A Post-Apocalyptic Life Starting from Daily Information

From the first chapter, there is no sense of immersion. Your protagonist comes across as robot-like. Suddenly activate the system, and then choose one to complete the task. On the way to get the bacteria, I didn't encounter any danger. I got it calmly and ate it directly into my stomach. After this sequence, there is no sense of existential crisis at all. Everything is as it should be, with no ups and downs at all.

Theme. Choose a base. The result was chosen thousands of miles away. Who knows what's going on. I am not familiar with my own city.

This is not an argument, just a personal opinion. I found this setting to be really contradictory. After all, the protagonist is just like playing a game, fighting monsters and upgrading, but in the end he has to run outside some stronghold? , Gold Finger is nothing, it just adds points. In the final analysis, you have to kill monsters, and then swallow those spores to upgrade yourself and become stronger. You have to go to some resort or other. This is not to eat and have nothing to do. This thing shows that it is spreading. If you don't focus on improving your strength, what base will you go to and then start upgrading? Will there be so many resources to upgrade by then? , And I don't know anything about the resort, and even the wild animals are stronger than the protagonist. Maybe they used to deliver food, and the apocalyptic text really seems like those people who have been bombarded by modern information are like fools. Others can control a lot of people with just one gun and several guns, and they can't survive themselves. They have to pay rent and other things. It's even more difficult to survive. Few people think about it. Those who ran away were immediately caught and trapped there. The trapped hundreds of people seemed to be just like the ones who didn't eat. They were very resistant to hunger. They were as if they hadn't eaten for several months. They had nothing to do and didn't go looking for supplies. Moreover, the hundreds of people couldn't understand why the boss of these camps could be suppressed with a pistol. They were so hungry. Can't find a chance to start? This boss doesn't seem to sleep. He keeps an eye on his subordinates 24 hours a day so that they never get a chance.

The new book needs this so much, I beg you all. If you have any shortcomings in poor writing, feel free to tell me, I will accept it with an open mind. Finally, thank you all again QAQ

The Engineering Dog University has too many classes this semester. It starts with 16 classes a week, so the update will be a little later. I suggest you get up tomorrow morning and read it I'm really sorry for everyone. My coding speed is not fast, so I have to waste time and kowtow to everyone (╯╰)

It's okay, but the protagonist's power is useless compared to his strength. In this case, the protagonist is just like the nanny.

The author is really a newbie. After going to get the car parts, he returned to his residence to pack up his companions and asked if he wanted to leave. Pig's Foot said, "Don't worry, wait a minute." I don't know what I'm waiting for. What's the point of waiting😓? Forget it. When I met the second wave of people, they said there was not enough food. Because I was in a hurry and didn't take all the food away😓, so the so-called "packing away" was like this?

I have only seen one of the best articles about the apocalypse so far: Reborn in the apocalypse, winning 30 million in prizes at the beginning. The others are unreadable at all. What are they written? It's just a waste of money.

So far, Zhang Jie has finished reading and the writing is very good. I hope the author will work harder and stop being a eunuch

This is my first time writing a book and I don't understand anything. Please write down your suggestions and shortcomings here. I'll take your advice👀

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Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

I didn't see the poisonous point mentioned in the comment area. It should have been changed and something new is written that is different from other apocalyptic articles.

Calculating the basics, there is nothing serious, some details are not polished well, the main thing is that there is no main line, the plot is a bit messy, the author just writes whatever comes to mind, but the writing power is not enough, it is very dull, and the readers have low expectations. You can try to set up some suspense points or expectations at the end of the chapter. The front can make it easier to follow the data.

This daily information system is useless! Can't increase strength. Pull the crotch