Tianlan Immortal Clan

The writing is very good, it is my favorite writing style, very calm. I stayed up late to read it. All the current paid chapters have been opened. I give you a vote. Keep writing well, but don't be a eunuch!

I would like to make a suggestion, the story about a cultivating family should highlight the protagonist, family members, spiritual forces, etc. Also, the elixirs for refining qi should not be so rare. The elixir materials are obtained by sects, families, and casual cultivators in the wild. Because the years are short, most of them are wholesale. Also, don't write that after the age of 60, the blood is weak and cannot build the foundation.

The author's writing is too detailed. He has written so many chapters for the fifth level of Qi Refining, but don't write three hundred chapters for foundation building and it will be a hit. The setting cannot be all about Qi Refining and just throw it out at once. It makes people feel that the writing is too messy and complicated, so no one will read it. Summary: This book is okay, but the progress of cultivation is a bit slow, which is not suitable for the fast pace of today.

It's very flavorful and more in line with my expectations for mortal flow. Come on!

The opening emphasizes that the family relationship is very good, but what is the result? Why hide it if it's not a sign of distrust.

Why are there so few people? I feel like the writing is pretty good.

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

Very good! I hope the writing is more passionate,