From Undercover in Konoha to Becoming the Hokage Myself!

After reading just a few chapters, I can tell that the author's writing style is sophisticated. Not like a newcomer. However, I have a question. The author has created so many original female characters, so why do he still write fan fiction? At the end of the writing, the protagonist is surrounded by original female characters, and none of them are the original female characters! Then write about fellow Maoists? It's time to open a new original book!

The description shows that Minato Namikaze has super reflexes, has bullet time-like observation reactions, and is invincible in physical fitness. The two of them are evenly matched, but they can withstand the acceleration of the protagonist. Although it is wonderful, Minato himself is a squishy assassin. When his own advantages are suppressed, he is basically an ordinary ninja. How can I do so many things? . .

If Tsunade really wants to become the heroine, this book will become a stallion novel in the future. Two original works are enough, no more will be difficult to grasp.

It has been a little bit obvious since Danzo. He can also create a memory clone to squeeze out Yamato's role. He also forced Black Zetsu to take Uchiha Hikari away, and then let go of the three big wooden swordsmen. He couldn't even catch the Black Zetsu behind him, and even Nagato didn't kill him. It was too deliberate. It was too deliberate to strengthen the opponent. If Black Zetsu could run so well in the original novel, he wouldn't have been caught by Naruto and sealed with his mother. Borrowed from the alien. It is more reasonable for people to come and instigate a filial son to rebel. After all, for Kaguya, the threat to the family is much greater than that of the natives. Then there is a certain incombustible object and the author. The alliance of shells and barrel people has become active. There is no indication whether the Six Path brothers are asleep or not. Several other villages are not prepared to cooperate with an alien. The protagonist Fang is lazy and the hostile parties are united. To summarize, the writing is okay and looks good, but I don't know if it's a problem with the accelerated world line. The jump in combat power is too large. Writing Boruto's boss at a time when Shippuden isn't even available. It doesn't have the sense of satisfaction that the protagonist is truly invincible in the world, nor does the protagonist have a sense of accomplishment through his own training (it relies too much on the system). The most worrying thing is what will happen after the battle power surges too fast. Is there still a role for Naru Sa Madara? If a Naruto fanfic were to miss this part, it would have much less flavor.

Personally, I feel that the author should write less about political struggles, because these days everyone is arguing about politics too much. Unless the author is of a very high level, no matter how he writes, it will make people from different political factions unhappy. Emotional scenes and action scenes can be more intense, especially action scenes. There should be no Naruto fan series serialized more than this one.

There are too many original characters. They don't look like Naruto, but like second-rate Japanese comics.

To be honest, the plot of the Hokage's internal turmoil after killing the Raikage is a bit draggy. A few clowns are dragging their feet and causing trouble for a while, which looks disgusting. The protagonist has completely given up on the prophetic advantage of time travel, and does not collect Shennong, Tailed Beasts, and various ninja world things in advance. It all depends on the broken system. Otherwise, why do you hate the flow of the system? The author will not study the plot of Naruto and the foreshadowing of various theatrical versions, relying solely on the above stuff to make the plot watery.

It's a bit weird, that is, the protagonist always appears at the critical moment, and someone is about to die in the next second. Although this is more expressive, it is repeated too many times, which makes it a bit aesthetically fatigued 🙂 Theoretically, the protagonist is extremely fast and can reach the battlefield in less than a second. The enemy has to completely defeat him, and the protagonist rushes to the rescue.

Let me ask a question. Why is Boruto being scolded? One of the important reasons is that the protagonist of the previous work was overstepped. Readers are emotional and cannot accept it. Therefore, the plot of Boruto must be written steadily. The author must control it well as it directly crosses the big timeline.

I don't understand why everyone likes to make Tsunade the heroine. In the original novel, she is a grumpy old woman 😅