Folklore: I Can Choose the Outcome of the Dice

The style of this work is very interesting, and I still have it fully booked. I won't comment much on the plot setting and direction. Everyone has their own preferences, but there are many aspects that are very difficult to accept, and I really can't complain about it. Let me talk about some common points: 1. The layout of this article is too strange. One sentence is changed to several lines, and the line is changed directly after the comma, and this is not an exception. This is completely inconsistent with the logic of language - there is no way to gasp for breath halfway through every sentence. 2. I really like some of the daily descriptions in this article, which reflect the background settings and the fireworks of life. But there are also a lot of pages that are confusing and too redundant. For example, there are too many idle strokes about the daily interactions between the Xin Ming couple. These idle strokes do not reflect the changes in the relationship and the growth of the characters. They just re-characterize the content that has been portrayed over and over again. 3. To put it bluntly, this article almost completely failed in dealing with the official (Civil Affairs Commission), and did not make good preparations when introducing the situation. For example, when Xin Ming publicly announced the secrets of the world and attracted powerful monsters to the world, there was no preparation or proper handling for the army to deal with. There was no emphasis on how important this information was to the safety of the players in the present world, and there was no discussion with the officials (even if they could not directly explain what the secret was, they could probably explain to the officials the importance of the secret and the possible consequences of announcing it). It can be said that the official side has been wiping the protagonist's butt from the beginning to the end (think about how many monsters the protagonist has knowingly attracted into the world, some of which he has not yet solved). The official side wants and wants from the protagonist, but the protagonist group seems to not care about the officialdom. These problems can often be solved with just one or two simple sentences. The result of not solving them is that the vague law enforcement powers (the protagonist group can sometimes be said to replace official law enforcement, but there is almost no explanation) and the protagonist group's vague moral bottom line make people crazy. In general, I personally like the setting, story and fun of this work. But I think the author's grasp of language needs to be strengthened. It feels like a wonderful and interesting story draft has been put together with poor writing skills.

There is actually a heroine, so I respect you by pursuing her first! ! !

It poisoned me to death, and I didn't hesitate to spend a hundred coins to scold it. It can be said that basically everything the protagonist got was useless, and was given to others for free. It was so funny, and none of the supporting characters were likable. The author's explanation for this is that the protagonist has never been poor and is willing to give. But obviously in this game, he is the poorest and poorest, and he still pretends to be wealthy. I don't understand what he did after beating him for a long time. He doesn't want this or that. He finally got a final mission, and the reward promised from the beginning was exchanged for unowned items to give to his teammates. The rhythm is also extremely addictive. He was fighting the boss just now, and the next second he started the dual queue. If it's not a trophy, don't tell me, what's the point of beating the boss halfway? Since you wrote it as a game through reality, you also wrote it in such a casual way. It's hard not to make people feel that everyone in this world is a fool. Furthermore, another piece of evidence is that although time can restore life, he never uses a life just after midnight to restore health. He must wait until ten in the morning. This does not mean that it is more terrifying at night and cannot be opened. Sometimes he waits until night to fight, which makes him lose his popularity. Reading a novel gives people the feeling of losing ten games in a row, and he is invincible.

The author is a newcomer, and it was originally just a self-titled article. The signing of the contract was unintentional. This book is based on the setting of "The Master". If you want to read it as a fan, forget it, because the author is purely a monster... Finally, I look forward to your support! I will strive to complete my debut novel!

I have never seen a word game novel that is complete and complete. It is a word game rather than fantasy in the end. Just like the mysterious recovery, the settings at the beginning are still these settings in the end. The settings at the beginning will not be lost just because the protagonist becomes stronger and the world view expands.

I really don't like the avatar setting. Has the author really considered the horror of someone exactly like you existing in this world?

This subject is difficult to write about, and few people can do it without being a prisoner. Come on

It doesn't matter if there is a female protagonist, after all, the author said that it is okay to have younger brothers and sisters, even if it is a cheat. The protagonist himself has a childhood sweetheart and a boyfriend, the younger brother and sister are there again, there is another couple in the club, and the writing is not good. The main character is supposed to be a scumbag who shows mercy and gets scolded everywhere. You are very dedicated, but you write a bunch of couples and it's like a collection of portraits of men and women in love.

The Eunuch, a book like this, I have never seen a complete one.

Now I see 174. People in the book always start with elbow bumps when communicating with each other. No one touches the shoulder, taps the back, or makes a sound to indicate, just open the elbow! This book may be renamed "Man Su Biography" 😜

I saw 192 before and wanted to read a book. Then today I suddenly saw the title of the book (I can choose the result of the dice). I didn't know which book it was. I clicked on it and realized it. This means that the title of your book is not related to the content... Although the content is very good, it is easy to cause people to abandon the book because of the title and then find that it doesn't matter. You might as well change it to (I can re-determine the result of the dice).

Although this is a trivial article, but... I want to have even a little bit of positive feedback! Okay, the second disease happened again

The lay master's book covers this genre to the best of its ability!

I hope you don't follow the example of secular protagonists, who die violently at every turn.

I quite like the subject matter. But I read the introduction. What do you think of the author's writing style? . . . Based on my 20 years of experience in reading books, I am worried that this book will be outdated. And there is a high probability that it will either be a eunuch, a mess, or a book that will be overused and the setting will be overtaken. I hope the author will work hard. I hope you can slap me in the face

Twelve Heavenly Lords and Ninety-Six Commands 1. Beima Tianzun outside Guanwai The following orders are: Lord of Plagues, Lord of Turbulence 2. The powerful and powerful Heavenly Lord The next commanding officer: Lord Baibing 3. R>7. Save the suffering and hide the secrets of the gods My command is: Lord Pudu 8. There are no taboos in the sky My command is: Ask about the corpse, Lord of the tomb 9. Tianzun in the world of mortals My command is: Lord Wen 10. The Heavenly Lord of Dongxuan Dharma 11. The Heavenly Lord descended from the spirit of witchcraft 12. The Heavenly Lord of Shejihuang City My command is: Lord River God

The Master is such a good book, what a pity. I hope the author will work hard and write well. At the very least, stop being a eunuch.

Is the author setting the difficulty of Novice Village so high to show how awesome the protagonist Goldfinger is?

Relying on divination to ask about good or bad luck, and combining it with folklore stories about gods and ghosts is an okay structure, that is, the author must have enough knowledge and writing power, and it is okay to use plug-ins to change the future results.                                               Don't keep shouting about whether or not you believe in fate, or go against the will of heaven. The essence of divination is the result of asking questions. By the way, you know how some things are handled, and it has nothing to do with numerology.

Have you always kept Hanbao's suit in hand? The classmates who say that the small circle consumes you are not able to trade with you, so you are not ready to sell it and give it away as soon as possible.

Is this the end? You are really learning from the secular master, right?

I've been following it since it was a seedling, and I divided it into two numbers and ordered them all together. It started well, but starting from the Northeast Dragon Vein, it didn't have the same flavor as before. The author is still working very hard on writing, but it is clear that in terms of folklore, it requires a lot of preparation to write well. Hope to continue working hard in the next book.

How many secular gods can be invited to a temple? Is it mentioned in the book?

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