Immortality Martial Arts: Start with the Sims

If you want to write a novel, you should do less craft work. This amnesia is quite serious. There are too many inconsistencies.

The writing in this book is messy, and there is a plot in the simulation, which says that relying on the strength of the fourth level to support the opponent, let the man named Jiang come over. In the next paragraph, it turns out that the protagonist only has level five strength. I forgot which chapter, and the simulation always says that the protagonist is at the fifth level, and I saw it three times. The preface does not match the postscript. There is also this woman named Lin Qingbai. Is it necessary to write about it? It feels like a sick plot. And the plot of the monster eating people is even more ridiculous. A sixth-grade tiger demon casually ate a whole county of people. And they are eaten one by one.

My original simulator reward was a realm, a skill, and an item in the simulation, but I found that this didn't work, so I simply changed it to the current one. Although I don't think anyone will read it, I still explain it. This new book has not moved at all since it was put into storage. I feel like I am disappointed. But as a newcomer, I'd better start with perfect attendance.

I didn't want to read the third chapter when I saw that the realm was wrong. When did the 9th grade become the 8th grade?