Fox Demon: Two Realms Gate, Behind the Gate Is Chicken Island

As for the female protagonist, I think the leech spirit (demon doctor) among the fox demons is better.

This novel is very interesting, and the main character is very sane. Work step by step to plan for extraordinary power. And established a foothold in both worlds in just 3 months.

You said you have saved manuscripts, I believe you, but you have saved too many manuscripts, right? What a blast

I didn't see the growth of the protagonist's character, nor did the character arcs of other supporting characters. There was no impressive characterization, the story was weak, and the grasp of rhythm was weak. I'll give it a try when I'm short on books.

​ ​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​         Needing help from others to get started in Xiaoji Island leaves the protagonist with a setting that is not a genius level. But in the world of fox monsters, I had the secrets and was so eager for success that I practiced blindly and even injured myself. He is obviously not a genius and has not accumulated enough knowledge. He does not understand the cultivation systems of the two worlds, so he starts messing around. It gives the impression that a freshman in high school hastily started preparing to design an electromagnetic gun without having a clear understanding of mathematics and physics. 🤔 Apart from adding a reckless label, I can't think of any benefits to this design.

I traveled to the world view of the fox demon matchmaker because there were no plug-ins, so I was always a beggar. I finally passed the portal and traveled to the world of Xia Lan. Because I was really hungry, I went to a dumpling restaurant to eat a bowl of dumplings. Was it Sansheng stuffing? Because I don't have the Xia Lan Seal, I can't become Xia Lan, so I no longer plan to return to the world of the Demon Fox Matchmaker. I plan to stay in the Xia Lan world and become a member of La Ma's Dumpling House. Just after Zhan Chi went to Xia Lan, you were the only one left in the dumpling house to help La Ma. After being possessed by Zero and almost being transformed into Zero, you traveled to the world of the Demon Fox Matchmaker, and ended up in I don't know what happened during the time travel, so that Zero Zang was born in your body and became a humanoid Zero. Later, I relied on this to obtain the skills in the world of the demon fox and the little matchmaker, and then relied on this skills to absorb vitality in the world of Xialan, reaching a state where vitality and spiritual power coexist. After that, according to the golden elixir method, a golden elixir was condensed, which you called Yuanzang, forming a Tai Chi diagram.

Brother, I feel sick here at Plum Blossom Villa. You can't be black just for the sake of being black. You can say that Plum Blossom Hero and his family are indifferent, but you can't make up some non-existent problems just to blacken them. "Acrimonious and arrogant." Also, Plum Blossom Hero and Qingfeng should know each other. He and Plum Blossom Thirteen went to the north to find someone to teach her, and it should be Plum Blossom Hero. Plum Blossom Hero is indifferent to his daughter and wife, and basically has everything he should have. When Plum Blossom was thirteen, he practiced martial arts to please him and he didn't say anything. Just don't care. I really wasn't in the mood to read the rest, so I gave up.

After reading it, I would like to make a suggestion. I feel that the author's writing style is suitable for urban literature. The characters, plots and various events that have appeared so far are actually very suitable for urban literature. Whether it is business, strategy, idols, or flirting with girls, the author's writing style is completely manageable, but it is not suitable for martial arts, fairy tales, or cool stories about battles. I feel that the author is better at writing romance than he is now.

What I wrote above is okay, but the fact that you had a little capital and opened two world shops by yourself really made me laugh. I really didn't expect that after Senior Brother Gou Dao Liu became popular, there would be people like you. You would start doing this when you don't have the strength of the fox demon or the slightly stronger ones in Xiaoji Island to manipulate you at will.

If it weren't for the fact that there were so few stories about fox demons and Wu Liuqi, I really wouldn't be able to read it anymore, especially the third world I wrote about, and also made an unpopular comic with no popularity at all. I haven't read it. The most important thing is to marry someone else's daughter in order to open a store. What's more important is that I searched for the daughter's name, but no one could find it. I don't know whether it is an original character or an original passerby. For now, the plot of the third world is dragging and uninteresting. The most obvious thing is that there are basically no comments from the third world on.

