
Douluo: I, Tang San, Want to Change My Mouth and Teeth.
斗罗:我唐三要改变过去口牙
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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- 1y ago
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Please comment, please read it
I heard that Qidian is interested in follow-up reading, but I would rather comment. The following is the general content of my book: I have made drastic adaptations of some plots and settings of the original novel. Although I know that I cannot compare with some big guys like Mu Da, I think that I am doing similar things. Making "Peerless Tang Sect" more complete and rational is my expectation for this book! I adapted my own novel, including but not limited to the following settings: 1. Wang Dong's gender was revealed to Huo Yuhao in advance; 2. Xiao Xiao's related adaptations; 3. The restoration of Tang Sect Xing; 4. Ma Xiaotao's fate; 5. The relationship between the tortoise and the hare; 6. Expansion of the assessment; 7. Changes in the soul fighting competition; 8. Changes in the sun and moon line; 9. The development of soul guides; 10. The college life of Shrek freshmen; r>12. Huo Yuhao's feelings; 13. Dai Huabin's feelings; 14. Dai Yueheng's life experience adapted; 15. Duchess's identity adapted; 16. Huo Yuner's identity adapted; 17. Huo Yuhao's relationship with Orange; 18. Wang Dong'er's relationship with Wang Qiuer's relationship adapted; 19. Huo Yuhao Adaptation of the relationship with Dai Hao; 20. Adaptation of the battle line; 21. Expansion of soul skills, targeting everyone; 22. Expansion of gods; 23. Expansion of soul ring acquisition; 24. Plan for the coexistence of soul beasts; 25. Adaptation of the relationship between Tianmeng Ice Silkworm and Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion; 26. Adaptation related to the Holy Spirit Cult. The above is like this for the time being, and the settings are still being expanded. The following is a very detailed introduction. That's right, this book is divided into two parts: First, the upper battlefield of the divine realm between Tang San and the Shura God King in the comic; Second, it is the lower realm and lower realm of Huo Yuhao in Douluo Continent. Two protagonists, fighting on two fronts! The role of the third brother is to interfere with the influence of God King Shura on Huo Yuhao. The Huo Yuhao line will be a development route without the interference of God King Shura! Now it is updated three times a day. If the title is the same, please comment and follow up.
Opinions on some settings of the original work
Because I have posted four related posts without realizing it. And it may continue to be posted in the future. So new related posts will no longer be pinned. Use this article as a guide. Turn right and click [Essence] or [Discussion]. Let's discuss related issues together.
Tang San of Dou Yi in the comics is the eternal third brother. The character is perfect and pure. In the novel... Dou Yi is not a good person.
From the forum, I heard that it was Tang San who helped Tang Yuhao beat Buddha in the comics. I have to watch it now
Author, I read the book next to yours. The comic about Tang San and Huo Yuhao fighting against the novel Tang San is indeed innovative, but according to your setting, Tang San in the comic does not have the title of Shura God, and is not the opponent of Tang San in the novel. Going back to the past, I also planned to hide my capabilities and bide my time, but the current development seems to be a bit off. The comic version is not only Tang San, the characters of other people are more or less different from the novel. The most typical one is Ma Hongjun. In the comics, he is a real foodie, the kind who can concentrate on eating when he goes to a brothel. In this case, why is Tang San in the comic so eager to find Tang San's parents in the novel? Although they are both Tang San, he is his enemy after all, and there is no guarantee that they will inform Tang San in the novel. Then there was Shrek. It was okay to tell Munn. Later, he showed up to teach Yan Shaozhe a lesson, and also allowed Munn to tell other pavilion elders about his identity. Wouldn't this really cause the news to leak?
Happy Mid-Autumn Festival!
