Simultaneous Transmigration: Becoming a Multiverse Superstar, Starting with Konosuba

That's amazing! You managed to write the whole time-travel story in less than three chapters. You even waited until chapter 27 before starting. You're truly a genius.

This author is utterly incorrigible. The previous book was written out of sheer frustration, and this one is just another pile of garbage. What, can't you write a book without pimping? I won't even mention *Machine-Doll*, since it's a harem story, giving away popular characters like Rem and Emilia to the original protagonist... But let's leave that aside.

The disconnect is really jarring. Either start with a crossover story, or don't write one at all. The protagonist of Konosuba was so well-developed, then suddenly switching to another one... It's like a split personality. It would be better to go for a multiverse story where the protagonist can travel to other worlds; that doesn't feel disconnected.

I feel it's better not to have a shared transmigration story. Shared transmigration is a dead end. Konosuba is already written very well; just have her acquire a powerful transmigration artifact and treat it as a regular isekai (otherworld) story.

Currently, there are 118 chapters left, with only 36 chapters of Konosuba, less than 30%. Meanwhile, Akame ga Kill! Has 37 chapters, longer than Konosuba. The author is still starting from scratch, and it seems unlikely that Konosuba will be completed before chapter 150. This is purely title misleading.

Firstly, it took over twenty chapters to reveal Tongchuan's shared abilities. The earlier Suqin was written so well, but this "golden finger" (a special ability to grant unexpected advantages) arrived so late, and then the story quickly shifted to another perspective. How disjointed is that? Does the author even realize it?

After reading over 200 chapters, I feel I should drop this book. It feels very strange, the pacing is off, and as a transmigration story, it lacks a main world, has no clear focus, the harem is weak, the romance is not nuanced enough, and the Konosuba world feels very similar to the original. The Akame ga Kill!

In which chapters does he transmigrate at the same time? He seems like an unlucky guy with no cheat codes, no Suzaku-like abilities, and no choice in which he transmigrates.

What kind of nonsense is this author writing in the clone-themed crossover storyline? Even your own clone's personality is pretty much the same. This one is written as a completely different person. Look at Duke Liao's clones; their personalities don't differ much.

Cecily