Reborn: Turning My Life Around by Finding Hidden Treasures

Personal suggestion: The protagonist is too simple. Unlike a reborn person, his enemies have not been caught, so he must be on guard at all times. Chen Shaojie, who has military value, does not take him with him. He wanders outside by himself, casually gets into a black car in a border city, and drinks water given by strangers, without any precautions. . . It's already 2024. How many movies of this type have been made about electronic fraud, waistbands, organ trafficking, etc. Does the author dare to make the protagonist's IQ normal?

The content is okay, but the main character doesn't look like he's in his thirties

Since it is a system flow, I mostly write around this. In the end, it becomes increasingly difficult to understand where the author's focus is. I feel that there are too many clues in the back, and each one is just a little bit superficial. In addition, the protagonist's ability to handle crises is a bit poor, and the exposed pattern and courage are not enough to carry the ability and power he possesses.

Can you not write about plots that you don't quite understand? ? Goldfinger is so bad, why do we have to arrange a battle of wits and courage between some desperadoes? ? All the bad guys go in, and everyone related to the pig's feet goes home to find their own mothers! ! ! People looking for pig's trotters to buy things always increase the price, and the sellers don't know how to deal with the goods. Do pig's trotters have a big face? The pig's trotters killed someone. In self-defense, he came out within an hour of entering the station? ? Is it opened at your home?

This book was released late. It was probably about the same as it was when it was released ten years ago.

The emotional drama is too childish and has no rebirth experience at all. It might be better to remove this and focus on making money.

Idol drama? Forcibly create misunderstanding

Go check out the antique dealer's treasure hunt! Excellent articles on treasure hunting and appraisal

If you want to chase a girl, if you have some misunderstandings, just find a random girl to play your girlfriend, and the protagonist of Haxiang will be reborn.

Sure enough, the city must be enjoyed by the four illusory gods.