
Under One Person: I Am Really Not a Stranger.
一人之下:我真不是异人啊
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- Completed
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- 786k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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Hands are too soft
The setting is good, but they are already practicing Chinese martial arts, so it's okay if they don't kill, and they even knock Quan Xing unconscious. Just smash the Dantian, cut off the limbs and make them useless. I'll keep them later and take revenge on you. I really think Quan Xing is a person who respects rules. He just debuted and was not ruthless. It's all for nothing.
The author said a few things 1. Chinese martial arts can change one's character. Dragon Snake Wang Chao was not very courageous at first. Chinese martial arts can promote the comprehensive development of human body's energy and spirit from the beginning of Ming Jin, making people more courageous as they practice. The realm you set for the protagonist is too high, and the fighting scenes are not very good, or you did not write it out. Ming Jin's protagonist should be strong enough to weigh a thousand pounds and be proficient in moves, but you didn't write any moves. The protagonist of An Jin, An Jin is like a needle pricking the internal organs. Using Hua Jin to hit someone is like hanging a picture with strength that penetrates the whole body. Every part of the body must be exerted with force. When An Jin is promoted to Hua Jin, it is necessary to find the power to move, to find the Tao in one's heart, and to have one's own (self-created or skilled) tricks. Danjin gathered a little strength all over his body and was completely transformed. His teeth were like those of Sakyamuni, weighing 40 grams. The strength of the whole body increased sharply. Before Dan Jin, he was still a human, but after Dan Jin, he was no longer human, just like an immortal Buddha. Dan Jin takes action with all his strength, just like the initial explosion of Hong Meng, which can directly blow people to pieces and turn iron into clay. In fact, Gang Jin still belongs to the category of Dan Jin, but it has gone further and has not yet reached the point where God is not bad. He can hit three inches in the air, and his body functions have reached their peak. This kind of person, whose eyes can hurt anyone just by looking at him, can be called a great master. Ba Liming's random arrow attacks, Tang Zichen's dragon-snake attack, and Wang Chao's Heaven-shaking Seal. Most of the characters' moves are Chinese martial arts moves. They have their own unique skills, and every move and everything must make sense. You, the protagonist, claim to be proficient in eighteen kinds of martial arts, but after you take action, it seems like you have mastered all the king's eight punches, and nothing works. I feel like an ordinary person who insists he is Gang Jin.
The first few pictures were good, with decisive killings, but then he changed into a different person. His sister didn't care about life and death, and was still messing around, saying that she was her own sister. After fifty or sixty pictures, she still hasn't rescued her. What are you doing? Calling the police can save you faster than you can save yourself. I seriously doubt that someone changed after ten photos.
Concurrent major or specialization?
Guoshu can be regarded as a method of literary training, and it can also cultivate both life and life. Personally, I feel that the difference between it and Yi Ren Qi Refining is that Guoshu starts with strength and qi and blood (essence?) As its foundation, while Yi Ren Qi (qi?) Is its foundation. The practice of both requires a strong mind (god?) To the highest and deepest levels. I won't talk about specialization alone If I want to do both, maybe it would be better to combine the two? The first three chapters are well written 😊 Come on!
When I met the original character, he was like a licking dog, with no real character. He was either useless or useless with the character he created. He was an invincible loser.
After reading Chapter 20, I felt deeply afraid that my cousin would not die.
I tell people everywhere that this is my weakness, and I'm afraid that others won't know and use this to threaten you 😅
There are many ways to get the protagonist involved in the plot, and the author chose the most disgusting one. Isn't it okay to let the protagonist reach a bottleneck in cultivation, suddenly realize that there are strangers in this world, and then want to refer to the skills to break through the bottleneck? The protagonist must first become the target of public criticism, and then have to perform a game. Does the protagonist not need to practice and have a lot of time? In reality, are you happy when someone wrongfully accuses you of being unable to control yourself?
Another person who is an immortal but not practicing martial arts, he really took off his pants and farted.
Author, when you write about Chinese martial arts, can you make the description of battle more exciting? When you write about fighting, it feels like two old ladies fighting and dancing in the street. The focus of Chinese martial arts is the perception of one's character. Your description is completely unremarkable.
Stop watching
If you don't know how to write an invincible article, why should you write an invincible article? If there is a conflict, it won't be extended for a few chapters or a dozen chapters, right? Lushan used water for dozens of chapters, and it was put on the shelves. I went to the headquarters to solve the problem of the development of Chinese martial arts so quickly. I thought this situation was gone, but it turned out that it was still a failure when I went to the Wang family.
I feel like the writing is quite strange. The character design in the first few chapters seems to be standing still, but when it comes to Feng Shayan, it starts to get shaky. 😵 It was clear that the previous chapters were quite interesting, but suddenly I couldn't stand it anymore.
Shennong
The writing of the first 20 or so chapters was fine, but the follow-up started to feel awkward. There were problems with the time design, the plot design, the characters did not match the beginning, the main plot did not advance, and the branch plots were a waste of text.
First of all, the driver's question: if the first three people have their merits revoked, you will send them to the public security bureau. A driver may have done something against the principles, but it won't blow out a kidney, right? Translated into a foreigner, it is equivalent to not only losing his power and breaking an arm, because all the organs of the foreigner can play an important role, but also a virgin will seek refuge with President Feng when he is insulted by the baby. How come the protagonist will not take action against Feng Shayan? If you take action and teach her a small lesson, I will look down upon you and not understand it very well.
To be honest, the alien mentality is similar to that of ordinary people. If you don't specialize in cultivating your mind, you will be angry and jealous like ordinary people. They are just ordinary people with supernatural powers.
Dragon Snake's martial arts is still not satisfying enough, so he will continue to deduce on the basis of it, and continue to upgrade to electromagnetism, bioelectricity, macromolecular proteins, genes, stealing animal genes, and so on. Pipi shrimps can see 16 primary colors. They are the first batch of miraculous things that the human mind cannot imagine. Pigeons can sense the planet's magnetic field and use it to locate themselves. The infrared rays of snakes and snow foxes rely on magnetic fields to locate mice under the snow, which is also impressive. In nature, there are many animals with all kinds of strange and weird abilities, and you can learn them all.
If you write about Chinese martial arts, then really don't be lenient! Quanxingquan is bad, and don't think about the law restricting them, there is no good Quanxing
What are you going to write after chapter 26? A bunch of original characters.
How many heroines are there? , It feels like there is no heroine, and there is no need for eunuchs to practice Chinese martial arts 😰
Traditional martial arts is not as mysterious as everyone thinks. If you like it, go to Bilibili to search for guoshuhui, kung fu teacher Chen, Dongge Yuge video library, sisal old man, xooom, Qiu Baolong, Zhen BIue, these traditional martial arts actual combat
In fact, Chinese martial arts should follow the biological route. Single-body fantasy and other methods are all wrong. They are just a skin. If you change the soup without changing the medicine, it will still be the same fantasy routine.
What is Chinese martial arts, physical exercise? Martial arts secrets? Or stabbing human cells and developing human potential? Is it a martial arts route? The Gang Qi has come out, there is no energy body, just the human body route, yours is called boxing style at most. Does the author want to open up a new energy system? The Gang Qi has come out. Like playing Harry Potter in Battle of the Sky?
Has the author ever thought about adding the four major refining systems of warm tea and rice wine? I feel like there is a lot to be done! I recently saw a very well written one. Starting from the Ming Dynasty, it conquered the world
Xiang Jiajia, the most disgusting character
Shen Chong gives people a better impression than her, at least his bad behavior is normal. People like her are wolf-hearted, have no filial piety, are selfish, and are full of water🧠empty.