The Great Inventor of the Doomsday Train

After reading sixty chapters, I feel that there is no problem reading it as a light novel. The author's narration is pretty good, but some of the mechanics could be further studied. Haha, it's really nothing. For example, at the firewall of the Doctoral Society, let me introduce the difficulty appropriately. When describing this paragraph, we follow the common practice of modern attack network firewalls. We can add some parts that are different from the traditional understanding. This brings more imagination and thinking to the display of Bengtie's big world view, and has better expressive power than the powerful and key role of the protagonist in a flat narrative. In terms of combat, the author uses the character skills in the game to use combat. For example, in one chapter, I saw that Lao Yang used "similar to a black hole" many times. We can recreate these skills, which requires a lot of imagination on the part of the author, as well as high requirements on combat aesthetics. In this respect, the combat scenes in the game are very limited, and the author is very demanding to show a wonderful battle. If done well here, it will be a wonderful highlight. If this is not possible, the direct description of the battle can be simplified and the analysis of the battle can be more detailed. For example, analyze the positioning of each role. Maybe what I said is not very good and has no reference value. I am afraid that others will say, "You can do it 🙂". I really hope this book can show more exciting things. Compared with the game, these are really too many mistakes. The game only updates once every 40 days, and it took less than half a year to complete a Pinocchio. The author alone cannot polish it well as a team with others. I think the biggest problem with this book is that it is too close to daily life and does not fully demonstrate the exploration of the universe. Beng Tie's worldview is very good, with a thorough study of destiny, expansion of battles, feelings about the plot, and exploration of the universe, etc. We have shown the power of many different fates, such as later memories. If we, the authors, made it into the form of summons like the game, it would be really difficult to write, or it would collapse. Destiny is a philosophical concept, and the exploration of the power of destiny must be philosophically relevant. For example, the power of development increases with the continuous expansion of the understanding of development. The deeper the belief in development, the stronger the power of development. Blessings from other people and star gods are another way, but for now, except for Aha who directly gives power to others, it is difficult for other star gods to directly bless others. Furthermore, the protagonist mainly uses the power of intelligence, which shows knowledge and creation. This is done very well in the book. In contrast to the power of exploration, which is to gain the basic physical fitness to develop, resisting wind, snow and heat, etc., In contrast, the power of intelligence should enhance memory or make understanding more transparent, think faster, etc. Directly obtaining basic knowledge from Bo Shi Zun was a bit outrageous in the early days 🙂 That little robot should have the knowledge reserve for the protagonist to learn. Why I stopped at chapter 60 to speak is because everyone has the answer to what pioneering is. But the development in the game is specifically reflected in eliminating the impact of the star core and expanding into unknown areas. I am really dissatisfied with the way the protagonist regulates the war. Fortunately, the author explained (not much), which is the law of the forest. However, there is a partial contradiction between forest law and development, and development should not interfere with the wishes of the planet itself. The confrontation between the two forces itself is the result of the internal evolution of the planets. In the plot, Kailuo Fate does not interfere with the internal conflicts of these planets. It only provides external assistance to these planets out of humanitarianism. When we analyze this incident, the two kings were threatened with force and gave up the governance of their forces. The reason for the war was also mentioned in the previous article. If friction escalates into hatred, the people on the border between the two countries will not agree. Judging from the protagonist's performance, I don't think the protagonist is in a position to reconcile the two waves of forces in a short period of time. If they are integrated and unified on the surface, what will happen to the governance after that? I think it is enough to integrate the planet with the outside world and achieve internal reconciliation and stability. Let BTO chop up the war criminals, transfer the conflicts to these people and businessmen, and finally put their respective focus on post-war reconstruction and development. There is really no need to force intervention. It is too unrealistic. For example, if the robin is strong enough, then he is just trying to reconcile and does not do these things. I really understand the author's hard work, and it is quite difficult to ensure updates.

It's beautiful, the content is very novel, the protagonist is well portrayed, and the author's writing style is really good, but can you change the title of the book? If I hadn't clicked on the wrong one and saw the introduction, I would have missed this book 🙄

Why do I think of a golden-haired bishop when I see the name of this book? Am I possessed by a white-haired saint?

No, a Star Train fan, why is the book called Doomsday Train? Shouldn't it be the Stardome Train? If I hadn't looked at the introduction, I would have just left.

In the new version, Ruan Mei can be an ally with the Xianzhou Alliance alone, which has already shown how valuable genius is. The arrogance of a genius does not reflect the skills of a genius, let alone the deterrence of a genius. Luo Fufu dares to provoke a genius due to internal and external troubles. It can only be said that the six emperors are dizzy and think Luo Fu died not fast enough. But Jingyuan will not push the responsibility to the protagonist group if he uses his brain. A genius wants to do something inside Xianzhou The thing is definitely not to bring an omnimachine and cause trouble. A fairy boat is definitely not enough for a genius to toss . Anyone who wants to use his brain will know that it would be great if the protagonist can have a conflict with the fairy boat. It is simply perfectly in line with his own aesthetics of destruction. Maybe the author wants to follow the plot and plan. The weak protagonist group has led to the current protagonist. Everyone knows that he is a genius, but no one regards the protagonist as a genius. The key is that even Jing Yuan does not know what the protagonist is capable of, not counting the protagonist himself. Behind the protagonist, Heita, Ruan Mei, Screw, and Stephen are four well-known geniuses in the universe. How dare he treat the protagonist like this? I feel that Jing Yuan, the author, is not a wise general but a retarded general.

