With a Zanpakutō, I Am a Natural Disaster in the Ninja World!

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Let's stick with Naruto in the basic game. The upper limit of Death is much lower than that of Naruto, at least at the starting point.

Identified as: 4399 played too much. The first novel is really exciting, I mean the full-time chapter + the pirate chapter. Now that it's shown that there are only two worlds, won't it be enough to write about?

The plot of Bleach is much better than that of Naruto. In fact, you should mainly write the plot of Death. Because. There are almost no novels written about the God of Death that involve growing up with Silver, and Silver is a very popular character in the God of Death. It is also a character that many readers want to see. After all, this is a tragic character and bringing him to life is what many readers have always hoped for.

There is a big gap in the power between Naruto and the Shinigami. I feel like the book will be difficult to write in the middle and later stages.

It's over, I feel so bad. It also mentioned that the protagonist is going to take the Hokage's people to kill the God of Death. I already feel that it's not good enough. These few chapters are not worth the small gold coins. I have to wait a little longer to see if the back catalog is beyond my imagination. 🥲

I can't see the Naruto arc yet. The protagonist of the Death Chapter. The overall feeling is the same. Strength is not ranked high, but he is pretty good at pretending. The information he uses to use Naruto Jutsu against the sky is only at the level of a mid-to-low-level captain. But the protagonist gives people an inexplicable sense of pretentiousness: "Although I am stripped of my pants by the big guys, I am still on an equal footing with the big guys"?

The three comics about Migrant Workers all rely on bloodline

Five shadows seek to add refinement

I don't know what kind of competition this author has in mind. The protagonist Naruto wants to take the hegemony route, but his reputation is like "bloodthirsty, murderous maniac" or something like that? Did he live in the Internet literary world more than ten years ago? At that time, most of the online articles were really mindless and just fun, and bloodthirsty and other things did feel cool, but now these are all protagonists who should be swept into the trash can. Why do you want to fight for something as important as your reputation? He behaves like a middle-aged brat who thinks that all he needs to do is kill, kill, kill.

Mr. Mantou, for the sake of me staying up late at night and typing a lot of words, please write two more chapters. My humble request to you will really bring tears to those who hear it, and they can't bear to look at it. Please🙏.

This book is difficult to evaluate. I feel that the plot distribution is not reasonable. Since it is about two worlds, the two sides should switch from time to time. As a result, it cuts a little bit of Shinigami at the beginning, and then it is all about Naruto. The title of the book is obviously Zanpakutō, and the plot is Reiatsu, but the Zanpakutō does not appear at all in the free chapter... Is this the legendary title fraud?

Writing about the world of death just doesn't work

The ability of this soul-cutting sword really persuades people to retreat, predicting that a wave of books will collapse

I came to see Naruto. Personally, I have no interest in Bleach Pirates. I have basically never watched it.

No, author, please stop writing about battles of wits and just use cheats. The protagonist makes me sick of stupidity.

You really can't touch the Bleach at the starting point. There are many high-quality works of Naruto fans. Most of the Bleach are unfinished eunuchs. Their traffic is not at the same level.

Naruto is completely broken, and he doesn't even know what to write. Uzumaki Kushina and the tailed beast are all separated, so why can't they not die? Only with the help of ten people can this special case of Fake Li survive. Why should he live? Does he also have the power of six paths? Don't follow the settings at all?

The writing of the Bleach stage felt quite problematic, especially the part about Aizen. I don't know whether it was to reflect the urgency of the plot or for some other reason. The author made Aizen directly notice the protagonist at a very early stage in the description. At the same time, in order to reflect the strong character and ability of the original boss, Aizen realized in a short period of time that the protagonist can predict the future, has unknown power beyond the power of death, and has an unclear relationship with the silver around him. So it is known that Aizen's combat power has completely overwhelmed the protagonist at this time, and he has all kinds of interests in the protagonist. Through the mirror, he has controlled some upper-class nobles to have a certain say. With all the buffs filled up, to be honest, if there are additional thoughts, it can be said that the protagonist is bound to die. In this case, he just wrote several confrontations between the protagonist and Aizen? (Mainly reflected in the language) To be honest, I think the protagonist has no counterattack ability at all. Every time he is verbally provoked, he makes me want to laugh. To be honest, he can't even see what makes Aizen jealous, but he can constantly make faces in front of the other party, and even perform clowning that he has a bad relationship with Gin. To be honest, None of this series feels meaningful. To put it bluntly, the huge gap in strength makes it impossible for the protagonist to fight head-on. The series of options that seem to be a battle of wits make people laugh. In short, this plot is full of problems. I don't understand why it should be started from this angle. The second thing is Zanpakutō Hakkake's swastika, which is definitely something that people care about. After all, the title of the book reflects it. Haji's ability is average but not bad. His swastika's ability is just a piece of cake. It's boring and has nothing to do with Haji's liberation language. It has nothing to do with the protagonist's current combat system. Then he created something similar to Aizen's clone. It's really bad.

This protagonist is such a loser. After reading more than 50 chapters, the protagonist has never even read Zanpakutō. I have never been to the Bleach World a few times. I am so overwhelmed by the protagonist that I won't read it anymore.

Chapter 73 has not been read yet. When you raised Aizen to an infinite level, you knew it would not be long before writing.

As expected, I can't continue writing this book, and there were signs of collapse before.

Write about a hunter. The hunter you wrote is really beautiful. You can read the details of the Dark Continent. I want to read it. I love it.

It's not a bad idea to be decisive, it's better than to leave things alone. I suggest you avoid popular science and conspiracy theories when reading this book. After all, the purpose of reading fan fiction is to enjoy it 🙂

, Those who like Death, and those who like Naruto are not satisfied~~~The protagonist's interpretation ability, the clone, makes the protagonist lose the protagonist's aura! ! !

It's okay, some are wonderfully written, some are unsatisfactory, and some are inexplicable. Looking forward to your next work

Sorry, this is my first time to reward a work. I look forward to the update. You cut it, wipe it, are you worthy of me? (Super loud), Geneva, refund your money! (Very loud)

Finally, towards the end, there was quite a lot of foreshadowing for the world of Naruto. There was so much foreshadowing that I was basically waiting for the climax, but ended up taking it right away.

Can you honestly write a full-time hunter?

What is this initial understanding ability? Why don't I understand it?