Covering the Sky Forever

Is this writing about covering the sky or about mortals? I'm confused.

One covers the sky and two Wang Teng, isn't this a betrayal of the universe?

He doesn't look like he's having a hard time with his head, he has a strong physique and a good background, and he's doing sneaky things.

The great unification has been going on for more than two thousand years, but now there are still separatist behaviors. One person covers the sky and two Wang Teng. Isn't this a betrayal of the ancestors? Isn't it a reversal of history?

Author, don't you feel that a lot of what you wrote is unreasonable? Especially in terms of combat power and skills. An Immortal King level skill. Even if you can't practice in this era, shouldn't you still be able to learn from it? Can't you practice the martial arts? Can't you practice the treasures from ancient times? Can't you practice the secret techniques of the Immortal King? Some places are so written. Needs improvement. Why is the protagonist so stupid? The protagonist of His Meow has all the memories of an Immortal King, as well as the Immortal King, the Immortal King, the Immortal King Dao Fruit, how can you write the protagonist so childishly? The protagonist is equivalent to the Immortal King's second life and has no sealed memory. Why did you write the protagonist in such a naive way

The starting background background and milk coaxing are generally not good. If the protagonist does not improve his intelligence, he will overwhelm his combat power.

My monthly ticket is 0 and I still write. This is the consequence of liking to overwhelm the protagonist. It's so hard to open so much but it's so slow to write😮‍💨

Number 10 has been the Immortal Emperor for more than two million years, and our protagonist has cheats and is still playing house.

Now there are two Wang Teng in Zhe Tian

Why do you have so many images with all your nonsense?

If Zhe Tian comrades appear, whenever a Chaos Treasure appears, it will just mean that no one can defeat Zhe Tian. They go to other worlds and then return to Zhe Tian to show off.

The copy The writing is really boring. I hope to write a protagonist who relies on the plot to find opportunities. The author does not have the talent to write a copy.

The Immortal King is reborn. . . At least not weaker than Qingdi. .

Either change the protagonist's name or kill the other Wang Teng

The protagonist is only six years old, you just let him walk around

The plot was written too slowly. If you fast forward a little and retreat, a year or two will pass. When you grow up, go out and experience it. There are immortal king soldiers protecting the road, and you can also visit the restricted area

The writing style is weird and a bit too watery. There are a lot of settings in one chapter, and there are some issues with details. Zhetian doesn't talk about martial arts. There is martial arts at the beginning, and the pig's feet eat Sixiang rice at the beginning and turn into dragon rice later.

Hello, sir, I would like to recommend the book "The Emperor Returns from Shrouded Sky", a red-haired fan of The Other Side of Deep Space.