
Give Douluo a Little Technological Shock
给斗罗一点科技震撼
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.5M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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[Starting Point to Raise Gu King]
The starting point of professional breeding and popular themes to follow the trend Welcome to place a bet, like to see the odds, and click to dislike the odds. Let's see who can survive to the end and become the King of Gu Results of the first issue of 2021.03.18: 108 Books included, 29 books of Eunuch, 16 books of Sanjiang, and one book of Jingjing. King Gu is "Signed in the Cold Palace for Eighty Years, I am Invincible in the World" The ratio of likes and dislikes is roughly consistent with th
Excellent Work by Fans
Excellent fanfic
A Private Bookcase Filled with Bookshelves
The taste is similar, please click to bookmark the book list~ If you like a certain book, please like and recommend it~ Updated from time to time, collection of book lists and comments can urge the owner to update. (This book will only add novels that the author has read and feel they are acceptable, basically only those with a score of 7.5 Or above), and the author's personal ratings and testimonials will be added as a reference. The full score for personal evaluation is 10 points, 6 points is
A Large Collection of Fan Fiction
Some of my favorite fan fiction concentration camps
The Books I Once Liked All Have Their Own Merits
I have been a bookworm for about ten years, and I have gone from being a child to a vicissitude of life. I hope to provide my fellow readers with books that I have loved.
Rain and Wind
Some articles that I think are good-looking
Fandom, Science Fiction, Personal Hobbies
Fan fiction, science fiction, unlimited streaming, your favorite novels
At Least the Douluo Fanfics That Can Be Seen in the Front
As for Douluo fans, they may not have finished reading them all.
A Good Book to Read by Yourself
I declare that the single score of this book is based on my own taste.
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Damn it. After reading novels for more than ten years, I can only count the few times that my blood boils. What is the radiance of wisdom shining on the earth? The introduction is absolutely correct. The time traveler itself can be a golden finger. I couldn't sleep at all while reading it. My mind was filled with the protagonist holding a sword to the sky. I was so lucky that I wasn't stopped by the sunspots in the book review section.
Highly recommended, the author really shocked me
After reading it all night, my evaluation: Compared with other Douluo fandoms, it is a masterpiece and a good book in the first echelon. (Guaranteed by my title) Bad news: There are less details on the characters. Compared with other fans, the story develops very quickly, and it may not be long. Finally, I'm looking forward to the author's imagination, may your talents and ideas spring up, and will you be updated every day! !
Thoughts after reading comments
I like order, I like Datong, and I like this book. Many people hate the various characters in it and use this to attack this book. I think it is unnecessary and I don't care. When you repeat a book, you should put aside your prejudices and accept the second life given to the character by the author. Different growth methods will create different characters. If you define fandom by the original work, you should not read the fanfic. Fans are cool stories, but they are not just cool stories. They are more about making up for regrets. If you don't like regrets and want redemption, you have fanfictions (except those who just do it right away, and those who fall in love with each other when they meet them). This is a good fanfic, I don't know what height he is in, and I know very well what makes him better than others, but his plot is reasonable and his emotions are reasonable. He is a good fanfic. A good person will not be good without reason, and he will not hate someone without reason. Or some people criticize that technology is unreasonable, development is unreasonable, technology is unreasonable, and so on. But please remember that this is a fan light novel, a fantasy sewer. Since the fantasy fairy can be spiritual, and you think it is reasonable, then add some technology trees to give spirituality and power. If you want to purely enjoy technology, please go to the science fiction area, or read science fiction books instead of reading light novels that make people have fun. Just like magic, when you choose to watch a magic show, you have to enjoy the process of being deceived instead of focusing on revealing the secrets. That is what peers should do. We are the audience and we only need to enjoy. The same is true for reading this book. You just need to enjoy it, you don't need to think about it. It doesn't matter even if you jump to read it, because you are here to enjoy it, not to find trouble (except for the brainless and brainless books, I usually quit directly within three chapters). If you don't like this setting, you don't like this kind of group portrait, then you can choose what you like to read. We are the audience and readers. If you are not satisfied, you can try it elsewhere and keep your words. I like order and Datong. So I like it very much. The more books I read, the more I prefer group portraits and the less I like individual heroes.
