I'm a Ghost in Tokyo

The title of this book is quite speechless. It is either a ghost or a god. What is the coined word for "ghost, god"?

The writing style is still too messy, which makes people doubt that it was written by a Chinese in Japan.

To be honest, after more than 40 chapters, I just can't see where the main plot is. .

This is probably a book run by AI, and I tested it. When I read each chapter individually, there seemed to be no problem. But when I read them together, I found that there is no normal human logic at all.

The writing is so messy that I even doubt whether he is Chinese.

There are too many mistakes in subjects and attributives. Instead of writing prose, write the characters clearly, such as so-and-so's mother, so-and-so's father instead of mother and father. Personal pronouns are not used carefully. He and she are often used incorrectly. It is recommended to write the name directly after it. The story is too jumpy and often jumps from one scene to another with no connection in the middle. If you cannot write the transition in the middle, it is recommended to use more dividing lines or short prompts such as At the same time, two flowers bloom.

I don't feel like the author is Chinese. This writing style makes my head explode.

I looked at the discussion forum and it seems that the reviews are not very good. Fortunately, I didn't read the discussion forum. So far, the writing is pretty good. Keep up the good work.

Are the later chapters run by AI? Sometimes chaos is normal, and sometimes it doesn't look like it was written by a human being.

I don't understand,,, I'm confused

I can't understand it, the writing is too messy, like a stitching monster, it makes people's scalp numb.

Nonsense? The preface is not followed by the sequel, and the basic sentences are not written correctly, making it a headache to read. Since the choice is made out, it is not for self-entertainment. The most basic thing is that others cannot understand it...

Judging from the name, how does it compare with "I'm a Teacher in Tokyo"? Is there any Shennong?

It's not as good looking as it was at the beginning. The writing these days feels messy and uninteresting.

It feels a little confusing. The protagonist is not like a time traveler. As long as you are not a fish that slipped through the compulsory education system, you will know that there is only one kind of real strength. Blood and sword are all secondary. You can't solve the problem by hacking. There is only one way to solve the problem. Read the history books.

Several of the recommended books are like this. At first glance, they look fine, but after reading them, I find that the writing is incomprehensible.

Do you have any recommendations for novels about Tomie, Sadako, and Kayako? I have watched "I am a Teacher in Tokyo"

The level is around mid-level, specific, and the number of words is too few to make it clear. Don't be scolded 😁

After reading more than ten chapters, I felt a little dizzy.

It was written in a mess, and my mind was confused just by looking at it.

Around the first 2-30 chapters, it was quite good when the story about the miko Sadako was not involved, especially when it came to the dialogue and interaction between Tomie, Kayako, and my sister. Moreover, because the plot at this period also tended to be more everyday and supernatural, there was no sense of violation at all. It wasn't until the gods and Onmyoji came out later that the plot changed. It's like the original urban supernatural suddenly changed into a fantasy and the style of painting suddenly changed. Of course, this is not the point. The point is that during this period, the plot became messy. It felt like all the plots that appeared later were like Stitch Monster and everything was written into it. It is recommended that the author reopen the book and choose a subject that focuses on daily supernatural phenomena and does not involve gods, onmyojis, and rivers and lakes. It would be much better.

How can I put it this way? I like the subject matter and the characters very much, but it just feels too confusing and a bit dizzy.

Everything after Chapter 60 is nothing. It's no longer a book. It feels like spaghetti mixed with No. 42 Concrete.