Konoha: the Darkest Hour of the Ninja World

It's a weed. It can't be written without leaving the original work. Although the setting of leading a Jonin is very attractive, it cannot write any attractive points. For example, there are other gods, no need, and he is still colluding with Danzo. With this system, if he does not engage in the current father-in-law, he is still leading the team. Anyway, there are a lot of small problems and it will not attract people.

It's not dark enough, at best it's just colluding with Danzo

There was something wrong with Namikaze Minato, it was too obvious, he had to at least add the Third Raikage, and then he died in the melee. The writing here is a bit poisonous. Although the protagonist is evil, the performance is that young Ai killed Namikaze Minato in an instant, and everyone can see the problem. If you are going to be the kind of person who is the enemy of the whole world, without any strategy, and crushing you, then just pretend I didn't say anything, the kind that doesn't require you to use your brain, and you'll be done with it all the way.

It's just a fantasy of a bastard Uchiha before he died. It's a bit funny.

Isn't it dark enough? The evil Danzo actually sincerely pushed Uchiha to become the Hokage? I have read so many Naruto fanfics, and this is the first one. The others have mostly controlled Danzo to push himself to become Hokage. After all, Danzo is obsessed with the position of Hokage. .

The setting is good, but the author's writing is not good

This is a work by a primary school student. I've finished talking about it. Who agrees and who opposes it?

Do you want to take photos of Meimei?

There is no need to read this kind of subject matter, it is really too dark to be revealed.

The writing is very good, Namikaze Minato can also say that the death of the shadow is the death of the shadow, and there is no such thing as those authors who can't write without leaving the original work to make all kinds of coincidences to keep the original characters alive.

I finally wrote my own content, deviating from the original work.

Is using Izanagi as a kaleidoscope too perfunctory? Other kaleidoscope abilities are the inner reflection of the Eye-Opener that cannot be learned. Even if the protagonist's Izanagi is reduced and consumed, it is still an ability that others can learn. And other people's Izanagi can change their eyes even if it consumes a lot of money. In the original work, Danzo and a foreigner can do this. But when it comes to the protagonist, he uses a permanent skill slot that damages his own eyes to exchange it for someone else's equipment and consumes a skill. It's such a loss.

Chapter 29: It's impossible for Hiruzen not to support Chen Feng. It goes against the logic of the character to write this way. With the next one or two chapters, I know that this book must be cut.

Author, are you involved in pornography?😠

The system is more like Huang Huang's conquest system, the protagonist has a very split personality and the writing is average.

It can be finished directly without putting it on the shelf. Several ninja wars have been fought in dozens of chapters. Kumogakure has been destroyed. A lot of jinchūriki from the three generations of Minato have died. Konoha has defeated other hidden villages. There is basically nothing to write about.

It doesn't matter if Shrek doesn't write it. May I ask why Ontology Zong Rongguang doesn't write it?

Why not use other gods to control Uchiha Mikoto and the others