As the title says, the author of Little Transparent wishes everyone here. The Mid-Autumn Festival celebrates reunion, and the bright moon hangs high in the world. The sound of blessings spreads thousands of miles, and I wish you endless happiness. The career is going smoothly and the family is harmonious and smiling. Happy Mid-Autumn Festival! {"NickName":"Book Friends 20200103074609202","UserId":341463074} {"NickName":"Football King Tierney","Us erId":402492651} {"NickName":"Dr axuan","UserId":430572632} {"NickName":"20230817 203146563","UserId":425468599} {"NickName":"Book Friends 20230113145215899","UserId":40539059 1} {"NickName":"Huo Yuhao Multiverse Observer","UserId":395574468} {"NickName":"Drowning Qing","UserId":35294 7140} {"NickName":"He is a hot man","UserId":352727747} {"NickName":"Zhixu","UserId":3183211 12} {"NickName":"Crazy Spirit","UserId":228809791} {"NickName":"Yue Yingshang","UserId":199526118 } {"NickName":"Little God in the Game Field","UserId":445400781} {"NickName":"Demon Cult Leader 888","UserId":32311 3568} {"NickName":"Book Friends 20240731013446492","UserId":452157934} And other readers who read and collect this book. The above ranking is the system ranking
After reading the previous chapters, I would like to make a small suggestion. Who is the male protagonist of this book? It is difficult to write two male protagonists between Tang San and Huo Yuhao, because the current setting looks at the strength of Tang San and Xiao Huo. The gap between their temperaments is too big. It is a teacher-student relationship between a senior and a junior. It is difficult to write about the two men growing together and achieving each other in such a relationship. If the male protagonist is Tang San, it will be an invincible style. Huo Yuhao should take a back seat and the writing should focus on Tang San's changes to the world. If Huo Yuhao is chosen as the male protagonist, it will be a classic and enjoyable novel. Then Tang San should take a back seat and give up the world's stage. Tang San should not be asked to help Huo Yuhao solve every problem. Huo Yuhao's growth and transformation should be written about, and the changes that Huo Yuhao has brought to the world should be written. Otherwise, the overall structure of the article will be very messy.
Let's open a fan group, I feel like it's ready to start
Please give me some recommendation votes and favorites😫
This is the filthy reincarnation of another book of mine, because my book was sorted into the wrong section. I hope it will get better this time. Here the young author would like to express his sincere gratitude to every beautiful and handsome guy who reads my book. Thank you very much to all the big guys for reading my book. As we meet in the vast sea of books, allow me to briefly introduce this book here. This book is after I read the comic version of the first part of the new version of "Douluo Dalu", I was immediately dumbfounded. My good third brother is about to return to the original work, so I thought of restoring it myself, but Mu Da has already continued writing the work in the first generation, so I won't overstep his bounds, and my strength doesn't allow it. It just so happened that "The Legend of Tang Sect" was being animated, so I thought about what would happen when Mu Da's third brother came to the world of the second generation? So I combined the novels and comics of the first generation, the novels, comics and animations of the second generation, as well as some conspiracy theories from the forums. Forcibly created an immature new parallel world of Douluo Continent Here the third brother from the comics met Tang San from the novel. Then he died and disappeared, traveling to the second-generation time and space where the world view of comics and animation merged to seek help. In this time and space, I have a lot of personal equipment. For example, the Tianmeng Ice Silkworm is actually the boss of all the ferocious beasts in the Star Dou Forest. But he is Xiao Wu's younger brother. Xiao Wu's mother is actually the strongest aboriginal in the Star Dou Forest. I changed some settings to be relatively reasonable (I think) The main purpose is to rationalize the bugs between the first generation and the second generation. In short, I hope that my humble work can please everyone. This is the greatest affirmation for me. Come on, work hard, and thank you again. Please comment, collect, recommend, and read more😍😍😍. Could it be because of my name? My name translates to Little Transparent...😂
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Come on, buddy, I am currently raising books (🐶), I support you~
Come on, author. The writing is good, but the plot is a bit off. I haven't caught up with the latest chapter yet, I hope the author will write better as he writes ヾ(๑╹ヮ╹๑)ノ"
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Is it necessary for Poseidon to exist?
