Hong Kong Comprehensive: Starting in Kowloon City, I Am the Talker of Hong Kong Island

The plot of the story relies on women, which is a bit hard to watch.

It's too jumpy. The plot jumps to the next stage without any foreshadowing. There are also some problems with the protagonist's character. Please, there is a protagonist who speaks bluntly without modal particles and asks someone who may be the heroine to sell it. Are you sure you meant that the protagonist made another joke instead of a green turtle speaking? Zhang Shuai looked at Cuihua and said, "It's okay. If you can't find anything to do, you can still go upstairs to the opposite building to ensure that a lot of people will come to visit you." After hearing this, Cuihua's chest suddenly felt tight, and she looked at Zhang Shuai with an incredible look on her face... (The following is a dialogue between the protagonist and the heroine explaining the joke) This is almost the same paragraph, but it gives readers very different feelings when written concisely and in detail. The former protagonist is a scumbag green turtle, while the latter is a protagonist with low emotional intelligence but mostly acceptable. I didn't want to read it at all

How many chapters have you read? In the 1980s, a pie cost one dollar? Still eating 5 more? There are still Hong Kong people who don't know what rice rolls are? And introduce it to the tornado? Liangkun ran to the city wall to collect the land? What the hell did you write?

I also hope that even if the protagonist's money-making business is laundered, it should not be all white business. In addition to catching both black and white drugs, whitewashing should also be done slowly. After all, the market at that time was full of large and small associations, and protection fees were charged for all businesses. Black or gray businesses could be left to subordinates who were not close men to bear the risks. The black money would still be collected. For white business, let your trusted confidants manage it. Black money can be laundered in movies and casinos~

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After reading a few chapters, I still don't know what the protagonist wants to do. If it really doesn't work, could you, the author, check out what others have written?

The key protagonist clearly knows that he will offend Liangkun today and Cao Shijie tomorrow, but he still asks his woman to sell cakes? I admire this brain circuit!

After reading a few chapters, I'm 100% hooked. Let's cut it.

It's baffling to see 😅

First: I feel like the protagonist doesn't have much brains. The author wants to make the protagonist very smart, but it gives the impression that there are a lot of stupid moves, neither ruthless nor decisive, and in that turbulent era, one should strike first, especially if one knows that the opponent is ruthless. However, the protagonist looks down on him and does not pay attention to him. Second: All things begin with women. The content of the article is not the same without women, and the protagonist is very pretentious. To be honest, reading this book with many women is not as good as reading the old books from the past. Third: The fighting power in the movie and comics is very suppressed, and there are all kinds of belittling. The protagonist is even more powerful, but this comparison makes the protagonist even stupider. Fourth: There is a book with a similar beginning, starting from the tornado shelter, but that book is about all kinds of fighting and killing, and it is not considerate, and there are not so many women. I feel that it may be the same author, and the dialogues are very old I feel that the casting in this book is good, but the writing is not good.

If the author is not good enough, go and see what others write. This book is too confusing. I think this book will be unfinished again.

Stop writing, we all know you like to be a minotaur. The book written has the same taste,

Mainly a cheat and act recklessly without any logic

I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 8. How many cakes do you think a woman can make by hand in a day? The preface and the afterword are inconsistent. One moment I can't beat him, and the next I can't. I go to someone else's house to kill my son and let his father go. My father still applauds me, let me let him go and burn down the other person's house. I only want to be with the boss but I still think I'm smart. You are really a smart and energetic guy.

To be honest, I was disgusted halfway through the first chapter.

Your plot is too jumpy. It goes directly to the next stage without going too far.

The author draws out his sword to help when the road is rough. Is there such a person as the author now? Even if the other person is a beautiful woman, you still have to see if you have what it takes.

I was convinced, the main character was written as if he was mindless, without any plan at all. There is no main plot at all and I am not interested at all.

It's a bit baffling to watch, the protagonist has no background, and even the 8,000 yuan at the beginning came out of nowhere. The plot of the story is also confusing, with no foreshadowing at all. It comes as you think, without considering logical issues.

If you want to learn martial arts but don't learn from Tornado, why are you licking your face and pestering Zhang Tianzhi? Someone who has the same brother as Tornado is also optimistic about the protagonist, so you should start learning.