Golden Elixir Peak Wants to Kill Me? Fortunately, I Am a Great Sage

Advantages: subject matter. Disadvantages: There is no main line, inappropriate details, and probably no outline. To be specific: the most important opening stage of the web article is the sect crisis that can be used as the main line in the early stage. The sect construction can be followed in the follow-up, the magic and the immortal cultivation system are intertwined, and there are mutual learning and reference. It can be said to be a classic beginning, but for some reason, the author does not follow this main line with a clear future and clear goals, but abandons it. , It only takes two or three chapters to finish it perfunctorily, anticlimactic, the main plot is discontinued, and there is no new main plot to pick up. It can only let the protagonist wander around in the name of "travel". It is written here and there. The reader is not worthy of what the protagonist is doing. It just feels inexplicable and extremely boring. If this continues, even the author will soon feel that the story is unsustainable. Suggestion: Rewrite as soon as possible and read more about the plot arrangements of other online articles. The most important thing in an online article is a coherent main line. The protagonist must have a clear goal and make unremitting efforts towards it. Only such a story can be attractive, otherwise it will just be boring.

It's a bit of a witty twist. The protagonist has just traveled through time. Why do you think magic is stronger than the magic in the world of cultivation? Why can't Chinese magic beat Western magic?