Naruto: I, Naruto Uzumaki, Have Defected

Brother, what you wrote is a bit... How should I put it, too impulsive. The best time to defect was during the Land of Waves mission, the one with Mizuki. Actually, defecting was impossible; you couldn't escape anyway. The crystal ball was monitoring you in real time. Even if you left the village, you'd be under ANBU surveillance.

Behavior: Defection, Bloodlust Personality: Quirky, foul-mouthed He's indecisive in killing, taking forever to explain before even taking a life. His personality is only suited to be a fun-loving Konoha ninja, not a rogue ninja.

I can't stand it anymore. They've already absorbed Otsutsuki Shibakai, and they almost lost to a weasel. A mindless nerf?

That's too impulsive! He looks so bitter and resentful. Even if he's influenced by memories, a transmigrator with at least twenty or thirty years of experience can't control a twelve-year-old kid living in a village? He's been too deeply influenced.

Having read up to chapter 25, what can I say? The author intended to portray a character who has turned to the dark side, but the writing is filled with rambling and unnecessary details. In chapter 25, this supposedly corrupted character hasn't killed a single person. Furthermore, the protagonist's system is the kind where he levels up by killing monsters. The entire chapter revolves around how much the protagonist suffers, refusing to kill and instead playing the saint.

Bro, I think you're going to flop again. After reading so much, here's some advice: your writing is too bland, lacking any dramatic tension. Online novels these days are just too damn dramatic.

Honestly, the stats are a bit off. They shouldn't have given ninjas those stats; it creates a lot of inconsistencies. Genin have a speed of 50 meters per second, Chunin 500 meters per second, and Jonin 1000 meters per second. This speed makes using ninjutsu a weakness. Most ninjutsu is only mid-range, within 200 meters.

60 Chapters released on launch day, 10 chapters a day during National Day holiday 👍 Not only is the quantity plentiful and filling, but the quality is also top-notch, deserving high praise.

A naive and foolish college student, lacking planning and maturity—can such a person survive in society? Has he never experienced the frustrations of work? Perhaps it would be better to write in a more mature way.

The plot is fine. The characters are terrible; and it's mainly based on Naruto's personality. The template for TV drama protagonists used to be like the characters in movies, but now TV drama protagonists are just there to be slaughtered. Hesitant and indecisive; lacking a firm stance; (You can delete it once you've subscribed.)