Siheyuan: Marry Qin Huairu, Change the Plot and Become Stronger

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When I was a child, middle-aged women were the main force in the quarrels and scoldings. I have never heard of an old man or an old lady speaking out. If you can't make money, you don't have a strong voice in your own home, and you still expect others to respect you? On TV, the courtyard houses rely on the old and sell the old. I have never seen it in reality.

The author is so detailed that I almost have no patience to read on. If you can sneak out of this courtyard, entering and leaving the army will be like entering a deserted land.

I just want to say that if there is Chen Xueru, who needs Qin Huairua? I really don't know what the authors are thinking.

Recently, the protagonist has almost been played like a fool, being used as a gun to poke holes everywhere... It's interesting for a cook to get involved in all that, does the protagonist still want to climb up →_→

I don't know why everyone writes novels about wild boars. Do you really think wild boars are delicious? Wild boar is very slutty and its meat is very woody and has no fat. Only pig belly can be used as medicine to treat stomach problems, and pig trotters can cure rheumatism. People who don't know how to cook pig trotters still can't bite them after cooking them for a whole day.

If you change the plot, you will become stronger. In the middle of the night, the pig's feet turned all the people in the original courtyard into eunuchs and directly ascended on the spot.

The protagonist insists on opening a shop to sell space vegetables. I just can't understand it. Does this have to be earned? Even though he knows the importance of ingredients in the future, he still insists on turning himself into a small business owner. The protagonist is not short of money.

It's so ink, I wish I could analyze it sentence by sentence. A courtyard is written by you and is similar to a spy war. If you want twists and turns, use the plot. Don't explain it sentence by sentence, which will affect the sense of immersion and interrupt the plot. I wrote more than 50 chapters in one paragraph, but the plug-ins were not explained clearly. It was really boring to just read various narrations.

There are ten chapters for family separation and more than thirty chapters for marriage, 🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚

It seemed okay at first, but after chapter 100 I lost my interest in it. Second uncle wants to expand his breakfast shop, buy a stake in his breakfast shop, buy his own shop, and sell off-season vegetables and fruits in his own shop? What a fucking talent! How dare you do this in 1951? I can understand if you are not a time traveler, but don't you, a time traveler, know the following policies? It's a public-private partnership, and can we easily get out-of-season vegetables and fruits? The canteens of the steel rolling mills have begun to use meal tickets to pay for meals. The distance ticket rationing system is also an immediate matter, and there is also the issue of ingredient demarcation. My subsequent subscriptions have been wasted.

If it starts in 61, it would be okay to get a pig's trotters wedding certificate and not have a banquet or wedding. But if you marry a wife in May 1st and don't have a wedding? Tumo Xingzi can drown you.

What would you do if a normal person gave you some space? Think about it for yourselves. The author talked about the filial piety throughout the whole process. He is still a person who has traveled through the past. The initial primitive accumulation must be done immediately. The author basically goes against the logic of human nature by writing this.

The pace of the article is too slow, which affects the reading experience. For example, the protagonist is preparing to intercept Hu Qin Huairu. After more than ten chapters, the progress is that today he met Qin Huairu.

It is recommended that the author delete the previous part of the conversation between Qin Huairu and the protagonist, it is too awkward. Qin Huairu, an 18-year-old rural person who has not finished junior high school, cannot speak those advanced vocabulary. What a mess of "planning". It is recommended to change it to a little more "rustic" to get the right taste.

Any system that doesn't strengthen the body is garbage and I can't stand it anymore.

The other plots and characters are well written and there are no idiots. Maybe some places are a little stiff which is okay, but when it comes to writing emotional scenes, why does it become a novice novel? Qin, who came from the countryside at the age of 18, wrote it like a white lotus. I really don't know how to write about it. Think about Qin's cousin. She is also 18 years old and she knows everything, but she seems to have done a lot of stupid things because she has no knowledge, but she can't do anything to change her life.

What you wrote is so outrageous, do you know what anti-Soviet means? Once the report is made, it will be subject to a labor investigation for at least eight years.

Your salary unit of 10,000 seems too awkward. Why don't you just write yuan or yuan that normal people can understand at a glance? Is it possible that you wrote the Three Kingdoms novel in classical Chinese?

Is the author a threshing glacier? But the writing tone doesn't feel like it. . "Ah" is rarely used. This silly writing is basically "you guys are going too" and "he is there too"

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I can't stand it any longer. The author knew very little about money in that era, and the description of various expenditures was too confusing.

There are no five-guarantee households in cities

You can write 7 chapters after a quarrel, you are awesome...

I haven't read it yet, but I just want to ask, does the author accept bad reviews?

Finished this book and looking forward to the new book!

Do you get 10,000 hell coins if you win the bet?

The family's shortcomings are described as Machiavellian and resourceful. This is outrageous. What a crappy life it is. The protagonist is Mrs. Huang, Huang Jianjun is just a pawn 🙂

You should read this book carefully, it is really well written 👍👍👍

He wakes up and holds the power of the world, but he lies drunk on the knees of a beautiful woman. Counting romantic figures, but also looking at the present. Beauty, beautiful young woman, beautiful mature woman, wife's favorite, Jian'an style, Wei Wu legacy, no taboos, wealth and wealth.

What age group are they watching Siheyuan? Let me report first: I was born in 1977.