The Old One of Hogwarts

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you finish the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are ten o'clock, the great Confucian's debate on scriptures is deafening, and the attitude of tolerance is implemented both inside and outside. When you are twenty, the memory of the bookworm has a place for you. Even in a long life, your name will leave dazzling traces. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates. So, don't stop. Update, update, update (copied and pasted, I don't have that much ink)

The more I write, the more boring it becomes. The main character is a god, neither a god nor a human being. He is obsessed with making money. Even though he can kill Voldemort, he can't defeat Dumbledore's youth version on horseback. His combat power fluctuates. He was still fighting before. Dumbledore and Grindelwald broke the destiny corner together, and it felt like it strengthened the character Now I'm starting to write the Riddler again😅 Isn't it good to follow the main plot honestly? Why do you have to go here and there? It's a mess, I don't know what you want to do at all, it seems aimless and boring.

Sometimes I really can't understand whether the author who writes HP novels is a BT, because many of them make me gay!

I found the book the day before yesterday and read 195 of it in two days. How can I put it, it was really interesting at first, which is why I read so many words. However, the author seemed to have overlooked one important thing in my opinion. This is a fanfic. It seeks originality in fanfic plots, rather than looking for insignificant fanfics in originality. I saw a comment before that said that the story of this book is too big and it will definitely collapse. I thought at the time whether you would like it or not, but now I don't know whether it will collapse or not. But when I saw the plot of chapter 195 and the following ten chapters, it really didn't surprise me as much as it did before. I found it hard to regain my previous enthusiasm for reading. Originally, the plot setting was quite convoluted and the setting was very realistic, but the fun people were always treated as fun, which gave me a very awkward feeling. It would be a pity to abandon it and it would be tasteless. Maybe it's because I'm not mature enough to read it right now, so I'll put it on the bookshelf first and talk about it later.

The protagonist cheats on the legendary wizard, boasts loudly, and then even those who can't be beaten are still unbeatable. I'm really tired of this routine.

The author made the protagonist's character greedy and childish for the sake of daily life. Otherwise, I would never have imagined why Jin Gallon still had such a big obsession with the protagonist when Dumbledore, Grindelwald, and the 28 Holy Tribes had almost completely surrendered. In the first dozens of chapters, the author himself wrote in the book that the body was an adult's soul, but now I can't feel that the protagonist's soul is an adult at all. I can't think of any other explanation besides hydrology 🙂 Before, I ordered all of Chapter 150, but now I've basically skipped reading.

The only pity is that it is difficult for this book not to collapse, at least in terms of combat power. I learned the three unforgivable curses and the fierce fire before entering school. I am ready to understand the essence of magic mentioned by the author at the beginning of the first grade. If this continues, the protagonist will be able to destroy everything in the second grade and become a god in the third grade. The combat power has completely collapsed. I don't know how to advance the plot normally.

I can't watch the rest of it. The protagonist is too stupid. He repeatedly steps into the trap and relies on the guidance of others to advance the plot. The protagonist himself has experienced so many things and has not made any progress at all. His combat power has also collapsed. He is suffering from stupidity.

The more it is written, the more chaotic it becomes. The male protagonist's IQ is getting lower and lower. He is a typical representative of driving high and driving low.

It was okay in the early stage, but in the later stage there were too many original works, the plot was completely deviated from the original work, and the combat power was increased crazily. It has turned into a fantasy novel.