Naruto: I, Naruto Uzumaki, Have Defected

Brother, what you wrote is a bit, how should I put it, too impulsive. The best time to defect is the mission to the Kingdom of Waves, Mizuki Naha. In fact, it is impossible to defect and escape. The crystal ball monitors in real time. Even if you leave the village, you will be monitored by ANBU. The best hiding place is not the Mist Ninja Village. The uncle who gave you a warm baby when you were born is there. I am afraid I won't send you directly. The best place is the Moon Country.

Behavior: Defection, bloodthirsty Character: Funny, bad-mouthed He is not decisive at all in killing, and he has to talk for a long time before killing someone. The character described is only suitable for being a Konoha fun person, not a rebel ninja.

I can't stand it anymore, I've absorbed Otsutsuki Shiba, and I almost overturned when I hit a weasel. Brainless weakening?

Too impulsive, with a look of bitterness and hatred. Even if it is affected by the memory, the time traveler has at least twenty or thirty years of experience, can't he suppress a twelve-year-old child living in the village? He was too deeply affected, and when he saw that there were only multiple shadow clones in the Book of Sealings, he could follow the plot and practice quietly for a while. In the original book, Naruto was affected by the Kyuubi's control ability. He couldn't perform simple clone techniques well, his physical skills were stretched even more, and he was not good at learning. , Was called the Cranetail. He only relied on the Nine-Tails to burst out without any brainstorming or skills. At least he lay dormant for a while and quietly familiarized himself with the Nine-Tails mode in the dungeon. Then he learned a ball or practiced Taijutsu or something like that. He had one or two skills and then ran away during Zabuza or the Chunin Exam.

I saw Chapter 25, what should I say? The author wanted to write about a blackened person, but he wrote a lot of nonsense. In chapter 25, a blackened person didn't kill anyone at all. And the protagonist system is still the kind of monster-killing and upgrading system. The whole article talks about how miserable the protagonist is. He wants to kill someone but he doesn't want to kill someone to become a virgin.

Bro, I think you're about to pounce again. Seeing that you have written so much, I would like to give you some suggestions. Your writing is too bland, and it feels like there is no climax. Nowadays, online writing is too damn convoluted.

To be honest, the values are a bit broken. You shouldn't give those values to ninjas, otherwise there will be many contradictions. The speed of genin is 50 meters per second, the speed of chunin is 500 meters per second, and the speed of jounin is 1000 meters per second. If you decentralize ninjutsu at this speed, it will become The flaw is that general ninjutsu is only mid-range. Within 200 meters, people can reach 50 meters in one second and put a hammer. It is not a turn-based system. With this speed difference, even 10,000 genin cannot beat a chuunin, and a jounin can't beat a chuunin. It is repressive. It can be said that ninjas can walk sideways without ninjutsu. The kinetic energy of running is comparable to many ninjutsus. The setting of 50000000 meters per second in Naruto tail mode also shocked me. This plug-in It is estimated that the value added to death is not even one-tenth of the Nine-Tails. The cheat has turned into a clown. Naruto is afraid of the Six Paths Madara Hachimen Kai at this speed. He cannot reach the speed of light. I don't know how the ninja world is only so small. How come it hasn't been blown up by these big guys?

There are 60 new chapters on the shelves, ten chapters in one day on National Day👍 Not only is the quantity large, but the quality is also at the level of good grass, it must be praised

A clear and stupid college student with no plans and no maturity. How can such a person survive in society? Have you ever been suppressed by work? It would be better to write more maturely.

The plot is okay The characters are crappy and Naruto's personality is the main focus The TV series is like a pig's trotter template, but the pig's trotters in the current TV series are used to kill pigs Looking ahead and looking back, hesitating and having no position, you can delete it after subscribing.