I Am the Fairy of Tea

I have written myself down, and I still give it away

The idea of ​​tea is very good, but it was not written well. . First of all, the efficacy of tea should be increased step by step. The author upgraded too quickly as if writing a refreshing article, and did not reflect the effects of the upgraded tea at all. He only reflected it from the price and the feelings of a few people after tasting the tea, which was too thin and repetitive. Second, Lingcha should not be wholesaled, but only retailed. Even if you shirk it because the system can detect who is a second-rate dealer, this will completely circumvent the source of the supporting roles. Third, it is recommended to add more endorsements to the source of Lingcha, or first introduce the supernatural world. A strange black tea like yours is very disconnected and cannot handle the relationship with the secular world well. In any case, someone died because of your tea, which makes readers feel uncomfortable. Fourth, you can add more incidents of finding good tea across the country, and tell good stories while interspersing extraordinary events. If the outline can be organized properly, I think it will be popular 😁.

How to say it? The beginning was good and quite innovative, but then it started to become stupid, directly cultivating immortals, and some otherworldly East China Sea Dragon Palace. This step was too big, and it was ridiculous. Modern society also has a supernatural department, which is getting more and more ridiculous 🙂

It was so frustrating after reading about 60 chapters that I spent 100 points to scold the author. If you want to write a relaxing genre, don't introduce the extraordinary system. Just treat it like high-quality tea leaves and write it slowly. Since you have introduced the extraordinary concept, use it as a resource to write. The result is that you are acting as if you have established a lost drama, and you are desperately trying to die. You are already extraordinary. What is your understanding of extraordinary? I don't know anything, so I'm just trying to make it. After reading about 60 chapters, the context is completely separated, and the whole story is one story. Judging from the contact and influence of the parents and the field sister, you don't want them to die, and they are still cultivating immortals. You are a pure idiot and want to cultivate a hammer. Besides, you can't wait for them to die. Talking about the pricing division of tea, in the future, all the money in the country will be concentrated in your hands. You can only get it in but not out. If you do it a few more times, I'm afraid you will have to empty the treasury. There are too many flaws to mention. It's a bit creative, but the writing outline is a mess.

The recent content makes me feel like this book is coming to an end, which is different from the tone at the beginning.

Why are all these supporting characters making noises, no matter men, women, old or young😢It looks so noisy

The saddest thing about this book is that it is too impatient. Tea is supposed to have a leisurely buff, and the male protagonist seems to have only a few days left to live. He always doesn't know what he is anxious about. There is so much money in the card, why are you so anxious to make money? Can't you just practice tea? Why are you thinking about the broken tea leaves in the pot all day long? Do you need to be taught whether points or money are more important? In addition, the entry into the netherworld was poorly written, smelly and long, and the incident of throwing the tea earlier was also very forced.

The first part is okay. Although the girlfriend is a bit poisonous, I don't mind it very much. The problem is that it becomes really poisonous later on. Why does the Association of Supernatural Fans force the protagonist to die? According to the plot, if it weren't for the protagonist's golden finger, he would really have died in the Netherworld Tea Garden. He claims that the protagonist has good tea-making skills, so there is 100% no danger. Can we conclude just because of this? In fact, it was not a narrow escape. What did the protagonist get after risking his life to make tea from them? 40 Million yuan, the protagonist can earn it in two or three years if he is exhausted. It is smooth and easy. What is 40 million yuan compared to the price he paid for the risks he took? It can be said that the tea leaves are obtained by the protagonist through his own ability and do not belong to the raw materials provided by them. Isn't this pure prostitution? Even the protagonist, who was poisoned and life-threatening due to long-term exposure to that tea, actually didn't want to hold them responsible or ask them to compensate, but wanted to take it upon himself. What kind of logic is this based on? Why is he so mean?

Sorry, I mistook the title of the book for milk tea😰

It feels like the protagonist has a low sense of presence and a low IQ.

Guan Xiao's role is a bit too much, and he did it again

It's okay, it's pretty cool, but the power of the pig's feet is a bit overpowered and not satisfying enough.

There will be no update tonight. It will be put on the shelf at noon tomorrow. I will organize the manuscript and prepare for it every day for a month 🤐

I feel a little confused. You said that having too much money is useless. The important thing is the points. In the part about helping to make tea, why do you have to sell half and get half? Can't you give me the money to buy the tea first and then let them buy it all? And you can also ask them to help purchase tea. After all, the tea in the underworld should be good.

Reality is difficult to write about. The world is chaotic and difficult to escape from. If it is too violent, it will be banned. If it is too abusive, it will not retain readers. If it is too detached, it will be called untrue.