Immortality Starts with a Penny Killer

You can read this book. A man has to find a wife. There is no need for multiple female protagonists, just one is enough. Having friends of the opposite sex is what life is and only then is the novel colorful.

The writing is OK, but after reading seven or eight chapters, I didn't see the main plot. The protagonist does things without strong purpose.

In fact, killing cannot solve the problem. If you kill one person, a second person will continue to be a bitch. The world is inherently chaotic. The killer must first save himself, and then take money to kill people. The killer must not have feelings. There is nothing wrong with being kind and righteous. It is recommended to wear a hood when killing someone to avoid being exposed.

The writing in the dozens of chapters is good, but the plot is very cliche, with all kinds of deliberate conflicts. The first twenty or thirty chapters are just a slut, and they just create conflicts in the plot, so you can just read it if you are bored.

Generally speaking, it's okay, but the writing style is a little bit youthful, the plot is a bit cliche, and the writing style is a bit like an old ghost from ten years ago reincarnated in the dirty land. It may also be an extraterrestrial demon who wants to achieve enlightenment. You can read it to kill time.

Is this the trumpet of that great god? The writing is really good. I haven't read anything yet. The pace is really fast and interlocking. It's really good.

When I saw the fight against Luo Rong, I felt like I won inexplicably. At first, the protagonist was repelled by him with a slap of his sword. Later, Luo Rong's battle with the protagonist was made easy. It felt like a joke. However, Luo Rong did not let down his guard against the protagonist's arrogance. As a result, he was killed without a flying sword?

I feel like it will be a sad story, 😞

It doesn't look like a newbie. Which old eunuch left the palace?

A single heroine is best, without a heroine it's like being a eunuch

All ordered, update soon, love to read 🙂

Come on, author, monthly tickets have been supported 🤓

There is no need for a heroine, but there must also be a confidante. Otherwise, the protagonist is so powerful and not so ugly that it would be inconsistent with reality and logic for no woman to have a crush on him. Gu Long's prodigal protagonists all have ambiguous partners.

It can be seen that the author is very careful and the details are well handled. Although the story is a bit deliberate, it is still good.

There has been no update for several days! Could it be that we need eunuchs again? 😅 Could it be that your good book is ready to be fattened up and we will see the results now that it will not be updated!

Is it imitating "Confident"? It's quite difficult without a system. Enemies with a hundred people are the limit. Enemies with a thousand people are either immortals or fantasy.

Some people say that time travel and rebirth is also a kind of cheat. I think it is more like a different kind of reincarnation, that is, the range of reincarnation is very large. They say that reading novels gives you a sense of immersion. Fortunately, I usually read them as stories, and I don't hate those cheats. I also like to read them. But after reading too much, I wonder, if those cheats are put aside, can the protagonist still succeed, just like when I played Black Monkey If you are stuck in Ghost, there is no need to play the game if you just want to experience the plot. If you just want to play the game, can you have fun with cheating? You and I both understand that without cheats, we still can't beat it. So we need to practice more. Only when we can beat the game with our own true strength will we be happy. I think the same is true for novels. Without the help of cheats, it all depends on the ability of the protagonist. Isn't this exciting?

Although many places are handled very immaturely at the beginning, the "qi" or atmosphere is really good and attractive, and it is also innovative at the starting point. What's behind? After reading the author's speech in the comment area, it can be seen that the author has ideas about the protagonist's character. The protagonist's personality + the one-penny killer make the article very attractive. What next? Then you will write along this line? ! I know that you wrote Qingyangzi to let the protagonist get involved in spiritual practice, but brother, the blood-eating disciples who strayed into the devil's path and became their masters are eight hundred years out of date, not to mention the outdated level setting and spiritual roots. Once the spiritual roots come out, they can't hold on, completely destroying the chivalrous atmosphere you created before, and slipping away to the underworld to cultivate immortals. Brother, the competitiveness and selling point of your book is obviously the chivalrous and quaint sense, okay? The latter part of the escort mission was completely messed up. The plot of Qingyangzi cut off the previous plot lines with a strong sense of rupture, and also destroyed the atmosphere. If you want the protagonist to get involved in spiritual practice, to be honest, it is better to let Luo (that illusion boy) be a rebel from the Sword Sect. After the two of them lost, they were discovered by the people who came from the Sword Sect. They took a fancy to the protagonist's talent and wanted to take him in, but the protagonist's fate has not been resolved. There were too many people, so I temporarily taught him the Dharma and asked him to practice by himself. He agreed on a time to go up the mountain to check his homework, and then wrapped up the plot of the White Lotus Girl and rushed home just in time to pick up the plot of the old man. In this way, you can still write down the point of "a penny killer" Can you understand that the underworld sect does not match the protagonist's character you created and the atmosphere of the eternal furnace of grudges and grievances? The character of the protagonist is suitable for people from the same sect who have similar temperaments, so that they can write moral stories and heart-touching plots and interactions No matter how bad you write Qingyangzi, it would be better than now if there is a young apprentice from the Sword Sect who comes to eliminate demons but ends up falling over. Even if you need Qingyangzi's skills, asking the protagonist to take on the task and practice to save Tang or anything else will be better than now! What is your selling point and competitiveness, the attractive atmosphere of this book, and what makes it unique? Author, do you know (crazy) Forget about writing clichés and copy, and put clichés so early and for so long! ! ! What are you trying to draw for such a long time? ? You wouldn't use the gimmick of a penny killer to trick people into killing them and burying them, right? Huh... I'm a little excited to finally find a book that I think is good (limited to the beginning). Please forgive me for any offense, but I hope the author will seriously consider these issues.

Damn, these people are so easy to take advantage of every time. They cut their throats with a knife. This is not gratification, this is anger.

She also said she should take care of her more, but ended up having it cut off immediately. I was speechless.

The writing is quite good, and the daily guide seems to be quite big.

Good looking, love to read, more updates, monthly pass

It is very similar to a novel called "The Sword of Swordsman". It has the flavor of martial arts. It is much better than many people who boast about martial arts and say that the protagonist works harder and the result depends on the system bonus. The story is very touching and it is very passionate to watch.

Interesting, it reminds me of the time I read Kyushu Chronicles ten years ago

This cover is nice, come in and take a look

It's rare. There are very few good books like Qidian now.

I'll keep it up and finish the book 🥵

After taking care of it, I forgot about it, but found out that the eunuch was there.