I'm on Patrol in the Concession

I have been testing the drug for two days today, and I feel that the more than twenty books I read today are all generated by AI. There is no one to read. I really didn't expect that more than half a year after the emergence of AI-generated artificial intelligence, the first one to be destroyed was the online literature industry. The starting point has been filled with AI-generated garbage. The AI ​​virus has destroyed the online literature industry.

There was so much fun in the beginning, but the male protagonist was criticized to death in the end. His family property was confiscated, and the male protagonist was shot.

The author, who is illiterate in the military, wrote the article like this. It seems that he knows a little bit about military affairs, but in fact, shooting at 1,000 meters requires a shooting table. The shooting table is calculated based on the characteristics of the internal ballistics and external ballistics of the firearm and various climatic conditions. What is needed is a ballistic computer. The more accurate the design, the more detailed the data required. The author doesn't understand this at all.

The situation itself is very difficult, and writing about capable people from other countries is even more difficult. If I can't offend you, why can't I hide from you? Can you still stop people from leaving? Then it will be my time not to kill Boren again. Let's see and cherish…

You, a patrolman, controls the president's heart. It seems that he will be dead if he leaves you.

From the perspective of espionage and anti-Japanese war, it's a bit irritating, but it's very enjoyable to treat him as a high-speed chase.

I have set the death date of the protagonist for the author, 1966

Chapter One, Sniper Killing from a Thousand Meters Away The further you go to the back, the stronger the protagonist's ability is, and the closer his design distance is. Is the protagonist strengthened or weakened? I have never seen you being so abusive

Kill more Japanese and traitors, you can do it! ! !

The 1,000-meter sniper attack was too exaggerated during World War II. Without common sense and a system, wouldn't it be okay to bring a few tons of TNT to touch a Japanese ship?

Recommended reading in the Anti-Japanese War First of all, the author created a parallel world to avoid risks. The identity of the protagonist gave me a sense of freshness, because the protagonists in the stories I have read before were either under the command of Lao Dai or were puppet army agents. I am looking forward to the plot after the fall of Shanghai and want to see what the protagonist will do. Also, the space, system and amnesia at the beginning made me a little confused. After the beginning, it became much smoother. As for the plot, the author has been able to get it right along the way. There are occasional stumbling blocks. After all, he is a novice author, but he can continue to read it. I am short of books and want to read recommendations for spy war novels. I also suggest that the author can read other spy war novels for reference.

I was addicted in the first chapter! You used a sniper rifle to shoot that gunshot; Chapter 2 poisoning deepens! What kind of amnesia is caused for no reason, how can you give readers a sense of empathy? In the third chapter, he died of poison, and even if there is a system, he still has to do some inexplicable tasks!

Headshots are used during assassinations, and headshots are also used to kill people openly. Do you think headshots are too powerful? With such obvious behavioral characteristics, do you think bystanders are fools?

Isn't this another spy story looking for an organization?

Today is September 18th. Don't forget the national humiliation. Let's strengthen ourselves.

