Starting from the Condor Shooting: Ouyang Ke Was Eliminated at the Beginning

What I feel when I read it now is that it was written by a novice from 10 years ago. The writing style is immature and behind the times. I would like to suggest you either switch to a different subject, or read more high-quality martial arts works, and then scan the book list to learn more.

No, is the protagonist's cultivation level high or low? How come anyone can have a 50-50 tie with the protagonist, a 50-50 tie with Ouyang Ke, and a 50-50 tie with Ouyang Feng. I'm baffled by this.

I'm really speechless. In order to write a conflict, the protagonist is forced to be chased in various ways, and he can't get rid of it no matter what! Anyone can find him.

The author is not good enough and has no martial arts flavor

I only read the introduction and beginning of this book, but I haven't read it yet. Your last book was really well written. In fact, you can completely write about Huayu. Many fans of the previous book hope that you can continue to write about Huayu.

The title of the book is too ordinary. If you change it to Guo Jing, you will have the urge to read it.

After practicing the Nine Yin Manual, you must have the strength of three theories and five skills. As a result, the protagonist had to use 80% of his internal strength to defeat Ouyang Ke. The pressure was a bit harsh. Normally, it should be dead in one move.

This track is really niche, and if it doesn't get the limelight right, it will be discontinued immediately. Is it best for you to write about Sissi or urban entertainment? If you write well, you can get ahead.

See too much. I'm not interested anymore, why not be more cheerful, understand the logic thoroughly, and just write about it and it will be more interesting.

Introduction, he designed it with others, why is it so awkward to read.

I really like your writing about urban Liu Yifei. It's really good, especially the songs. From the starting point, your song selection is the best👍🏻, better than those singers who choose urban novels👍🏻

After reading a few chapters, the description of martial arts is too poor Here is a close fight, and there the protagonist is about to use a move to destroy the opponent They are all in a close fight state, and then others see that they can save while talking And they are saved I was wondering, did the protagonist pause while you were talking? Wait until he finishes speaking before continuing? It can still be saved! There are many more scenes like this It's too dramatic

Chi Lian

Are you sure anyone will read this way of writing? 😰

To be honest, does the protagonist's technique have no special effects other than rejuvenating one's youth? Even the internal strength grows so slowly. And doesn't his technique conflict with the Nine Yin Manual? His skills are purely internal skills and nothing else. I'm talking about that Zhixuan Jing

Woke up later in Jiuzhaigou, Feixian rescued Xiao Liu who was washed down by a waterfall

I read the beginning and it didn't quite suit my taste (I like to watch the protagonists who are a bit crazier in martial arts and astronomy). I'll read it next time I write about Liu Baozi

The introduction is the general experience of the protagonist from 16 to 20 years old. Not to mention that he has no combat experience, and not to mention that the "Nine Yin Manual" fell from the sky.

The author has already learned his lesson in two books, and the right way is to return to the comfort zone and write about immortals.

It's almost 200,000 words, and there are not even 3,000 collections. I think it will be unfinished once it's released.

I've been watching it for a few days, but I don't know if you have an outline. The plot is bland and has no ups and downs. Huayu is better. This kind of martial arts without a main line is really not good to watch.

At the end of life, nothing can mend the sky.

Not a buddy, but a eunuch again? I'd better write about the city, it's a pity that my monthly ticket

Author, do you have any new books coming? Are you still writing and saving your manuscript?

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Do you know how Guo Xiang died? Do you know how Yang Guo died?

Thanks to the author Dabao for recommending the book🙏🏻. I wish you a speedy enlightenment. Title of the book: The Game Panel of the Universe Begins with Xiaoao

Brothers and sisters, I have read a lot and have tried to write my first new book. The name is "Talk and Gossip". In the past month, I have guaranteed 20,000 updates per day (I have a lot of manuscripts in the past) and the quality is guaranteed (guaranteed to be novel and reasonable). Welcome to search and read! Grateful!

Refers to which novel Xuan Jing is from and the protagonist. Is there anyone who can provide some popular science?🙂🙂🙂