The Heavens Starting with Gochard

Compared with the scientific alchemy that the character claims, it is more like a magic ritual, will, emotion, and spell. When the conditions are sufficient, the ritual is completed, and then it is refined. Most of it is not permanent, but more like magic. The transformation of desire into energy (coin) in OOO is the supreme achievement of a discipline. How did they use emotions to transform matter from the beginning? I don't understand... (๑‾^‾๑) Maybe this is why the author of Gochard fanfic has a headache when writing...

I've finished reading it. It's well written, but the combat power settings are also sparse.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to speak, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are ten o'clock, the great Confucian's debate on scriptures is deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, the memory of the bookworm has a place for you. Even in a long life, your name will leave dazzling traces. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates. So, don't stop, update, update, update

Evaluation: Miscellaneous Grain I haven't seen Yu-Gi-Oh!, So I won't talk about it for now. Looking at it now, the author wants to give the protagonist a growth-oriented character, but where is the protagonist's growth potential until now? A hero does not rely on his mouth! It's reflected in action, you can be a hero! But the protagonist calls himself a "hero", and the background of the protagonist is like a clown, but his morality is not suitable Your protagonist is not a hot-blooded middle school boy, and your personality and identity behavior settings are extremely conflicting.

Who is reading such boring content

Soluda J

There is also the logic of writing. Reality may not need logic, but novels do. Don't let the protagonist act as he pleases, and the protagonist's behavior conflicts with the writing style.

This book is awesome. . . How many people are watching?

I have been following you there in the early days, and I can't stand it.

Compared with the original work, Black Steel written by the author cannot be said to be completely different. It can only be said to be irrelevant.

I like the second sister 😍! ! !

Use the Yu-Gi-Oh settings to match the Gochard settings. Monster Card = Alchemy. Magic trap = magical power. Destiny = Astrology

It's too boring, a faster pace would be better

It has to be a little slower, and it's out of context, which is bad civilization.

I checked it out on QQ Reading, it's pretty good.

Speaking of well-intentioned settings, I remember there was a setting later that added that after tearing up the cards, he would learn the abilities gained from tearing up the cards instead of losing them.

It is recommended that the author try linking it with other worlds 🙂, such as American horror, Hong Kong horror, and the protagonist Goldfinger is Eye Boy, Moon Knight, and Hibiki, who can kill demons and demons. If not, you can try the Divine Light Rod, but without the ancient bloodline light factor, you cannot transform, but you can use the Divine Light Rod to turn into a sword and kill ghosts 🙂 Someone has written it now, but it is too messy.

After raising her for more than a month, Zhutenryu is still in Kamen Rider o_O. It's better to raise her and watch it in the next world, and then ask who is the heroine in the Kamen Rider world?