Fellow Taoist, You Seem to Be a Bit Extreme.

Name: Fellow Taoist, You Seem to Be a Bit Extreme.
Author: Stars Yiyi

道友你疑似有点极端了

by Stars Yiyi (星星忆忆)

Status: Completed
Length: 19k Words
Genre: Eastern Fantasy
Audience: Male
Subgenre: Eastern Xuanhuan
Updated: 1y ago
Source: Qidian

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Synopsis

[Material should be disgusted with human speech, but love to listen to the ghosts singing poems in autumn graves] When Su Jue woke up, he came to a completely unfamiliar world, where there were warriors, strange beasts, immortals, Buddhas, spirits, and monsters. This is an era where princes, generals and ministers are distinguished, but the extraordinary and highly developed social productivity is enough for the people to live and work in peace and contentment. This also makes Su Jue give up the idea of shouting that slogan. He planned to live in the shadow of his father's generation for the rest of his life, but he was thrown out to experience. This makes him, who has a peaceful temperament, become more and more extreme one after another. He is used to seeing the ugliness in the world, so he would rather keep company with painted skins and sing to ghosts and foxes. "Perhaps I can change all this?" Su Jue threw the wine bottle away. Life was like five pots of food, and death was like five pots of food. After all, he chose to climb up and change the world.

Reader comments

Because the pace is too slow, I am going to speed up the pace. Readers of the previous 4 chapters can read it quickly. I also have my problem. You should attract readers first and then spread out the world view. I just came up directly and said that it is not good to slowly explore and spread the world view. There is no attractive point at all. The first four can be passed quickly because they are more daily I hope you can give me more suggestions. I am the most persuaded (｡•o•｡∩)
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Still can't pick up the rhythm
Because my whole world view is gradually unfolded, and the starting point of the protagonist may be relatively high at the beginning. If I want to speed up the pace, the protagonist's strength may not be able to keep up. Take it slow. It's not easy to modify the manuscripts I have, but after I publish these manuscripts, the pace will pick up. After all, it is easier to write than to revise. , I'm really sorry. If you feel that the pace is too slow, you can read it again and wait until you get up. If you can't stand it, you can read it quickly. Waiting until you get into the main line and writing some light daily life in fantasy novels does not seem to be a good choice (ps: In fact, these problems can be solved by a system, but I don't want to use it at all) (╥_╥)
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