
Starting from Refining Weapons and Cultivating Immortals in Dou Po
从炼器开始在斗破修仙
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- Completed
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- 1.8M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Author, this time don't write that the Spirit Tribe was destroyed by the Soul Tribe. Instead, write that the Spirit Tribe and the Soul Tribe conducted an experiment together. When the experiment failed, the Spirit Tribe was gone.
Lao Deng, won't Douluo write?
Dou San's spiritual casting method means that everything has spirituality, and Dou Po Cang Qiong also has spiritual settings that can be applied. Purified by a hundred casts, refined by a thousand casts, endowed with spirit by cast of spirit, endowed with soul by soul cast, smelted by melting, cast and engraved by heaven. If extended, this is a complete spiritual practice system. There are many kinds of metals with different appearances. In the final analysis, it is also the tempering of various materials. It is a spiritual system in which materials awaken their spirituality and then grow and evolve step by step. Whether it is refining weapons or medicine, the birth of life is ultimately inseparable from the second spirit. Even the birth of the soul is like this. One thing to say is that although the third young master has a bad character, his ideas in the book are quite novel and his imagination is wide open. The author can learn from it.
I think the most important thing is to build a computer or an intelligent brain to help you analyze and think. People have their limits, although it is quite difficult.
Very watery. . . . What can be explained clearly in one sentence must be said from another angle and repeated over and over again. A sentence can be expanded into a chapter, and it keeps talking about chariots.
Although Tang San is far inferior to Xiao Yan in many aspects, the emotional line between him and Xiao Wu is clear The relationship between Xun'er and Xiao Yan is more like a kind of pua, although Xiao Yan himself may not realize that he is pua Xun'er, but his behavior is like this. 1 Touch the girl's body naked at the beginning to leave the first impression 2 Form a small world for two people with a girl who is a bit withdrawn 3 Establish bonds with other girls (watch Xiao Yu take a bath, give her virginity to Medusa) Test Xun'er's obedience, lower the bottom line little by little 4 After a long time of not seeing each other, distance creates beauty, creating a brother Yan who exists in the mind and memory (similar to Bibi Dong's fantasy) Perfect Jade Xiaogang) Xiao Yan may not be like this in every step, but the results of his actions are like this. Therefore, compared to the bond between Xiao Yan and Medusa, his relationship with Xiao Xun'er is actually very inconsistent from an outsider's perspective. Of course, this is just the author's personal opinion that accepting Xiao Xun'er is unethical. I don't think this is unethical. To some extent, it can be regarded as freeing Xun'er from the sea of suffering
More than 600 chapters have passed and you have just been promoted to Dou Huang?
Lao Deng, you have to live well this time 😡
The suppression of the main character is so great, even more so than in the original novel, and nearly two hundred chapters have just arrived at the Great Fighter.
I just want to know, Doupo is a continental world. It can be said that the physics is very different from reality, and there are a lot of Dou Qi particles in the air. Is the protagonist a great scientist? All kinds of high technologies have been realized in the past, so why was the protagonist an ordinary college student in his previous life?
The author's idea is quite good, but the author writes about anti-inflammatory like a pendant and a licking dog.
While others are obsessed with it after it is put on the shelves, the author is obsessed with the first chapter. Skipping previous chapters does not affect subsequent viewing.
In fact, many people started to follow your book. The reason is just because it is a single female protagonist, the Little Medical Fairy. Your Yun Yun's combat power is really outrageous. Since it is said that it can kill the flame medicine combination and can be used with Medusa 55, I really don't want to complain. A three-star Dou Huang has a sixth-level magic core sword and sixth-level inner armor. He cannot beat the Amethyst Alien Lion King with the strength of a three- or four-star Dou Huang. He was killed by a snake man. Three or four fighting kings of the clan couldn't escape. If Xiao Yan hadn't come back to save her, she would have to die again. Why are you bragging so outrageously about your combat prowess? Anyway, you don't accept female protagonists. So far, Yun Yun has written the most pen and ink. It's really shameless. If you really want to write it, mark it on the character introduction at the starting point. I won't put so much expectation and effort on your book.
Why do you write about time travel as if you were aboriginal, neither up nor down?
After reading the first three chapters, I feel a little uncomfortable. I may not be the audience of this book, so I won't torture each other. Goodbye.
The water in the Pacific Ocean was put by the author
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At present, it seems that the protagonist is Xiao Huohuo's master and apprentice's top nanny, and he gets all kinds of good things, but Xiao Huohuo is not a waste, and there is no way to see Xiao Huohuo's feedback to the protagonist. Xiao Huohuo is not the kind of person who can eat people up and wipe them clean like Tang San. He also wants face, right?
The original work mentioned a fighting spirit weapon
It should be that when Xiao Yan led a group of strong men with Dou Zun to help Xiao Meng who was being taken care of by Medusa, he mentioned that Xiao Meng had introduced a kind of powerful crossbow. It was relatively rare but was manufactured. It was not an orphan and could only be controlled by Dou Ling. Once it hit, Dou Huang would be penetrated.
Can there be more plot? A few sentences are all it takes, and the rest is all about the protagonist, all kinds of associations, all kinds of guesses, all kinds of conjectures, and the dialogue was originally good, but the protagonist suddenly starts to think about other things, and after 5 or 6 pages, the plot is no longer coherent.
Didn't you say it's almost over? Are there three chapters left or five? Can it be completed in November? The progress is at 99%, so hurry up and finish it.
When I first wrote this book, I thought it had a lot of potential, but I didn't expect the results to be so poor.
Write quickly, it's done, it takes half a month to write a chapter, what the hell is this.
You said you'll find time to make up for it when it's almost finished. Does that mean you'll write 2 chapters when it's almost finished in October?
By the way, the author said that the heroine has Zi Yan, but so far I feel like she hasn't spent much time describing Zi Yan.
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The novels written by transgender people are neither male nor female. You can use a sentence from a certain scholar to express it. This novel is to take the dross and discard the essence. He has taken advantage of all the shortcomings of the male novel and the female novel, and there is no good thing.
Isn't the other one being updated?
Finally a eunuch? 🤔🤔🤔
It feels like the style has changed a lot compared to "Give Douluo a Little Technological Shock" and "Start from Ji Ji Ji Douluo". It doesn't feel like an author, and it doesn't have that kind of appeal.
No, brother, I want to see you write about the world. I mean, is it possible to continue writing?