The Wizard of Douluo Dalu

I understand that in Douluo fanfics, as long as there are characters in it, the plot development is biased towards Tang Clan/Shrek/Haotian Sect/Tang San and the people around him. This character will gradually become extreme and double-standard.

After signing the contract, the plot fell apart. First, he destroyed the Golden Dragon Spear, and then told Gu Yuena about Tang San of the God Realm. How could a four-ringed person with no background know this? The key is that Gu Yuena still doesn't doubt it. It's really outrageous. The collapse is estimated to be around 400,000 words.

The author is currently writing the plot very smoothly. I hope the author can clearly understand the horizontal comparison between the two power systems. Don't do anything. A ninth-level wizard is equivalent to the extreme Douluo operation.

Knowledge is power. We must not take the opportunity to tie Tang Shenwang to the operating table for research.

Generally speaking, it's okay, you can read it, but there are a lot of poisonous points. The article does not explain why Gu Yuena and Tang Wulin don't know each other. They met when they were children. There is also why Gu Yuena takes the initiative to approach the protagonist. The article does not explain clearly. If it is five stars, it can only be given two stars.

There's that Xu Xiaoyan everywhere. He comes out every few chapters. What's the use besides talking to people? He also helps her become a god. He also sticks his head out and shows a sweet smile. After it's put on the shelves, the writing is even more confusing. No wonder it's on the street.

Nowadays, most of the Douluo 2 fanfics feature Huo Yuhao as the protagonist. Huo Yuhao's moral level has dropped below the floor tiles since the Soul Master Competition, and he is comparable to the Tang Shenwang. Cheating, playing on behalf of others, and killing people in matches are a matter of course! ! In the end, he became the Tang family's domestic dog and Licking Dog. Even if Huo Yuhao knew the truth, he might be very happy. After all, humans and Licking Dogs are not the same kind of creatures, such as Bibi Dong! !

Gu Yuena

The only Douluo III that is interesting to watch, the author writes it very well. I hope that the god can be strapped to the operating table for study later 😏

I feel that Shrek Academy should be responsible for the bombing. I estimate that at least 2/3 of the people in the Federation want them dead. For example, in their first-year final exam, they challenge someone who is one level higher than themselves. If they lose, they will say that they are one level higher than me. It is useless if they win. If they beat the opponent, they will say that I am from Shrek Academy. This is very hateful.