Desert Lord, Start by Brushing Points to Strengthen

You were so poisoned at the beginning that you couldn't stand it. You have been working for many years but you are still weak? If you are weak, choose a bow and arrow? If the writing is not good, you can take your time. If the underlying logic is blown up, it will basically be useless. It is not as good as AI imitation.

At the beginning, the protagonist fights for money equivalent to two months' salary of his servant 😰

An aristocratic maid dares to be mean to the young master. The author is a woman, right?

I chose a rebellious female slave at the beginning. Has the author never seen a woman?

It is also the small leader who takes care of the big leader. A lord who wants to open up wasteland does not need a few well-informed and trained guards or experienced farmers, but a shabby maid, and later he will increase the maid's favorability.

The previous story was pretty good, but it was not so good when he returned to the family. The original owner traveled through time in the middle, and the family was not very kind to the original owner. When the protagonist came back, he described his father's love, and the description of the feelings of some family members was a bit weird. When the protagonist was useless, no one cared about it. The male protagonist risked his life to get the title. When the protagonist became developed, he described his father's love.

The author wrote blindly without using his brain, and I read blindly without using my brain.

It is said that the second son of a nobleman's life at home is to do odd jobs, but this is still a noble family with a fiefdom at home. As a reader, I am very pleased that you did not follow the routine exactly, but can you please stop doing these weird things?

There is no logic in anything written in the first two chapters. A weak person can hardly even lift a two or three kilogram sword. Before the system is opened, you can choose to fight skeleton soldiers and infantry bows and arrows. The pulling force of infantry bows and arrows cannot be less than 60 kilograms. It is difficult to even hold a two or three kilogram iron sword. I don't believe that you can still draw the bow and arrow. Since you can't even draw the bow and arrow, it is impossible to practice. There is no point in holding a bow and arrow without practicing. This is a bow and arrow, not a crossbow. You don't need to know how to aim.

A maid is jealous of her aristocratic master. Isn't this a brothel? Still keep it as a treasure

There is a tendency to be a thief, and the maid is also quite poisonous. The interests between forces are definitely the strongest, but there are only interests between people, and they are vulnerable to the temptation of greater interests. So it's quite disgusting for the protagonist to use a routine to leave a maid who looks down on him.

I didn't understand that the protagonist was already digging trees in the wild, why did Mao have to buy exorbitantly priced garbage? If you dig out the soil where trees can live in the wild, will they die?

It's a systematic article, but the main plot is more like gangsters fighting for territory.

Chapter 11 is really nonsense. The maid was detained for 5 days and was not touched. It's outrageous.

The son born to the stepmother is 13 years old, and the daughter born to the stepmother and her ex-husband is also 13 years old.

There are a lot of bugs in this book. Are heavy cavalry chasing light cavalry? Thirty thousand cavalry chase the protagonist for who knows how many days without supplies? Eat air?

This is really great. You won't be able to write without using these three words, right?

Half of the words are about women

There is a beauty in snail noodles! Then I suggest the author check it more than once before sending it out. A lot of self-killing character names are wrong. There are also several quantity errors, which are clearly separated by one line.

It's okay. Basically, there's nothing poisonous about it, but there's nothing refreshing about it either. It's too bland. Well, I'd better create more refreshing points. For now, I can still watch it. As long as it's not too watery, I'll order it all.

Question 🙋Why is the male protagonist on the page a female?

Is there a map? The author will update it.

It's okay, I can watch it. It's just too short.

Can you update in the middle of the night?

Is it restricted?

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