I had doubts about the original work again. What's the significance of this thing? A blind date conference appeared out of nowhere. I know that the real body settings can be very diverse, but I just wanted to go on a blind date. Even Huo Yuhao here already knows that Wang Dong is a girl. Does he still need to go on a blind date? If it is Xu Sanshi and Jiang Nannan, they have already joined the Tang Sect and have experienced life and death. So there is no reason for them to appear at the blind date conference. If it is with Caitou and Xiao Xiao, I actually imagined a more rational encounter. I feel like this Poseidon Fate is just to attract the senior sister. After all, it seems that this person has never appeared in the original article.
Huo Yuhao, Tang Wutong, are you two awake?
Why don't I remember this plot? How come I checked the information and found out that Huo Yuhao and Tang accepted the teachings of Long Xiaoyao and Ye Xishui? ? ? How about playing? ! Aren't these two from the evil soul master camp? Why did you two still accept their teachings? Maybe their senses have changed in the subsequent plot because of Munn. But who said earlier that Long Xiaoyao was not worthy of being compared with Munn? Ye Xishui is the leader of the evil spirit master. Even if Laotang is a light-attribute martial spirit, Ye Xishui in the original work is also a light-attribute phoenix. Isn't this equivalent to accepting something from a cult? 😰😰😰 Oh my God, these three views will explode! ! ! I was still thinking about whether the plot I had would disrupt the rhythm of the original work. Now that I think about it, I'd better follow the plot I mentioned! I'm convinced, my original plan to change to a final villain turned out to be a good idea, isn't it?
Huo Yuhao has even changed his fighting style into a tiger soul master, so there is no need for his second martial soul to become an Ice Emperor, right? Find a tiger soul beast with the ultimate ice attribute, or activate the white tiger bloodline and add the Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion, and fuse a new martial spirit 😍, all of which are set in comics. Wouldn't it be beautiful to fuse the Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion with the Evil-Eyed Holy King?
Related questions about Ice and Snow Girl
I'm a little confused about Snow Emperor. According to the original plot, she seemed to be the one who was arrested when Huo Yuhao got the first soul ring. But why doesn't the Ice Emperor know? Aren't they in that relationship? I haven't read the novel for a long time, and I thought that Yuki Onna only became an embryo in the middle and late stages. In my opinion, at least before the Ice Emperor turned into a soul ring, Yuki Onna was fine. Looking back now, I found that Yuki Onna turned into a soul ring almost at the same time as the Ice Emperor.
What heinous thing did Bibi Dong do?
I thought Bibi Dong had committed some heinous act. I checked the information and found nothing. According to my understanding, except for the things done to Tang San. What she did was normal for the country. If she wants to establish a country, she has to do it to the extreme. Or am I having a problem? 🤐 Because I have a plot point where Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue participate as my own side. Let me tell you in advance that I have not watched the animation. And because the comics depict her very little, I don't know what Bibi Dong is like in the comics. As for the novel, I finished it a long time ago, but I don't want to read the original novel now. But from a national level or from a human perspective. The soul hunting operation was to strengthen herself and indirectly strengthen the country. Except for the fact that active aggression is wrong, I don't think there's anything else wrong with it.
About Tianmeng Ice Silkworm and Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion
I have made adjustments to the relationship between Tianmeng Ice Silkworm and Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion. These two extras are my adapted description of their relationship
What if I turned Wang Qiuer into this?
