Battle Through the Heavens: Myriad Beast Spirit Flame from the Start

I still don't understand how I started practicing at the age of eight and became a five-star fighting master in the Xiao family at the age of fifteen. At this time, the system did not come, and neither did the golden finger. At the same time as the original work, Xiao Xun'er was fifteen years old and only had one star as a fighter, missing 14 stars. This...

The writing is very good, but the number of words is too few and not enough to read.

Now that you have a system, do you still want to learn from Yao Chen? ? Slipping away

Poison, the protagonist was not surprised at all when he saw the soul body for the first time. It seemed very abnormal to Yao Lao. How could he trade so calmly? Second, is it necessary to go up to the roll call and ask for Ya Fei? Normal people would look for someone they can talk to. Although Yafei meets this condition, writing it like this... Makes me very unhappy!

The author takes advantage of the fact that the number of words is small now, and he can retain more readers by revising his opinions after reading the posts of book friends. 🙂

Became Yunyun's dog! You can withdraw.

Qinglin is a bunch of nonsense and rubbish novels.

Is it a single heroine or multiple heroines?

I like the author to only accept three women. Personally, I feel that if there are more than four, it will basically collapse later. Especially don't write too many articles that are too erotic. Occasionally, it's okay to make fun of them. If you write too much, it will make you feel sick. I will read it to 100 first. I hope I won't just accept one when I see one. Many of them write this kind of article and it will collapse. I recommend Medusa and Xiao Xuaner. Does it matter whether you charge it or not? Little Medical Fairy, Zi Yan, or Cao Ying in Single Tower, two or three of these are enough. I don't write much now. I think it would be good to recommend Cao Ying. It is also best to link the protagonist's own Jiyuan. For example, if there is a cave or some secret realm, you don't have to just take the one that is available. Chance, remember, when I chase after it, if If it's too low, just criticize it. The reason I say I don't recommend writing about many women is because if you're not good at writing emotional scenes, your book will be over. It's hard to write enough to read the introduction and appetite. If you don't meet my requirements, basically, it's over. I hope the author has read it. Anyway, after saying so much, the author doesn't listen. It's over. No one can blame me.

I don't know how long your book will last. If possible, it would be best to write about the Gods and Gods of the Great Thousand Worlds.