Simultaneous Transmigration: Becoming a Multiverse Superstar, Starting with Konosuba

It's so awesome that I couldn't write it out within three chapters. I'll write it after releasing 27 chapters. You are also a talent.

This author is simply stubborn. He was so angry with the previous book that he was pissed off again and again with this one. Why, you can't write a book without pimping, right? I'm not even going to talk about the clever girl. Now that I've written a harem story, popular characters like Rem and Emilia can be given to the original male protagonist. Let's not forget about these. What's even more bizarre is, what has the protagonist been doing all this time from scratch? Paving the way for Natsuki Subaru? I laughed out loud. It was obvious that I could just push the girl over to cheat. If I couldn't get Echidna's support or get Beatrice, I chose the most anthropomorphic way of playing. Who are you going to show off such a bitter feud for? ? What's funny is that there are so many chapters that accomplish nothing, just follow the original plot, and treat the readers like monkeys. The more I talk about it, the angrier I get, and I directly block the author. You'd better not let me see your next book!

There is a real sense of fragmentation. Either start writing a time-traveling stream or not write it at all. The protagonist Suqing is well established and suddenly switch to another protagonist. This is a joke to me. If the spirit is separated, it is better to go to the Bankai-stream. The protagonist can travel to other worlds.

I think it's better not to cross-travel together. The same-travel flow will lead to a dead end. Now that Su Qing has written it very well, just arrange to get a time-traveling artifact and just use it as a normal time-traveling flow.

Currently 118, Su Qing only has 36 chapters, accounting for less than 30%. And Zhan Chi has 37 chapters, which is longer than Su Qing. Currently, the author is still digging holes and starting from scratch. It is visually estimated that Su Qing cannot be written before 150 chapters. This is purely a title fraud. Moreover, the author did not listen to the advice and pretended to be dead in the comment section, completely immersed in developing his own world and unable to extricate himself. The poor performance of this book is really entirely the author's fault.

The first one was Tongchuan Sharing, which was released after more than 20 pictures. Suqin's writing was obviously so good, but you, the golden finger, came so late and switched to other perspectives not long after. How strong is this sense of fragmentation? Do you know the author? And Demon Slayer, because Demon Slayer doesn't have any plot, you just make the protagonist of Demon Slayer disappear. This standard is to dig a hole but not fill it, leaving a hole. I can only say that the writing style is pretty good, but the writing ideas are a mess.

After reading more than 200 chapters, I feel like I should give up the book. I feel that this book is very strange and the rhythm is wrong. As a time-travel novel, there is no so-called main world and no focus. The harem is not a climate, the emotional scenes are not delicate enough, and the world of Suqing becomes the world. Zhanchi World is the first world to be cleared, and it is completed in about 40 chapters. , It's a bit useless, Esdeath is more or less a tool, the world view of the clever girl is okay, it feels like I haven't watched it since I watched it, the gimmick of hugging Reinhardt's thigh is not written, the most criticized daily world is the civil servant, a little out of place, the Demon Slayer World mentioned from the beginning can not find this person.

How many chapters are you traveling through at the same time? ? ? No matter how you look at it, he is an unlucky guy who has no golden fingers and no Suqing to choose to travel through time.

What kind of things are there in the plot of the doppelgänger manga written by the author... Your own doppelgänger's personality will be quite different. This is all written as another person. Look at Duke and Lao Liao's doppelganger's personality. There is not much difference.

Cecily