Under the Ice and Fire Peak

There are no broken sentences, symbols, confusing dialogues, confusing descriptions, and repeated paragraphs. Is this really a normal book? 😐 The setting is interesting, but the writing is unreadable.

A state that normal people cannot reach when speaking. Paragraph divisions are missing. Confusing words and sentences. If you don't read it yourself after you finish writing it, and whether it reads smoothly or not, and whether there are any flaws, then your book will definitely not last long.

After reading it, there are a lot of typos. Author, please check after typing. I hope the heroine is a dragon mother and takes the holy marriage route instead of Arianne, who is a shabby shoe and hates rotten crotch. Vote for monthly support. 🥰

I will be here to help with the new Game of Thrones book

What does this say? Don't tell the truth

. . . Brother, your introduction is short of words! What we are saying is that if you want to eat this bowl of rice, you can be a little more serious about it. You are not saying that you will succeed casually. You need to have a better attitude.

This is the worst written game in Game of Thrones, even the words are poorly written.

The writing ideas are okay, but the sentences are not smooth in every chapter, which is really difficult to deal with.

Don't always dream about dragons. Just have a few dragons. If you get into trouble, the book will be useless. Just farm hard and wait for a few dragons to grow up.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is so uncomfortable to read.

Wouldn't Qidian's writer's assistant help identify typos? When I opened the comment area, they were all complaining about punctuation, sentence fragmentation, and typos...

Take a good look at this sentence yourself to see if it makes sense.

I can't even write the dialogue, so I can't read it.

Check out another Long Er Ge novel, I hope the heroine Long Ma will have a sacred union (dog head🐶)

Come on, being able to pick up a pen and write is better than most people. It doesn't matter if you're not good at writing, you can also train yourself.

Can't you revise it after you finish writing it?

Everything is messy, just forget it if you don't want to write it

Is this book good? Who is the protagonist?

The writing is messy and the plot is a complete mess.

Thanks

A dragon is only a rider. If there are so many dragons waiting to be snatched by other dragon species, it will be another dragon standing by then.

Come on, I hope the author will check for many errors after writing.

Why don't the author feed each paragraph to the AI ​​to change the punctuation and sentence breaks😅