We Agreed to Conquer Zhutian, but You Want to Conquer Huiliyi?

To be honest, from beginning to end, I watched the plot of the protagonist's main world without skipping a beat. The most important point is that the protagonist will experience many different dungeon worlds in the future. Now that there is Eri, the world will experience many women from other dungeons in the future. You need to know, author, that your book uses the dungeon world's painted pear clothes as a gimmick to attract readers. To put it bluntly, I don't think it is necessary to write too many main world plots and main world girls (of course, those who I met before are not counted). You will also meet many other girls in the dungeon world in the dungeons you write in the future. But for your book, I saw that you just updated it. There are so many plots in the main world that they account for almost half. The most important point is, what is the attraction in the world of writing this kind of copy? It is to change the bad endings of some people in the dungeon world and the pleasure of beating bad guys. But, your protagonist is still a novice now. If the protagonist does not enter the dragon dungeon, he can go to other dungeons to become stronger or use the yuan points you set to buy props to become stronger. Of course when you see what I wrote above, you will wonder whether the protagonist is too strong and whether the plot is pushed too fast all the way, and then you don't know what to write. But there is one thing. The protagonist is strong. Even if he is invincible, he doesn't have to choose speedrunning. Follow the plot of the original work bit by bit. Wherever you go in the plot, take action when you encounter someone who can't beat the dungeon character. If you need to, just copy the original text. If you need to change the plot, just copy it. And my method is applicable to all dungeons. Even if this dungeon is stuck, you can open two dungeons at the same time. You can write whichever dungeon is not stuck and you have inspiration. If the writing is good and the story line is not messy, it will be fine even if you open three or four dungeons. You can even choose some small dungeons to speed through, and you can enjoy more than a dozen chapters. A thousand authors have a thousand different ways of writing. It mainly depends on how you want to write. Come on.

Newbie, new book, I hope readers can give some comments and feedback🌹🌹🌹