Please read it in conjunction with other threads. Knowing the Snow Girl, I may use it to set up a second spirit ring that directly becomes the second martial spirit or the second martial spirit. That means the first soul is vacant. What if I set Wang Qiuer as the first soul. 🙂🙂🙂🙂
It's amazing, I actually created a new setting
Isn't the original work "You Tian Meng Yizhi"? Then because I made adjustments to Ma Xiaotao's plot. I set it to appear during the assessment. Later, I wanted to write a better Xiao Xiao. So I merged with Xiao Xiao from Fighting to Break the Sky. The result is that I created a new setting that is different from the original work and other fans - Each martial spirit has its own applicable soul power compression method! This thing can be seen as a charging skill, which is related to combat. You can also exercise your control over soul power, which will add to your cultivation. However, there is a problem. That means Wuhun is all-encompassing, I can't imagine it 😂. So, can you help me think about it? Use this as a settings set. Seek soul power compression methods applicable to various types of martial souls.
Regarding Qiankun Wenqinggu, there are actually settings that can be used for reference in comics.
As shown in the picture. I set Qiankun Wenqing Valley as the place where Magpie God finally fell. Because of her tears, the Qiankun Wenqing Valley is filled with snow-colored swan kisses! According to Mu Da's setting, this kind of fairy grass becomes poisonous when exposed to poison, and vice versa. Then combine it with the original work. The Sun and Moon will force Huo Yuhao and the others into the Valley of Qiankun Wenqing. My setting is that the third brother in the comics stopped him, the God King Shura. As a result, nothing happened, but it was originally like this. But the Sun and Moon Empire has studied snow-colored swan kisses. I thought I had the effect of amplifying poison. Then he poisoned the place and Qiankun Wenqing Valley exploded. Suddenly, poisonous fog filled the air. The magpie god saves people, but it triggers a divine test. Then there is the assessment. If you fail, you will be poisoned. Those who pass will be rewarded with a snow-colored swan kiss of fairy grass, the kind that has no toxicity and only has soul power. That is, the pure fairy grass they ate in the first generation, after eating it, they will be upgraded to five levels.
Multiple heroines or single heroine? Who are the heroines?
Douluo: What about the book Huo Yuhao and Xiao Xiao's CP?
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After reading a few chapters, I still haven't figured out who the protagonist is. I'd say it's Huo Yuhao, but judging from the title and the beginning, Tang San is more like the protagonist. I want to ask who the author wants to write about!
About the coexistence of soul beasts and obtaining soul rings
I was writing about other people's stories. The result is written, I have perfected these two things! This is what I thought of when I was writing about the game between Huo Yuhao and Zhou Sichen. I plan to build an organization for this purpose, temporarily called the Soul Ring Acquisition Organization. I based it on the martial arts combination skills of Zhou Sichen and the other three. Set the following content. After the completion of this soul ring organization, the formal operation process is: 1. The soul master needs to go to the soul ring to obtain the qualifications for the organization. 2. After absorbing the soul ring, the soul beast must be resurrected. Of course, this resurrection is only once. 3. Establish a nature reserve for soul beasts and the like. For the time being If you don't apply or if you apply but are not resurrected. The organization will set up a blacklist, which is illegal and will be regarded as poaching. The soul ring acquisition agency will hunt, arrest, and want him! Then he can only be a Kuroto soul master from now on, or even an evil soul master! The impact of this setting on soul beasts. When a soul beast turns into a soul ring, all its potential is exhausted. Therefore, after the soul beast is resurrected, it can no longer practice the soul beast's training method. The soul beast at this time is in a special form, but it can learn human cultivation methods. Because this soul ring has made a circle from the human body. This soul beast can learn from the soul master who holds its soul ring, or it can find a teacher on its own. It is equivalent to starting over from a six-year-old soul warrior and becoming a half-orc! Rebuilding this will also enhance their potential. Do you think this setting is okay? And I have a second way to obtain soul rings, which is to condense them myself, like a soul beast. So far, there are two major ways to obtain soul rings. Doesn't this still solve the problem of soul beasts? The original method of obtaining soul rings is too few, the only methods are hunting and sacrifice. Then I have expanded here and added two new types: One, hunting, but not resurrected, just like the original; Second, hunting, but resurrected; Three, soul beast sacrifice; Four, autonomous ring condensation. At the same time, the soul plan can also be used as a supplementary plan.