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The author is immersed in his own art and works for his own pleasure. Compared to The Three-Body Problem, the author does not even have the same ability as Liu Cixin to tell a story in an ordinary way. The entire content is fragmented and confusing to read, and it is simply torturing yourself. There are a lot of good reviews in the book review section, but it doesn't mean that the book looks really good. If you don't believe it, read it on your own. If you can accept it within ten chapters, continue reading. If you can't accept that it will be like this later, give up early to avoid wasting time. Now that Douluo fandom has developed quite a lot, there is no reason why this book must be read.
The more I watched it, the more familiar it became. Then I felt like I had seen it before. Then I thought, holy shit, "The Three-Body Problem". Brother, can you understand The Three-Body Problem? Can you synchronize the light particles? If it doesn't work, water drops will do.
The content of Chapter 50 feels a bit messy, the author, why don't you check it out?
I've read a lot of fanfiction, what do you think is the best?
Personally speaking, after reading too much fan fiction, what I look forward to the most is to see the fan authors come up with self-supporting theories and to be able to complete the summary of the original work. There are always various setting conflicts in the original work, and the logic is difficult to be consistent, especially the long original work. What satisfies me the most about this book is that it has written new things, and it can be self-explanatory. The logic of the plot is discontinuous, and it has written my deepest impression of Tang San: a lowly killer who can't get out of the world.
Every world has its own scenery. The author is a talent who can write about the glory of historical changes and the grandeur of that era of change in a world of Douluo. Of course, the changes of the times are not a one-person show, and I hope to add some richer group portraits in the later stage.
Yes, it's one of the top 3 Douluo fanfics I've read. I hope it won't fall apart in the later stages. There are many books that were well written in the early stages but fell apart in the later stages. Most of them were written about emotional dramas but failed. My suggestion is that if the author is not sure, he still doesn't have a heroine or downplays the emotional dramas. He's afraid.
Can we break away from Shrek in the future? It is an investment institution. The teaching philosophy has not changed much from ten thousand years ago. There is no need to tie the protagonist to it.
Although Tang San in the original book has various faults and is not a good person, he is still kind and kind. What I read here is that from the beginning to the end, I can't wait for him to rush to the streets in the next chapter. Although he seems to be the villain boss, from the beginning to the end, I don't have a good impression at all. Even Shrek's people are targeting it. It's too outrageous... Ask yourself how many people think that he would really do such an angry thing... It's not that I like the character of Tang San, it's just that he is too different from what I know about him. Of course he has a lot of black spots, but this is too much, and he is almost like another person! Regardless of whether you agree or not, I maintain the above views!
Does the author accept this book? Wang Donger, Wang Qiuer, Xiao Xiao, Jiangnan Nan, Tianmeng, Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor, Liya, Lijing, Sea Princess Zhu, Bajiao, Gillian, Youyou, Orange, Luanfeng, Keke, Xu Jiujiu, Qingya, Wei Na, Mu Xue, Wu Ming, Lan Susu, Lan Luoluo, Nan Qiuqiu, Nan Shuishui, Nana, Meng Hongchen, Appreciating the Moon, An Leng Ye, Fei Yuyan, Yu Mengdi, Yi Chen (Dou II), Wang Chengxi, Cain, Dragon Girl, Wu Yun, Wu Yu, Tang Ya, Ma Xiaotao, Zhou Yi, Hibiscus, Han Ruoruo, Ling Luochen, Xixi, Zhu Lu, Cui Yajie, Xu Tianzhen, Bai, Muyue, Su Tong, Zhang Lexuan, Xue