Naruto: Master Uchiha, Learned from Kaido

When the child Naruto was pinched by Sasuke, he took out a shuriken and stabbed it, which made me stunned. Not to mention that Naruto's character is impossible to do this, but at this time, Naruto can get a shuriken and still carry it with him?

Yes, it's much better than the Hokage Destiny Man. The Destiny Man who fought against the Tailed Beast was actually controlled by 3 Magatama, and he was permanently banned after saying something. That book was so licking, even the broken body of the Great Sage couldn't control the Destiny Man for too long. However, the author, your book is very strong, and it directly competes with Kakashi. Not many can beat it. How to write next? It's only 30 chapters.

Basically, armed Haki can be said to be the standard skill for strong men in the New World of Pirates. After all, as long as the physical strength is up to standard, you can learn it by persisting in training and fighting. People in the ninja world have very fragile bodies, not to mention that Sasuke is only 7 years old, and even the basic taijutsu has not reached the strength of the Sixth Marine Style. It is really impossible to learn Haki. Although the Sixth Style is already a backward version of the skill, it can also be regarded as a prerequisite for learning Haki.

Is there any point in switching from turning on the deus ex machina to changing the settings in an unreasonable way? Not to mention that domineering energy is energy, and children cannot inspire it Armed domineering power requires: excite → entangle → harden → flow Only hardening can have color, and it is also expressive. It does not really have color, just "quite" Yu: You can feel it → Others can feel it → Make others feel the color → Invisible armor / fight it out Seeing and hearing color is even more so. You can predict the future by just coming up. You have placed it on Sasuke. Shouldn't you develop a unicorn to have a heart network? The same special ability to see and listen to everything is comparable to that of the first generation. The same special ability to predict the future. I woke up at the beginning and laughed Or I didn't write it and changed it to super powers. For the first time, I felt that no matter how good the plot setting of A must see, it is still quite capable.

Kaido should be the super shadow's strength

Ah? Danzo is dead? Stop it, that's my youth, my 5.5Th generation, woo woo woo woo woo woo

Good guy, next door Naruto is a Death God, but here you have Sasuke as a Pirate?

So it's Madara Yori behind? What does the last paragraph mean? There is someone behind Kaido besides Kaido?

It's very well written. If you buy it for a million dollars, it will become a fine product.

I think it's okay. This is a eunuch.

Everything else is fine, but I still hope that Sasuke will be able to see the true nature of the third generation. Then I still don't like the character of Sakura. Never become the heroine. Finally, if Sasuke defectes or something else, please be sure to diss Naruto's mouth escape, although I don't hate Naruto's enthusiasm. Blood idiot, but if there really is such a person in reality, I still hope to be awakened to see the world clearly instead of acquiescing to such ridiculous ideals in a twisted way with him. There are already many annoying stories and perverted values ​​of daily life in anime, and I don't want them to be exactly the same in novels. In the end, if you keep following the anime story line, there will be no innovation. Even if Danzo is killed in advance, there will be no sense of reading.

Later on, I'll also give Sasuke a fantasy beast species.

After reading a few chapters, there are a lot of common sense questions. Kaido calls himself "I", not "I"; the prerequisite for being able to ask Kaido questions is to get a stick, not just a look. He doesn't have a white beard or red hair, which is very inconsistent with Kaido's violent personality; does he really need to get a stick to awaken his weapon color? The vision of foreseeing the future is even more confusing. I haven't seen it in the future. Isn't it possible that the overlord color has also appeared? How can a person who only thinks about revenge and killing at this stage awaken the overlord color? According to the settings of One Piece, at least you have to have a clear understanding of your identity and establish your true nature, and you must have the strength to awaken your overlord color; and how can the root monitor be so emotional? Are you going to kill Sasuke after being injured? Genbe, he is an emotionless tool, and no superior ever told him that Danzo and Itachi had a deal? How dare he, a little surveillance ninja, touch Sasuke? Shouldn't he immediately retreat and report to his superiors when he discovers Sasuke's strange power? Also, the scene where Naruto stabs Sasuke was blinded. Does this fit the character of Naruto as a sunshine boy? Moreover, Naruto only uses his fists in official battles. Isn't it obvious that Naruto's kunai shuriken course is terrible? And it would be more reasonable to subconsciously fight back with a fist. He also brought Naruto back to the clan, not to mention whether the Hokage would allow Uchiha and the Jinchūriki to be alone together, Danzo would not let him, and all the Uchiha clan members were dead, how could such a huge property of the entire Uchiha fall into Sasuke's hands? The plot was forced together, and the big and small characters didn't fit the characters when they first appeared, so it was rated as bad.

Nice looking bag. Typos affect the look and feel, but everything else is very good.

The eunuch book also has a daily introduction to poison. Is it a disease?

It's okay, but the purity is relatively low. Sasuke, the veritable anti-stress king