Douluo Dalu: I Snatch Electrolux from the Start

If Dou Er can't handle Yami San, don't write a Dou Er fanfic. There are a lot of little tricks. If you can't control the situation, you may even end up personally. Or the protagonist will simply descend from the sky to become a god. A third-level god is forced on you. Take control with this. From the moment Buddha became a god. Douluo is his prisoner. It was impossible for Douluo to have a god out of his control appear. Or become a dog for the Tang family. Or his descendants

Just writing a psychological drama will not be good enough and will make people feel a little cumbersome. The description of the protagonist is too hypocritical. At the same time, the family members also know that he is relatively hypocritical. This is not good. It is a very bad thing for an elder to let a junior come into contact with the dark side. This is not good.

It seems that your cheat is not big. If your cheat was stronger, Douluo Star would be isolated for you as soon as you were born!

The author is a eunuch who cut off six or seven books. What else are you asking for? Let's break up

Author, if you want to intercept Hu Bingdi, couldn't you have gone earlier? You have to go at the same time!

I feel that the protagonist's soul skills are quite satisfactory, not as good as Xiao Hongchen's. I feel that other soul skills are very suitable for me and can complement each other 1+1>2. For example, the fourth soul skill of Pig's Foot is an attack skill, and there is a self-created attack skill immediately after it. The functions overlap. Wouldn't the effect of this fourth soul ring be reduced by half immediately?

The writing is a bit cumbersome, the content is too bland, the word order is inappropriate, and the words are inappropriate.

I feel like the more I write later, the worse it gets.

How did you arrange this timeline? If they are the same age as Huo Yuhao, I won't watch it

It's rubbish. I can't stand the first three chapters. It's a lot of nonsense.