Lingxun (Xue Ying), Gu Yuena, Bi Ji, Zi Ji, Mo Huang, Lan Fuzi, Lang, Ye Xinglan, Xu Xiaoyan, Yuan En Yehui, Wu Siduo, Dai Yun'er, Long Yuxue, Yali, Long Yeyue, Mo Lan, Shi Mengshan, Xiazheng Leng, Tang Ziran's mother, Nunnally, Long Bing, Li Yaoyao, Ling Zichen, Leng Yao Zhu, Leng Yulai, Ye Lingtong, Xingxuan, Bai Xiuxiu, Lan Meng Qin, Tang Yuge, Yuan Enhuihui, Qiangu Yourou, Le Qingling, Yingluohong, Lan Bing, Tang Ximeng, Yun Liao, Elf Queen, Lan Butterfly, Nan Cheng, Chen Wuzhu, Zhang Chujia, Jia Lin, Long Tianyang, Crimson Mother, Song Lao, Cai Meier , Xian Lin'er, Ye Xi Shui, Fengling, Duchess, Huo Yuner, Dai Luoli's mother, Xu Yun, Xiao Wu, Xiao Wu's mother, Ning Rongrong, Zhu Zhuqing, The three Shangguan sisters, Feng Nu, Lan Chen, Sura, Li Haiyang, Any Ya, Xiang Luan, Ye Lianqin, the Demon King, Lily, Phil, Tian Qin, Piaomiao , Mo Yue, Mu Zimo, Hai Xing, Li Muzi, Evil Emperor, Princess Golden Dragon, First Angel God, Qian Renxue, Bibi Dong, Hu Liena, Ye Lingling, Xue Ke, Liu Erlong, Meng Yiran Chaotian Xiang, Doudou, Bo Saixi, A Yin, Dark Dragon King, Water Dragon King, God of Lust, God of Light, Water God, Bai Agarwood, Wife of the Dragon God, Sheng Cai'er, Bai, Lan Yanyu, Li Xin, Meng Qingqing, Sun Wanwan, Qiao Huan'er, Meigongzi, Su Qin, Peacock Princess (Luo Qingzhu), Jin Miaosen, Huo Ling'er, Reason Heart, Red One to Red Eighteen, Meng Te Shi, The First Generation of Peacock Demon Emperor, Cheng Zicheng, Ling Muxue, Huang Bingbing, Yan Yi, Liuli Tianjing Emperor, Crystal Demon Emperor, Tianyang Tianjing Emperor, Diyin Tianjing Emperor, Yuan Enxingtian, Li Jiangqi, Qiu Zixuan, Lan Yinhai, Ao Dai Li, Hepburn, Ling Menglu, Zisang Liuying, Yue Li, Wang Chang Xin, Ming Xi, Yan Yao, Tang Ling, God of Kindness, Goddess of Life, Lie Yan
The book is okay, with both advantages and disadvantages. The protagonist is a high-intelligence research type in the science fiction genre, a bit like Dr. Chen, but it is not the same type. It relies on the original world and high vision to overwhelm people. The author's writing is a bit awkward. On the one hand, he exaggerates the coldness and ruthlessness of the protagonist. His girlfriend died for him at the beginning, but on the other hand, there is no one he wants to kill. Even a bad guy like Ye Xishui needs redemption. The writing style is a bit stream-of-consciousness, which makes most of it enjoyable and a small part of it disgusting. It's like having sand in the food. It would be a pity not to eat it, but it would make people feel uncomfortable after eating it.
The writing is really good, it is a good book. If you maintain this quality, you can reach the top of the Douluo fandom. I will go to the Douluo group to help you recommend the book. If you can, please add it to me.
After reading dozens of chapters, it's okay. The setting is A, the writing is B, the plot is C+, and the poison index is 0.4 (A lot, 40% of people can't stand it). As mentioned below, it mainly depends on the Riddler. The plot is written in a general direction. The only thing that left an impression is that a multi-function detector like Dragon Jewel Kameng was installed in Shrek City. At the same time, it does not explain whether the protagonist knows about the Douluo novel or not, which raises the level of Tang San's divine realm. These are considered poisonous points. Because there is no specific technical description, it is all just for the sake of pretending. The author will definitely say that no one understands this except the protagonist, and he can only iterate on his own. But in fact, the sword codenamed "Exile" has no specific function, and there is no explanation after the word appears. It is just a pretentious term, as a guarantee of combat effectiveness, so the guy downstairs said "The Riddler". Because there is no explanation, readers have to "brain" what this is, why this thing came out, and are there any other novels, comics, and movies similar to it. In short, the setting is very good, and it is a virgin novel that is difficult to write and read.