I am a reader who pays attention to details. I read slowly, line by line, word by word. But after reading about 30 chapters, I am still confused. I don't know who the protagonist is or what his motivations are. I think there is a big problem with the author's rhythm. It seems as if something is chasing you while writing. The rhythm goes too fast, there is no necessary foreshadowing, and there are a lot of useless places. Let's talk about the first chapter first. There are three reasons for the protagonist to get promoted after beating his boss to death - firstly, the system releases tasks and there are rewards for completing them; secondly, they are facing the Japanese, and the Chinese stand to resist Japan unconditionally; thirdly, they are promoted and get a salary increase, which is part of the subsequent rewards. So from these three reasons, which one does the author need to pave the way for most? I don't think the system is right and it's easy to be scolded for following the system. It's not about getting a promotion or a salary increase, that's just something that happens by the way, and the most important thing is that the protagonist's boss is a living person, and his identity and attitude must be clearly described, so that his future layout and planning can be brought out, and part of his character can be established. The author hardly describes this part. Just fired a shot, got a level up, got gold, and got a promotion. This is a very important little story at the beginning, but it doesn't have any interesting points. You can set the daily situation of the protagonist, how to spend the gold rewarded by the task, and alleviate the urgent needs. For example, relieve the poor (buy confidants, train subordinates, raise beggars, establish an intelligence system, and support two young ladies in need, and lay out emotional lines and characters. Otherwise, if you don't spend this gold, what's the use of getting it? In reality, gold is just a pile of metal if you don't spend it. In the novel, , if the gold is not spent, it is just a pile of words. You only remember to add rewards, but the rewards are not converted to practical use, which is a big taboo!) And the normal foreshadowing should be that this devil is so bad that he is stuck in a key position in the patrol room, which hinders the development of the protagonist. It just so happens that the mission is added to the protagonist's planning, and I take the time to plan to kill him, so that the reason for the sniper killing will be sufficient. As for promotion and salary increase, a foreshadowing is needed to hint that he has made arrangements before. Multiple descriptions can make this incident of sniping at the boss a foreshadowing of the protagonist's character. Describe deeply. Originally, this book was quite surprising to me when I first read it. I thought the author's writing was sophisticated, and he decisively laid out a sharp knife at the beginning, and then laid the foundation for it. Unexpectedly, the sharp knife came down, and there was no numbness in the back... All of a sudden, the force was gone, and no one could be retained. And the hang-up is too big, and Yan Shuangying will be defeated within a few chapters. What is the concept of headshot at 1200 meters? WWII weapons were not that advanced. At this time, the precision shooters trained by the armies of the great powers are only called sharpshooters, not snipers. In an era when everyone was firing cold guns 300-400 meters away, you were three times as powerful as others, and even the grenades couldn't cover you. There is also system space to provide you with supply logistics. Your World War II scene is more ghostly than a ghost. What kind of workplace upgrades do you need? So after reading about thirty chapters, I don't understand (or understand) the protagonist's path, and my logic is weak.

With such comments, those who talk about high-quality grain and grass are trying to trick people into slaughtering them, right?

The author writes quite well. Except for being a little bit picky because I don't write about women, this book is definitely top-notch. Of course, due to the lack of education, some things seem a bit difficult. I am checking the information now. But this is precisely the author's achievement, allowing me, a scumbag, to look back on that unbearable past again. In short, as long as you don't watch women's dramas, this is a fine and enjoyable book. Recommended👍

Why does the protagonist stay at home every day and can't go out to fight? Why not go to Japan and kill the emperor or the Japanese ministers of war and navy, or blow up and sink Japanese warships? Is it unexpected or is the system faulty? Or don't have the guts?

I dare not read it after the Republic of China. If we don't change history, it will be too tragic. If we change the course of history, we will be blocked.

Hurry up and write, write the woman to death, get back on track, don't waste your word count Strive to write until 2020 Dominate Europe and Asia. Feet on Australia and Africa. . .

At present, there is nothing too intellectually interesting. Personally, I feel that the mainstream direction is to write about pleasant things, and also write about other daily and personal love and hatred. After all, being happy all the time will make people feel aesthetic fatigue. Comparing the rough and the detailed can highlight the characteristics of the book - There are so many poisonous weed articles that are fun to use without brains, so I hope you won't write them down.

Author, you must not lose your core, which is "coolness". It is brainless to begin with. If you lose the "coolness", it will be useless. You have already screened the readers. If you try it again, they will all run away. As long as killing little Japanese and traitors is "fun", people will still read it, don't change your writing style

This group of European devils have always been afraid of force and have no morals. They are afraid of sending troops. It's not like you don't understand the situation of the British. Only interests can make the British take action! Kill a bunch of them hard! This group of people was very afraid of death, and then continued to loot HSBC! If you have the ability, don't worry about this and that all day long. Stop being stupid. Please, there are people with other abilities. Do you want to write fantasy?

A rare masterpiece, really cool to see

With the demeanor of the Great Shanghai Dragon Lord

Don't give up. There is a lot to write about in Vietnam.

I don't know what's going on. Many of the books I was reading suddenly stopped.

Smooth, very smooth 👍.

The book is really good, and the plug-ins are a bit cool. It creates a similar world, and there is less worry about changing history when writing it. Please write it well.