Hear the Dao Once, Shed the Corpse and Ascend to Immortality

Although I can't write books, even if we take a step back, can't an author release 100 chapters at a time? Some people might say this is unreasonable, but I've already said I can't write books.

The first, second, and third ranks are familiar, but they belong to the martial arts system. The fundamental physical attributes of a martial artist include: musculoskeletal strength, nerve reflex speed, limb coordination, and the function of internal organs such as the heart and lungs. For an ordinary person to become a martial artist, they need to achieve two things.

Please, please read my new book! I'll do anything for you.

A brief review of the first twenty chapters: The male protagonist gets caught up in a fight between martial artists. The limiter between life and death was broken, and the origin was awakened. Although the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception were not activated, a mage was created. The "magic" flowing from the Root was accepted: the Taiyin Refinement Corpse Dissection Chapter.

You've spent too much effort building a massive cultivation system, yet you're unwilling to let it remain hidden behind the story as background, resulting in an excessive amount of text describing the protagonist's cultivation path. This creates a problem: you're using the protagonist to explain your established cultivation system rather than writing the story.

I'll continue reading; hopefully, the author can manage the power scaling well this time, and not find the enemy's strength insufficient to withstand the upgrades. (Thus, I'll start using mystical descriptions, like the previously mystical Memory Hunter.)

The premise is exciting, but if the premise outweighs the story, it's just a waste of space. You've told most of the story, raised so many levels, achieved so much, but looking back, you're still fighting the same old enemies. It's like spending three days and three nights completing a questline, collecting seventy-eight rewards, only to find yourself still struggling against monsters in the…

The author has many ideas in mind, but is unable to present them well. It lacks that gentle, narrative feel. Storytelling isn't about presenting a premise; the premise must serve the plot so that the audience can accept the premise while remembering the story.

At first glance, your synopsis and title make it seem like a classic fantasy novel about corpse dissolution, but then it turns out to be about martial arts—quite a discrepancy.

Your book is a bit ridiculous. Ten or so chapters in, and you haven't even given any background information, like what kind of world it is. It just says it's a world of martial arts and that's it. It's all a mess.