Quick update

I feel that the author's understanding of the setting of Star Iron is still a bit biased. Fate Power does not mean that you can inject anything. Manipulating Fate Energy is something that only Star Gods can do. Even for the Order, Fate Power is only a passive buff. It can only be expressed more actively than ordinary Fate Walkers. For example, a sudden burst of flesh and blood can pollute the environment. However, it is definitely impossible for the protagonist to directly search Baidu from the path of intelligence and destiny. Unless a setting is added to say that the mechanical head has given him a small start, it is also unreasonable to "use the path of intelligence and happiness to create weapons." And destiny is the embodiment of personal philosophy. Huang Quan's behavior of fighting against nothingness itself is also in line with the meaninglessness of nothingness. There is no way that Lao Yang's black hole can be related to nothingness.

Md, I was deceived, Beng Tie linked up with Beng San, and I fell into the pit with Beng San. My brother told me that the last lesson is in Chapter 18. I just finished Chapter 9, and I was not mentally prepared at all. Himeko was beaten completely when she hit Konglu, and I was still thinking that it was okay. After checking, the last lesson of md damn is in the ninth chapter of tm. I am not mentally prepared at all. Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, I'm just waiting for this linkage, please change the ending for me.

I always feel like the author can't write about the power of the Genius Club.

I only saw half of it, but to be honest, the stardust in your painting makes me feel sick.

Fellow Taoists, wait for me to try the depth of this book.

Even though it's Iron Breaker, it feels like I'm watching FGO

The author should change the previous chapters. There is absolutely no way that Lao Yang has an empty destiny.

It feels like the protagonist is being led around by the nose all the time, and he doesn't have the character of a genius club at all.

Ji Zi and Yang are both scientific researchers

Then why not just call the pioneer train? Once you get to know each other, you can figure out what it is. If you, the Doomsday Train, hadn't glanced at the introduction, I almost wouldn't have clicked in.

After reading it, I can only say that the writing is not bad. There are not many novels about Qidian Bengtie. There is a market for yours, but your name must be changed and people must contact it immediately. There are very few books about Bengtie. You can get the first wave of bonuses by changing the name and making a cover. In terms of plot, the background and ability of the protagonist are very good. Every team needs a Doraemon character. , But I want to say that the intelligent robot should deal with it as soon as possible without delaying it. Secondly, how to say Tingyun is a bit vague, and Tingyun will be out soon. What you wrote is too sure. I am afraid that it will be eaten later. The demon body should not be so easy to solve. Otherwise, Xianzhou would not have been delayed for so many years. The rest is a personal idea. The real combat power of the protagonist does not need to be too high, similar to the protagonist of Chuangqi? This is just my own idea. It's nonsense. It has to have a big move. It's very bluffing. To be honest, it's well written because there are really few people writing about Beng Tie, and there are still many plots in Beng Tie. It can take a long time to write, so don't waste it.

I read half of the last book and it didn't suit my liking. The beginning of this book is quite interesting. I'm going to invest in it. Come on!

When I saw the title and introduction of the book, I thought the protagonist was a young Otto in a parallel world, and maybe there was a childhood sweetheart Karen, but the fact is that there is none.

Ah, are you actually a Star Iron fan? Why isn't there even a label? I still turned it over and played with it.

Your name probably doesn't have good traffic, right? Those who want to see fandoms can't find it through searches.

1. The protagonist is an indigenous person, which is acceptable, so that it can be easily connected with new plots from Laomi in the future. 2. The plot is logically in the past, the occurrence of events, and the growth of the characters are quite orderly. 3. The writing style cannot be said to be superb, but it can still be considered good. The above are all based on reading and evaluating this book from a relatively objective perspective, and some personal subjective opinions will be added next. First of all, the protagonist is a pure and passionate Virgin, which may be suitable for Lao Mi's story. After all, as long as the protagonist is a good person, he must be a good person. But to be honest, the sense of immersion is quite poor. For example: the protagonist often does not design weapons of mass destruction, but says he is afraid of hurting innocent people, and then builds them when he is in danger. He has no time to make them... And then he is locked up or encounters a death crisis... For example, in Pinoconi, he can obviously build a weapon that will blow up the entire dream. The trump card, just because of the so-called fear of accidents, eh ~ just wandering, and then being tied up and locked up in a small dark room on Sunday, I have nothing to say. Yes, the personality and motivation of the protagonist are all logical, but I have already been a great saint in the game, so I can only say that it is lackluster... If you like the Holy Mother Heart Pitfall, I highly recommend it!

Want to make sure this book is about inventors and not politicians? I saw it was going to be on the shelves soon. I didn't talk about how to be a good king all the time without any interesting inventions. Are you really not a big politician on the train? I also want to ask, after it is put on the shelves, will you still talk about these instead of some amazing inventions?

Come on, it's not easy to see a good-looking Star Rail fanfic at the starting point

Author, why don't you change the title of your book? When I first saw the title of this book, I skipped it. When I was flipping through it for the second time, a fan of Star Dome Railway clicked on it.

Are you trying to make me laugh to death with this introduction? Hahaha😆

Unable to Screw is almost over, do you want to write more?

By the way, is there a female protagonist?

Question, is there a female protagonist? I feel like it's unreasonable for a second game fandom to not have a female protagonist.