It looks really tiring, and everything is in the clouds. It feels like the author writes two-thirds every time and leaves one-third for the readers to make up for themselves. The explanations are not clear, and the Riddler is the whole process. The key is that there are a lot of abstract understandings in science and engineering, which is confusing
Looking at so many Douluo fandoms, Tang San is really dark and a bit uncomfortable. Maybe it's because I read Mu Fengchun's Dou Yi comics when I was a kid and haven't read the novel version of Tang San Shao. I actually feel very good about Tang San.
It is the best-looking among many Douluo fans, and it finally has something to offer. As soon as your book came out, all the Douluo fans in the past were in trouble, and the fans in the future became more and more difficult and cunning. Next door Huo Yuhao's Crossing Douluo made my eyes shine, but you are even better. There is also a fancy study of Blue Silver Grass, which I couldn't get enough of, it wasn't very good, and it even had original characters. Come on, I am optimistic about you. In my heart, your first order is worth 3,000+. I haven't seen such a wonderful fanfic in a long time. It would be better if your heroine is not Ma Xiaotao. Affirmation from the author who is also the starting point.
Is Tang San really Tang San? A good-for-nothing, with huge character flaws, who can't accept new things, who has no innovative ability to use his power, and who has a loose waist, can actually inherit the divine throne, or even dual divine thrones! Especially the way he treats his daughter and Xiao Wu is a completely different person. This is probably a trap! After all, the more waste there is, the easier it is to control. This may be the back-up left by the previous Shura God. After all, exploration is a dangerous thing! After all, the more useless the emperor is, the more powerful his ministers will be.
Brother, please change the introduction. Even if you write "I don't know how to write an introduction, please read the text", I won't miss this book for so long.
Seeing that Ye Xishui is immortal and can purify the evil soul master's martial soul directly defines garbage novels. It really disgusts me to see this. What is it written about?
I haven't read it yet, but I took a look at the introduction and wanted to complain "The expansion of the underlying force is the decisive force that promotes the development of civilization" Have you given back everything you learned in high school to the teacher? Since when did development rely on underlying physical expansion? The progress of civilization must depend on the continuous development of productive forces and the production relations that continue to match it.
Humans and spirit beasts should be enemies
In fact, I have never understood why we need to cooperate with spirit beasts. We have no problem with overthrowing Tang San and the gods, but forget about the spirit beasts. Gods and humans have no hatred against me, but people and spirit beasts are mortal enemies. Human beings need space for development, and spirit beasts also need space. It is impossible to survive peacefully, so one side must perish.
The subject matter is very good, but having an evil spirit master as the heroine is probably just sanctimonious. The heroine is Ma✘✘. It is conceivable that you can completely oppose Tang San. Are you going to kill her ancestor Ma? With technology in the hands of people with such low moral standards, the exploitation of the people at the bottom will only become more pervasive and stronger than Tang San's.
The author puts it well in one sentence. If strength does not include wisdom, it will be the tragedy of strength
Good brothers, please give me some character pictures ٩(๑´3`๑)۶ (the confident white prostitute)
A brief look at it has changed my prejudice against Douluo fans. I can only say that it has brought the level of Douluo fans to a level that does not belong to it. The writing is so awesome.
The author uses this method of quoting biographies to describe from an alternative perspective, which I miss very much. If the author can really make up his mind to create some better characters in the later stage, it will be perfect. Great man, great funeral, I thought it was a great plot. The first very long online novel I read, Mercenary World, what I still remember ten years later is the plot of the two main characters being knifed. Chi Hanfeng, Daqingshan.
I found this book today and read it from beginning to end. I feel comfortable I haven't found this type of book for a long time. The setting is really good. Don't be hindered by these extremely aggressive people.