Under One Person: Hetu Luoshu

With Hetu and Luoshu, it's enough to follow the Bagua. Why bother with the Golden Light Curse and Thunder Method?

Chapter 3: You really won't change it? They say there are three golden chapters. It's no wonder that your poisonous points can attract readers. The person in charge of the Luzhong Middle School said something pornographically, and after finishing the conversation, he almost forgot that it was a whisper in the alien world and would be heard... Isn't this taking off his pants and farting? What a waste! Just like the recognized poisonous point in martial arts novels and fairy tale novels, the transcendent world whispers in a low voice, for fear that others will not hear it... Then it is not explained whether it is a body or a soul that has traveled through time, and how long it has been traveled has not been explained. Finally, there is a person who has watched the anime or comics of Under One Person. After traveling to the world of Under One Person, it is impossible for him to forget that this is a world of aliens. He will always remember in his heart that this is the road from mortals to the extraordinary. How could he forget? It's as ridiculous as forgetting the exercises while practicing.

Brother, please pay attention to how old Ren Fei is. . . . How old is Xu Lao, how old is Xu San and Xu Si, and how old is Ren Fei, who is the same generation as Xu San and Xu Si. . . . You, a young man in his 20s, don't have any respect for a forty-year-old (young and promising) female responsible person of the district. Instead, you think of Huahua. . . You, a person who seems to have sex all the time, or indulges in all the sex, is really almost meaningless, more like a fantasy novel wrapped in a human skin. . .

I don't understand. Hu Jie killed your master and brother, but he didn't use all his strength to let people run away, and he didn't pursue him after he ran away? ? ? Really convinced

In terms of the physical body, there are eight gates of armor, and in magic, there are nine gates of magic. What is missing is the guarantee of the soul. Look forward to it 😁

Chapter 15 made me feel embarrassed and sick after reading it. If my brother doesn't know how to write love scenes and female scenes, we don't have to write them. Just in this chapter, I feel that the male protagonist has no self-awareness. When the bastard becomes angry, the women will come and manage the district. She is not a little girl who has never seen the world. The writing in Chapter 15 is really a bit below the level of your novel If you really don't write these dramas, your novel can be considered good.

Practice practice and become a stallion

The master had just died, but when he saw Ren Fei, he became distraught. This kind of protagonist can't go far under one person. Of course, the author can tease him, but it just looks awkward.

Just after the master died, he dared to lust after the all-round female boss whom he met for the first time, but later on he became innocent and became a vegetarian?

No? Do you basically have to enter the company to get a taste of writing? Brother🙂

If you have such a big Hetu Luoshu in your hand, you will know how to make a fool of yourself. Not to mention Zhoutian Xingdou Formation and Xiantian Bagua, you can also understand Qimen Dunjia. How come you have eight doors and nine doors?

Writing a character like this is not likable at all.

I feel like I'm not interested in applying the golden light spell. I didn't study Luo Shu well, but just followed the golden light, which felt a bit like neglecting the basics and chasing the last.

No, the communication between the characters is too awkward. It doesn't look like normal people communicating, but more like a YY product. It's like the nonsensical and funny communication in anime, it's so embarrassing to watch.

The protagonist's character is obscene but not romantic, and he cultivates his life but not his nature.

The entire text is vulgar and pornographic. This kind of book does not deserve to be on your bookshelf.

Hetu Luoshu developed an eight-door Dunjia? If you can't live, don't force yourself

Hmm... How to put it. It feels like the author's main plot is to pick up girls, and the plot is led by the protagonist's next scumbag female character. A lot of space is wasted on scumbag characters and trying to figure out scumbag characters. It can be regarded as an urban harem novel wearing the skin of "under one person". Slipping away.

What is the relationship between Bamen Dunjia and Hetu Luoshu?

The last few chapters have been quite bad. The more I read the plot with the girl named Gao, the more it smells weird and disgusting 😅

It's well written, but it's just not readable enough. Could you please update it better 🙂

... I'm speechless. I don't even know what the difference is with the original work. Even though I saved 2 people, my ability is to open eight doors and use a warlock method, and the protagonist's stubbornness has not been removed.

Author, why don't you update it yet?

After subscribing, writing about women is too poisonous! It was a good subject, but it was useless.

I only watched the first part and couldn't stand it any longer. I felt like the author wanted to make the protagonist a character like Zhang Chulan. Zhang Chulan was groveling because that was all he could do, and what about the protagonist? Tell me the protagonist's reason for doing this? Is it because he was born to be a dog? Are you born to be humble? What to do, and why? The main character is obvious. I have watched it so far, and there is no reason to do this. Zhang Chulan is liked by the audience because he has a reason to do this. He has no strength, and he has been involved in the turmoil, and he is the center of the turmoil. He can only do this, there is no other reason, and there is no other way to go.

When I saw what Mr. Tian said, he said that the Heavenly Master has taken care of his hard work for half his life. Some people said that letting Mr. Tian die is also a relief. Free your sister. What do those who have received the favor think? What do people who have been favored by Mr. Tian think? What does Heavenly Master think? There is really someone who dares to think so. Heavenly Master slaps him and turns him into a top. I can't guarantee anything else, but I think this is very good, so I will give you full marks for the one you wrote later.