Qingxian Asked

I'm almost finished reading it. This is a low-level historical novel.

I suggest the author write less about the imperial court and the like, and make it more interesting to fight monsters and upgrade.

If there are ten chapters a day, the number of fans will increase tenfold.

I feel that the author's books no longer have the aura of Master Qingxuan.

It's okay. The flavor of Meng Ruishenji is very strong. You can find some hint of Meng Ruishenji in every chapter or several chapters.

I feel that Wu Bai has written many books but there is a flaw or something that he is not aware of. Starting from the first book Taoist, although the maps have been changed, they are all familiar worlds. Readers are naturally receptive, so changing constantly does not affect the smoothness of the book. Starting from Dao Master Qingxuan, Wubai began to write original worlds, but the problem of changing maps also appeared. Readers finally accepted the current map, brought it in, and then immediately changed the map. The existing supporting characters and sect settings were all thrown away, allowing readers to accept the new world. This creates a problem, a naked sense of fragmentation. The reader is immersed in the original world view, and then inexplicably accepts the setting and new enemies of the new world. My suggestion is that in the later books, Wubai can start describing one world in the middle, and slowly introduce some things from the next world, which can be forces, treasures, etc., To lay the groundwork, and finally enter the next world naturally after the decisive battle, and occasionally intersperse some in the description of the next world. The content after the protagonist of the original world leaves will definitely be better than now.

You don't need to read the rest, the main character will go to Wushui later and the word count will be lowered.

The name of this book is very ordinary, but the story is not bad.

A story about practicing martial arts in official circles. The protagonist is a dual practitioner of Taoism and martial arts. He becomes famous and manages his power from childhood. It is really well written. It has both worldly feelings and youthful spirit. It is worth reading.

As a historical article it's still pretty good to read

No matter how good the writing is in the front, it will be terrible in the back.

Five hundred, you'd better not write about the temple. The power struggle is very crude. Look at Wanli Mingjun next door. This is the temple. In addition, the protagonist cheats too much and grows too smoothly, making it boring to watch the rest of the story.

The author has fallen. He has been stretching his hips before the Chinese New Year until now.

The writing style is great, very suitable for mortals, and the imagination is good. I feel that the author is best suited to write orthodox mortals.

The best book out of a hundred. He is sophisticated in human relations and sophisticated in officialdom. In the ups and downs of the world of mortals, he seeks good fortune and avoids misfortune, and seeks immortality.

As expected of a veteran, the writing makes you have to read it slowly. If you don't pull out the best products later, it will not stop.

This amount of updates is very difficult for me to handle 🙂

It's getting better and better, and the author's writing skills are really amazing!

There has been a lack of passion since the beginning of the Black Mountain Old Demon, and I have no interest in subscribing to the current chapter.

It feels like it was written by AI and then polished by myself

Especially after entering the ancient temple, what was written? I barely finished reading the updates. I couldn't bear it anymore and deleted it from the bookshelf.

Suddenly I realized that it was finished. I only watched the first part and couldn't watch the second part at all. I didn't know if it was unfinished.

The cultivation of immortality at the level of the Great Dao has already begun. It is difficult for readers to read and for authors to write. I hope that Xu Qing will not embark on the road to enlightenment through eternal tribulations.