Cultivating from a Border Guard

Beginner, Minor Success, Intermediate Success, Major Success, Perfection – could you remove the "Intermediate Success" section before the book has been open for too long? It's too discouraging.

To be honest, I really don't know what the author was thinking. Can military salutes be changed at will?

Finally, a direct rebellion would be more logical, given that such high merit would threaten the ruler and give them the ability to rebel. As the saying goes, "Peace is established by generals; if generals are not allowed to see peace, they will inevitably become enemies. It's better to strike first."

Shen Hu's internal monologue during the battlefield fights is excessive, clearly padding the word count and detracting from the visceral, bloody beauty of the action.

Readers are welcome to share any suggestions they may have regarding the upcoming plot of this book, and we will try our best to meet everyone's needs.

There's too much text, and the plot isn't progressing at all. Stop piling on words!

In martial arts, there are only nine ranks, from 1 to 9, with rank 9 being the lowest. Rank 3 is only a squad leader (伍长), so by that logic, rank 2 is 10 leaders (十长), and rank 1 is at most a centurion (百夫长). Then a general would be a rank 1, right? Do you think that makes sense?

Reluctant to abandon the book, I reread it from chapter 168 and finally noticed: the followers of the Illusionary Butterfly True Monarch...

I don't understand these last two chapters; they feel like old plot points...

This is all so nonsensical. Have you even read it yourself? A Ninth Princess suddenly appears out of nowhere? Nobody reads your romance novels. If you want to write about love stories, go to the female-oriented section; women like to read those. And what about the realms you described? One realm is divided into nine minor realms? Seriously, with so many realms, any young person could keep up.