
Douluo: Reincarnated as Fire Linfei, Fantasy Lin Nebula
斗罗:转生火麟飞,幻麟星云
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 611k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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When writing a Douluo fanfic, don't ignore the plot of Black Master and Shrek
But I think this will cause the entire book is not separated from the master, every sentence is related to Shrek, just like the main plot of the entire book is written for the master and Shrek! In addition, if you replace "gang" with "anal", it doesn't matter how many times you write it before, but if it is always the same, and the character's name appears very frequently in the book, it will give people a very uncomfortable feeling.
Don't reduce your combat power
Huo Lingfei had the energy of ten black holes on the second day of his debut. On the seventh day, he faced off against the Nebula boss. His opponent in the debut battle was measured in black holes. Can gods like Douluo defeat the Lion King's soldiers?
Shennong is here
Generally speaking, the writing is very brainless and completely embarrassing. These are not important. The most important thing is that charging starts at the 26th chapter. Do you understand?
How to say it? From my point of view, you misunderstood both "Douluo Dalu" and Super Beast Arms. And you seriously make me doubt your three views.
The writing is pretty good, Black Master Black Shrek is so dark that it's a bit intellectually depressing.
Why do readers read Huo Linfei? You really don't have any skills. If you didn't want to see his talent in cultivation, who would choose him as the male protagonist? It's not Lu Mingfei or Huo Yuhao.
I think Slim Jun should be the twin martial souls. He also has a top sword to cut the Pluto, a bottom sword to cut the Ghost King, and in the middle he holds the Snow Emperor's battle treasure Holy Dao Sword (the same style kitchen knife as Orange Liuxiang).
There are two characteristics of a truly strong man: 1. Don't hit women 2. Make no distinction between men and women.
The writing of Huo Linfei makes people feel very brainless and selfish.
Is there any novel that doesn't deliberately slander Tang San and the master, but behaves openly and openly and tramples them underfoot? Haven is out of date, and this trick of dividing Shrek's internal forces to weaken the Seven Devils doesn't feel good at all.
Huo Linfei's character creation is inconsistent with the original work
Shennong is dead
The title of the book is Typical Studio AI Flowchart. The content and plot are exactly the same. It is a new book with a different name but a different vest.
Last time I saw Feng Yao reincarnated into the Star Luo Empire. To be honest, I felt that Feng Yao was still able to get along in this world. After all, he could just find someone to fight with.
Dry rack dry rack, quick dry rack
When will the fight begin? The Super Beast Arms are either fighting or on the way to fight. You wrote that the original Huo Linfei is still developing. Does Huo Linfei need to develop? You can become stronger just by fighting, but where did the extra energy go? Compared with supernatural energy, soul power is more useful than supernatural energy. Huo Linfei is also a super strong man who has been reincarnated, so why not all the supernatural energy has been reincarnated?
The protagonist's IQ is about the same as Feng Yao 🙂
Does the author have an outline?
What is the main plot? The protagonist has traveled through time and should go back to fight the Ghost King. Becoming a god in Douluo does not feel as strong as increasing the energy of a black hole.
It really makes me sicker the more I look at it.
The benevolent are invincible, these words are synonymous with the core character of Super Beast Team. Especially Shou Shoujun and Huo Linfei, these two people are determined and are true three good young people. They have justice in their hearts and never give up. At the same time, they are also perfect heroes who are truly selfless. What is that in your book? Oops! ! You can really write a book about any kind of garbage!
The most annoying name is the weird one. The name is really ugly, and the character of the protagonist is also very retro. He smells like scum.
Is it a bit too much to take someone who can penetrate the universe in seven days as the protagonist of Douluo?
? ? How many black holes does the fire scale fly for seven days?
Things have changed since I was little fat. Can't say what's wrong with it. I just feel like the style has changed. Although it's a little more fun, a lot of the fun is very deliberate, just having fun for the sake of having fun. It was interesting at first, but after a few pictures I got tired of it. After seeing sixty pictures, I didn't want to read anymore.
Why don't you write it? I think it's pretty good?
Tang Yuehua disappeared without even knowing how to die?
After reading a little bit about the early stage, I felt very good. At first, I felt that Hong Honghuo didn't like the protagonist's character. But after seeing the author's description of Xiao Wu and other characters, I felt that it was very consistent with the original work. The more I read, the better.
Don't write Douluo around Shrek. You wander around the world, and your ability to organize the plot is not good. You just do black for the sake of being black. Then some Nian Jun comes. To be honest, this is a failure. The plot is a mess. I really can't stand it anymore, so I gave up.
Were you reincarnated or were you killed by Huo Linfei?
Um, it doesn't feel like I'm reincarnated, but that I've been transported through time. I feel like a puppet, with no self.
What kind of author can really write what kind of protagonist?