Wizard: The Shadow Throne

The more I read it, the more it feels like an orthodox royal novel. The protagonist transforms from an ordinary cobbler into an invincible bow and arrow in just one month. He can challenge a small group of regular knights, and then he is valued by a noble woman who is far above his own class. He falls in love at first sight. In just a few days, he tames a group of slaves through words and tricks, and transforms them from slaves into warriors. How can I say that it is a bit too smooth and logical? So of course it's too coincidental. Not to mention the protagonist, the people around the protagonist change too fast. In fact, the time length can be lengthened a little longer to make it more reasonable. Such a big change in a short period of time seems unreal, just like the change of the protagonist's strength and power, including the slaves trained by the protagonist. If the timeline is lengthened, people and things will change so much that it will appear real.

I remember a long time ago, there was an article on the Internet. The protagonist asked a necromancer why he had to leave the crowd, live in isolation, and live in solitude by robbing people on the road. The Necromancer directly responded: I am extraordinary, I have power, I can get what I need by living in the mountains, and I still have a long life. Why should I be a dog for a living noble? The protagonist said: If you are capable, you can work and get ahead in human society. It's not impossible for you to become a noble yourself. As a result, the necromancer said something that subverted the protagonist's three views: It doesn't work, a colleague has tried it. Do you think those living nobles are ostracizing us because our commanding skeletons are not good-looking? No. The reason is actually profit. We once had a colleague who served in the country of the living and made meritorious service and became a count. But then the differences came: We use corpses to make armed troops and coolies, while the undead only consume mana and do not need to eat, pay or pay. In addition, as we practice magic, our bodies have become closer to the spirit of death, and people's desires have become less. We don't pay wages, and we ourselves are no longer interested in food and beautiful women. So, our expenses are very small. On the contrary, the souls and bodies of living people who have just died are the main wealth of our spells and experiments. So, after that colleague became a count, he opened many nursing homes in the city, where the living people who were too old to move and were about to die were sent there. In this way, old people died of old age every day, and he got their souls and corpses from them. The same goes for the villages. He ordered the villages to hand over a few fresh corpses of old, frail and dying people every year, or anyone. In contrast, he lowered the taxes borne by living civilians. Because he doesn't need that much gold. As a result... The living civilians found that under his governance, they had the least daily burdens, and they were too old to move and still had a place to go in peace... All of them defected to him. Including all the serfs of other surrounding lords, they all traveled over the mountains and ridges to stay with him. The economic level of his territory has developed rapidly due to the influx of a large number of laborers, while the territories around him have declined rapidly. As a result, he was attacked by a coalition of more than a dozen surrounding nobles and was killed. This proves that we necromancers cannot be living nobles.

The beginning of the article is good, but it starts to go up and down at the end. Typos and awkward sentences are disappointing.

Why don't you go back and write the sequel to your Tomato book?

What you have written since you came to Qidian is basically eunuch, you might as well go back and write

There are too many descriptions of supporting characters, and the protagonists don't even appear. If you want to write a group portrait article, please tell me in advance so that I can leave early.

I really like novels that have a little bit of quirks but are not too buggy, and I like the subject matter too

The cheat finger is just a small map plus identification items, analysis and prescriptions. It is very awesome. Now you have a super identification analysis for gold coins. It is recommended to add teleportation and a small world. If you think of anything, add the cheat function to invincibility. Then it will look better.