The Devil Within

Each one is more novel and abstract than the other, and I couldn't read more than a few of them. The key is that the author's writing is pretty good.

When I looked at the shark, I thought it was the prison shark resurrecting his fifth life, but when I looked at the comment section, I saw it was Aoi, I didn't recognize him.

The book was pretty good at the beginning, and it was quite interesting to watch the Brave Squad. I also thought that this part would be the core of the book and sold it. But for some reason, after it was put on the shelves, the author began to describe a group of unknown new characters at length, especially the free female teacher... No, author, take a look at what you wrote. Do you think what you wrote is interesting?

Familiar book title, familiar author. Resurrection, midnight sunflower drops on your forehead

The beginning of this book relies on the male protagonist teasing Rachel and Laila's emotions to attract readers, so the readers who are attracted actually position the book as more of a romance novel. What attracts readers is the strategy operations of the girl and the male protagonist. But I won't talk about the offline story of the brave warrior that was just released. Some people have criticized it before, and I only watched it in one sitting, so I don't feel much about it yet. But in the recent brave teammate selection chapter, seeing the return of the brave Laila, readers are looking forward to the rhythm of picking up girls at the beginning of the return, as well as the attractive event of the first generation of brave recovery, but why did they turn around and write about Lozoren? I can understand that Lozoren is a pivotal character in the setting. He is also related to the revival of the first generation of heroes and the force of the Imperial Vanguard. However, in the previous description, he did not arouse much expectations from readers. Judging from the previous descriptions, Malinas, who is difficult to see through, is more mysterious. Readers position Lozoren more as a tool for the male protagonist to find the first generation. Now, Lozoren is suddenly added to the drama, especially when the war with the primitive church is about to break out. Inserting a description of Lozoren will only make the plot very dragging. As for the scene of awakening Isabella, first of all, Isabella actually lacked highlights before this. It is actually a bit abrupt for the male protagonist to suddenly come to provide psychological enlightenment when the charm of the character is not enough. Secondly, to deal with this kind of drama where the old veteran is actually powerless to point his finger at others, it is better to let Isabella see the hope of defeating the Original Church in the fight with the Original Church, arouse Isabella's hatred of the Original Church, and thus awaken her ambition. Because this book is ultimately a story about breaking the endless cycle of destiny such as the hero fighting the devil, there is no need to overly support things like destiny and prophecy. When you later describe the awakened Isabella who made a great contribution in overthrowing the original church, writing Isabella is more important than Lozoren. Excellence has more charisma. At this time, we talked about the prophecy of the veteran, and said that the prophecy of the veteran may be wrong, or maybe they just understood it wrong, but it doesn't matter, because Isabella has proven herself. It is better than the current situation of using the veteran to point out the wrong person to motivate Isabella, because it is too stiff. Finally, Shakui has already written it this way, and it is unrealistic to make major changes. What I hope is that Shakui can grasp the key points in the future, not draw too much ink on a person who does not bring good feelings or expectations in the readers' hearts, and write about things that attract more attention from readers (such as the popular Shura Field, and competitions with girls dressed up). Even if you really have to portray those characters who are not expected, it is best to define these chapters that depict plot tools as transitional chapters, and try to publish them in one breath, so as not to make readers feel that they are transitioning for several days without any expected plot.

Can anyone tell me where the heroes went after it was released? Am I here to see this? The more the author writes, the more excited he becomes, and the story becomes more and more crooked 😥

Bushgomen? Xiao Han reluctantly accepted the one-man show, and it was fine to change the description of a few new supporting characters, but now it is really difficult for me to handle the same role as Han and the supporting characters. A little sword ghost can survive for so long. In the future, there will be a shocking battle between the two sides for sixty or seventy chapters, until the great avenue is wiped out? —This book is called "The Devil Within". This is a famous scene, this is Sword Demon Alan, this is Gu Warlock, and this is Monica, all three of them are amazingly powerful. —What about the protagonist and the devil? Who is it? —It's Han Solo. —What about Han Solo? —Han Solo is not here, he is watching a show. BYD is just like this in one day, there is too much foreshadowing, and the rhythm cannot be said to be chaotic, it can only be said to be non-existent. . . As important female characters that attract readers, all are offline. The protagonist is also playing house with a bunch of unrelated people and diving in her own novice copy. An enemy who is destined to be four has so much water. It's really maximizing benefits, right? Did the author write for 5 million words? 😒😰😅 From now on, I will try my best to come here every day to read. Exercising in the water can exercise the whole body and strengthen the body.

Before release: The Demon King, "Look how I disrupt the relationship between the Brave Team" After the release: The Demon King, "The Brave Team, what is the Brave Team? I am the Demon King here" The Brave Team has just disappeared and is here A group of supporting NPCs who didn't know why started to watch the protagonist show off. I don't know if the author was too excited. If so, he changed your introduction and title, so as not to let some readers who don't know the truth fall into the trap and see your show-off of Long Aotian

Meaningless, plot Douban score 2.1

Cut? If this book is cut, I will personally block this author. Who knows if your new book will be cut? With all due respect, results need to be improved step by step, and fans need to be accumulated slowly. Because if the new book does not get good grades, it will be cut off. How can you improve your writing skills? Every book only ends here, so how do you get the ability to write the subsequent content well? I think each book is only written until it is on the shelves, right? The more you cut, the less support you get from readers. The less support you get from readers, the more ruthless you become when you cut books. It's an endless cycle, right? Moreover, the performance has a lot to do with updates. There are few updates and frequent interruptions. Unless you are a great person, who would be in such a mood to support it? Don't get this disease if you don't have the ability

I am a player who has cleared the game, just follow the normal path, and the protagonist does not have any evil path to speed up. Rachel in Chapter 14 is really hard to describe. Why did she stay, adding variables, and the writing is so awkward. I have not known each other for three days, but the warmth from the protagonist cheers my heart.

I am too self-satisfied. I am called the devil and write as a clown. I am always passively fucked. . Nothing but scheming goals

It's a waste of money, but it makes me feel better when I think that there are 1,040 people more than me.

I'm planning to block this author. It would be very boring to write one eunuch and one eunuch, and then change the account and continue to be eunuch.

The last few chapters have been really abstract. I've finished losing all my strength. I'm having trouble with a little monster.

As in the title, when are you going to write about pulling? Someone give me a kick.

The first book is about eunuchs. It's a good start.

In line with my stereotype of the author, I look forward to the birth of new vests

Fortunately, I didn't subscribe. This author is shameless. This is the eunuch's first book. It fits my stereotype of Shakui. In the past, hedgehog coins were used as burning incense.

I completely ran away and my account has been canceled.

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There seems to be a new book