Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei Is Developing the Main God

As for cats, sooner or later this kind of god will be knocked unconscious and taken back to be a velvet ball 😜

Look at the new Lu Mingfei, but isn't this type of main god from the cat side? 😏

I want to ask why there are so many people licking Lu Mingfei. Do you really have to lick Lu Mingfei when writing about the Dragon Clan? Basically all the dragons I saw were licking him.

The second world is really boring. Anti-Japanese dramas are really boring. There are so many anti-Japanese dramas on TV. I still want to watch the novel version of the anti-Japanese drama. I'm full.

How did this protagonist become a Madonna? What 731 did is indeed the right thing. As long as a Chinese has a conscience, he should help those compatriots, but those people in Monster Hunter are none of your business. You said that your mission conflicts with Tang Keke, so just go find trouble. For some old, weak, sick and disabled people you don't know, it's so troublesome to find a boss who can crush you to death at any time. Holy Mother

After Lu Mingfei, the main god of Dacheng, returned to the dragon world, he chased his senior sister and kept crying: How can I live without you?

The beginning was not handled well. The protagonist just had the name Lu Mingfei. It would be the same if he changed his name to anyone else. Lu Mingfei changed too quickly and entered the role too quickly. He was like Long Aotian. His writing style was good and the content was well written, but it was not suitable for Lu Mingfei. I suggest the author think more about how to present the character of Lu Mingfei in the novel.

Sure enough, a common problem among new authors is that they always like to write something a bit literary.

I read Chapter 6, and the writing is pretty good. The protagonist is thoughtful and decisive, but unfortunately his name is Lu Mingfei. The gap between him and the original character is too big, and there is no transformation process. Lu Mingfei suddenly gave up all his bad habits after entering the main god space, and became a character like the male protagonist of the male channel. The sense of separation is really strong. At that stage of the original work, Lu Mingfei was just a cowardly and incompetent high school student. Let alone recruiting samurai in a serious manner, he would have complained even if he lived in that era for a day, and it was certain that he would constantly talk trash. I really wanted to read the book about Lu Mingfei because I wanted to see his transformation, to see the unknown things in the original work that brought us regrets, but the process of transformation must be shown, even if it is a background setting that is mentioned in half a chapter. I haven't seen the situation in the Dragon Clan main world later. At present, I feel that it is more appropriate to treat this as a Dragon Clan novel with original characters, or should I say unlimited streaming? After all, in addition to explaining the background of the dragon clan, the first few chapters are really just like the traditional infinite flow. Lu Mingfei is really just a leather cover, which is the traditional template changed into a somewhat interesting skin. But then again, except for the separation of characters, the writing is pretty good in other aspects. I will continue to watch it, even if it is completely unlimited.

Let's use a more famous world. I've never heard of the first world.

After reading it, the evaluation is worth watching. The disadvantage is that it is relatively slow to pick up, but it is not bad, and the logical plot is relatively tight The biggest problem is that the author should not use Lu Mingfei as the protagonist. It does not mean that the writing is not good. If you want to use the background of the dragon clan, I feel that you can set it up to travel to the dragon clan first. The protagonist just bears the name of Lu Mingfei, and you can't see the feeling of being a child. From the sky From a literary point of view, it's good. I look forward to the follow-up and will update soon. The biggest flaw I have had so far after reading it is that the protagonist is Lu Mingfei. He does things that are not what Lu Mingfei would do, especially the lack of nonsense words in the sign, and the protagonist is not suitable for speaking nonsense. I don't think the other problems are a problem. Some problems are basically due to the incompatibility with Lu Mingfei's character. It would be better if Lu Mingfei is left out.

Is the author not a female video writer? If so, then it is really bad! 😅

In my impression, Lu Mingfei is at least 1.8 Meters tall. In the first dungeon, he should be considered a giant. What Japanese wouldn't be frightened when they see him?

The writing is okay but the content is a little off I didn't see the magnetic field and the bloodthirsty audience Lu Mingfei has a high IQ, as if someone has taken away the poor boy.

It's not a buddy, we just said we won't talk about getting three golden chapters. You also need an attractive beginning. If you write it at Qidian, it should be a work that is more famous at Qidian.

Has China been invaded by Japan in Dragon World? If anything. Lu Mingfei could just take the invitation to participate in the imperial competition and then lose his fortune. If Lu Mingfei had to see or experience that painful history with his own eyes, he would change. I went to participate in the competition before and planned to fuck the emperor. I can only say that what this person set up is even more stinky than it originally was.

The latest chapter has a bit of a stench, and I don't know what the author is trying to express.

You are not Lu Mingfei at all, who are you?

You might as well write that the main character traveled through time and became Lu Mingfei. His character is completely different.