The worldviews of both the assassin Wu Liuqi and the fox demon Little Matchmaker are incompatible with the system of cultivating immortals. Forcing the system of cultivating immortals will lead to plot bugs.

To be honest, it's pointless for you to change the timeline. In terms of time, Tu Shan Honghong became the Demon Emperor long before the Poison Emperor and Baye p. C. You made it happen in recent years. Do you mean that Tu Shan Rongrong evolved from a silly Baitian into Zhuge Liang in a few years, not to mention that during this time period, Feng Qi and Tu Shan Honghong were sealed due to their disagreement with their ideas. Did you compress it all?

This golden finger hair is of no use.

The characters are OOC, let's not talk about 567 them. Will Dachun help the protagonist destroy the Asuka Clan? Asuka Gate has never offended the protagonist group

Hundreds and thousands of years of elixirs can't make the male protagonist become a top master. It's really bullshit. I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

Cowhide, do you know the value of colored glaze in ancient times? How dare the author write about the price of colored glaze and two taels of silver?

The heroine can be anyone, or there is no heroine, especially Coke, something seems a bit wrong in front of me, Coke, in the anime, I see that most of them are junior high school students. After becoming the heroine, I feel a little disgusted by the male protagonist.

So far, the characters and plots are well written. I hope that if there is a female protagonist in the future, she can write them well.

After watching it for two hours, I concluded that the idea of ​​the Two Realms Gate is quite good. The protagonist's line about being bullied for being kind and then prostituted Ah Qi for free was a bit too poisonous. There was a plot that people were looking forward to (rescuing Jade Yu Xiaotan, etc.), But then the protagonist was suddenly cheated (the star exercise cheat was too big, and it was said to be opportunity), and then it was a little bit vicious. I didn't watch the eleven or thirteen of the plum blossoms later, and the details were not very good.

😅Why do you look so confident when you arrive at the Coastal Defense Department and your mind is full of plans? If you had some plans, you would still be so hungry that you would become a refugee and go to Ah Qi's place to beg? It turns out that your whole plan is to become a copycat. . . It's also incredible. Earlier, I said I didn't know the function of the golden finger, but in the next chapter I started planning to become the villain of the two worlds. Are you so sure that I can go back?

In the third world, The Sun and the Moon are both wrong. The problem is that this thing only has comics. Not everyone understands it. It is not a traditional system. I couldn't bear to read a few chapters to understand it and there are no hints. I have a protagonist who knows what the use is. The book is for readers. When I first came up, I thought everyone knew about this comic. To be honest, I had never heard of this book before. However, don't talk about being very popular. In the novel circle, people wear Douluo and fight against each other. These IPs all have one or two chapters to remind you that you are enjoying yourself here 😅. I don't give any hints about the background. I seriously suspect that it was written by a gunman. Originally, there are fewer fox demon fans who can read it longer, so I just let people fuck Hong Wen 😤

Author: There seems to be something wrong with the setting of the Indestructible Boy Kung Fu, right? ? You set it to be the seventh level before the whole body can be transformed into a golden body, and Dachun is at the seventh level. The coach in Shi Gengguo said clearly that he did not reach the seventh level but he was also transformed into a full body golden body? ? ? ?

Let me pick an unpopular comic, Sun and Moon Tongcuo. Among domestic comics, Sun and Moon Tongcuo can be said to be the most popular ones. Without animation and not being a novel-turned-comic with its own traffic, Sun and Moon Tongcuo is already the first among domestic comics.

The first and second worlds were okay, but after that it was a mess. The protagonist in the third world saves people, so both the good and bad bosses want the protagonist to die! As soon as the protagonist in the fourth world enters, comes into contact with the plot characters, and interacts with them, the protagonist has to pay for it with his life.

It's a pity that the combat power collapsed too quickly. The first two hundred chapters were still quite interesting.

Look, you're killing yourself. I ran away from you when I first read Sun and Moon. Your writing skills are not great. I can only say that your creativity is not bad. The plots of Fox Demon and Five Six Seven are not very deep. As a result, you insist on going to the places where you are not good at, and you are praised.

So far, the characters are pretty good, there's nothing that ruins them, it's just that there are too few words.

I just want to ask when will it be updated? I am speechless.