explanations for the first two hundred or so chapters, we are still moving forward, but now it is impossible to update and update, and it is more troublesome to explain more private things. Obviously I can finish it in half a chapter, but if I insist on writing more than twenty chapters, this is not filling water, it is filling the sea into the swimming pool!

The word count was too low. When I saw that the description of psychological activities in Chapter 6 accounted for more than half of the word count, I gave up decisively. 😤😤😤

It's a bit poisonous indeed. The protagonist wants to climb up, and then sets up a rich family setting, which is also divided into first-class, second-class and third-class. The third-class includes junior, intermediate and peak. Specifically designed to block the protagonist's ascending passage. I don't know how those who don't have golden fingers can rise to the next level...

It turned out that I could write a section over and over 10 times and clip it together into one chapter I saw Chapter 7 I couldn't help but complain Author, you are such a genius You must have unparalleled talent in hydrology