Eavesdropping on Lingzhi's Thoughts, the Mortal Woman Ascended!

There are two big words "bland" in the whole book. There are no ups and downs, no excitement, and even some plots I feel are a bit childish, such as the inner demon of Yuan Ying, who is like quarreling with elementary school students. However, the overall shortcomings are not concealed. It is a good book, but the writing style needs to be strengthened. I hope the author can go further, come on

Su Qingwu

Good-looking but too thin

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Liushuiwen. In addition, novels also like to be written according to standard documents. So-and-so is as follows, one, two, three, etc., Which looks very abrupt.

I'll send you a ticket to cheer up. It looks good.

The few female protagonists who studied fairy tales that I chased were all fooled, and they were a little afraid to chase the female protagonists who studied fairy tales. Come on, author, and hold on!

Looks good, looks good, supports it!

Come on and show your heart

After reading the first few chapters, I really liked the protagonist's reaction when he got the stone bottle and his test of the weapon-refining sister. The character suddenly stood up and was very logical. The settings are also interspersed in the article very naturally and unintentionally, and the introduction is very complete, at least there is no doubt when reading the content at that time.

Come on